Crucial



NOTHING COMES OUT OF NOWHERE

By

William Kelly

Dedicated to my mother and father.

THE STAGGERING SIMILARITIES between the book for children called

“Travels with Li Po”

and the “Harry Potter” series.

Subject: Travels with Li Po

Date: Mon, 26 Jan 2009 12:13:15 +0000 The Goldsmith Press Ltd. Newbridge,

Co. Kildare

“ This is to say that Mr. William Kelly submitted some chapters of his book, Travels with Li Po, in the early 90s. As we are mainly a Poetry Press, we were unable to publish the book -- but were impressed by its quality.”

Viv Abbott, MA, MPhil.,

Brief Introduction to the Synopsis

Coming here to read this you are likely an intelligent person who wants to know the truth about Harry Potter or a functionary of Rowling’s legal firm assigned to “monitor” every word, movement, change of tense, syntax or whatever I decide to do to my own text so that they can fulfil their divine mission to protect the public money-spinning persona of their valuable charge - J.K. Rowling. Aware as I am that these people are paid and paid well to do what they have to do, and act, for the most part, out of “economic prudence” and the all the rest of it, I cannot say I personally have much respect for any of them considered as a class. “Get a life”, is my first response; and my second, - “do something to leave the world a marginally better place than you found it”.

My book TRAVELS WITH LI PO was written for children to help them out of the morass of a conflicted and frightening world and I have to say that my experience of Schillings and Little, Blair and their supporters suggests to me that none of them appear to have done much to lessen the conflict or ameliorate the fear but seem solely intent on filling their pockets. My views however on such matters are not relevant here nor indeed are my views on the literary merits or lack of them of the Potter series ( even if I know better than to accept it all as the product of single mind ) or, at any rate, the three volumes I have managed to clamber through.

This brief exposition of the similarities between Harry Potter and my own creation, however embarrassing it may be for all concerned including myself, is as short as I can make it because all the factual correspondences cited in it are important. A fuller exposition you will find on the other links below. The literary world is well enough policed by conscientious and learned people who still have some reverence for the craft above and beyond its monetary exchange value; and there is no doubt in my mind that this document will, sooner or later, make its way to their archives as testimony to what, I am convinced, is one of the most blatant, crassest, brutally cynical examples of competitive plagiarism in the entire history of world literature. I place it, in terms of authenticity, alongside the fictitious diaries of Adolf Hitler that not so long ago swindled gullible editors out of a fortune and conned literary ‘experts’ into the bargain. Lastly, a world wherein I am not at liberty, by reason of ‘legal intimidation’ to express these views is one I must work to change rather than live to support. Now, I will leave you to figure it all out for yourself, with my assurance that what you are reading is entirely the truth but, by no means, the whole picture. There are people out there who can place the missing pieces of that together better than I if they would ever find the courage, or had conscience enough, to do so.

SIMILARITIES OF CONTENT

Travels With LiPo

STRUCTURE

1. Main Themes - existential abandonment. A boy who is a sorcerer and doesn't know it but must be trained into the realisation. The human condition and the search for Enlightenment ie, The Philosopher’s Stone and

its immortal gifts.

2. Magical empowerment through self-knowledge.

3. Relationships. Everybody is related to somebody else and these relationships mediate their lives and, in many cases, determine them.

4. Sub-theme - low self-esteem.

5. Sub-theme - living by one’s intelligence

6. Sub-theme - time.

7. Sub-theme - Decisions that shape personal destiny and individual responsibility for them.

8. Sub-theme - madness, dreams and free will.

NB: These themes were established to be amplified later throughout the series.

Harry Potter and the Philosopher’s Stone

STRUCTURE

1. Main Themes - existential abandonment. A boy who is a sorcerer (wizard) and doesn't know it but must be trained into the realisation. The human condition and the search for Enlightenment ie, The Philosopher’s Stone and its immortal gifts.

2. Magical empowerment through self-knowledge.

3. Relationships. Everybody is related to somebody else and these relationships mediate their lives and, in many

cases, determine them.

4. Sub-theme - low self-esteem.

5. Sub-theme - living by one’s intelligence.

6. Sub-theme - time.

7. Sub-theme - Decisions that shape personal destiny and individual responsibility for them.

8. Sub-theme - madness, dreams and free will.

NB: These themes were also amplified throughout the series.

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EXPLANATION: This is important enough to be part of the title of the Harry Potter book. In “...Li Po” it is established as the goal to die for. It is indeed what my hero Owen Muldoon is all about and you would be hard pressed to find a better or more exciting goal for any story appealing to young or old.

P38/39: 'The man who finds The Philosopher's Stone never dies,' said Li Po haughtily. 'The Philospoher's Stone, that's what they call the mystery of things, the answer to the riddle of the universe. Li Po has all power and all wisdom. He can turn lead into gold as well.'

'Gee,' said Owen. 'I wouldn't mind having that trick up my sleeve.'

'Many have tried, earthling. Down through the ages there have been wizards and warlocks. In what you call the Middle Ages they called themselves alche- mists. Before that they were known as The Druids. Li Po learnt his skills in Egypt. He was an

explorer. Still is.'

'Did he tell you the secret?'

'Tell me Li Po. Tell me the secret!' pleaded Owen.

'P36: You're not as stupid as you look, earthling. Li Po was a great magician. He found The Philosopher's Stone.'

'The what?'

'Never mind....... Li Po found the secret of eternal life. I am Li Po, master of myself. I am over two thousand years old. '

P35: 'My master was an ancient Chinese philosopher and a magician.”Does it show?'

'Yes.'

P43: I don't know if it's all a dream and I don't care no more neither.

Don't talk to me about eternal youth or Chinese magicians or anything else for that matter! I am going to sleep......after I say my prayers.

P161: “A stone that makes gold and stops you ever dying!” said

Harry,….Anyone would want it!”

P215:”As for the stone it has been destroyed.”... (Dumbledore) “But that means he and his wife will die, won’t they?”(H P) “They have enough Elixir stored to set their house in order and then, yes, they will die.”

P162: Harry and Ron were still discussing what they would do with a Philosopher’s Stone if they had one. It wasn’t until Ron said he’d buy his own Quidditch team …

P161: The ancient study of alchemy is concerned with making The Philosopher’s Stone, a legandary substance with astonishing powers. The stone will transform any metal into pure gold. It also produces the Elixir of Life. which will make the drinker immortal. (Hermione).

PLOT continued

THE FOREST

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EXPLANATION: The enchanted forest that OM has to go through is to facilitate his first encounter with his real self and his hidden powers. If he calls it a jungle on

occasion it is only to allude to the fact that in all its wildness and hunger it has much to do with himself and the world as it is.

P39: 'Are there wild animals in this jungle Li Po?'

'You bet. Millions of them.'

P35: Often he could discern the shape of animals that came near or heard their presence in the bush. Maybe, I wouldn't even recognize them even if I did see them, he thought. Strange fruit hung from trees all around him and once a huge snake dropped down from a branch right in front of him and scared him half to death.

P41: Creatures stirred in their branches and things moved in the tall grass all around.

P37: And horses too. They like to ride the horses especially at night. Angels taught the horse how to run.

P32: If you are not out of the forest by then you will never get out. ' P34: When you sleep at night make sure you are well covered. Apart from that… you will need all the luck you can get.'

P38: ‘Li Po has all power and all wisdom.’ (Bart)

P35: ‘I've decided to guide you through the forest,' said he. 'Poor Bart didn't like it. But, what's a Puffin without a conscience, eh?'

P27: Au contraire. It's just that this forest here casts a powerful spell over anybody what gets too close to it. If it takes a likin' to ye, you're done for

P34: The deeper he went into the jungle the darker it became, until the foliage became so thick that scarcely any light got through at all. The noises and screams that echoed all around him grated on his nerves and made him fearful.

P95: “The forest’s full of dangerous beasts, everyone knows that.” P182: “The forest?” he repeated…. “ – there’s all sorts of things in there -…”

P185: He walked forward and shook the centaur’s hand.

P183: “It’s not easy ter catch a Unicorn, they’re powerful magical creatures.” (Hagrid)

....

P181: “Well think again boy - it’s into the forest you’re going and I’m much mistaken if you’ll come out in one piece.” (Hagrid).

P183: “There’s nothin’ that lives in the forest that’ll hurt yeh if yer with me or Fang,” said Hagrid.

P184: And into the clearing came - was it a man, or a horse?” P185: At last, he said, “The forest hides many secrets.”

P186: Their ears seemed seemed sharper than usual. Harry’s seemed to be picking up every sigh of the wind, every cracking twig. What was going on? Where were the others?

P186: They walked for nearly half an hour, deeper and deeper into the forest, until the path became almost impossible to follow because the trees were so thick.

MORE similarities of PLOT

EXPLANATION: What is dealt with here are plot significances common to both stories. Sub-themes are dealt with elsewhere in this document.

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TRAVELS WITH LI PO

BULLYING etc.

HARRY POTTER AND THE PHILOSOPHER’S STONE

P37: His face was round and he hated the fact it made him look even younger which gave the bullies in his school one more reason to torture him.

P107. Here it's like a school playground, only a thousand times worse.’ (Li Po).

P103: Fear makes a man lonely. Loneliness makes a man afraid. It's a spiral, a prison. So, he frightens others for the company. Bullies are Jokers.' (Li Po).

P22: The bullies played their games for real, and some- body always suffered, some more, some less. And many, like Owen, suffered badly in a way grown-ups could never understand

P23: Dudley’s gang had been chasing him as usual, ..

P20: Dudley's favourite punchbag was Harry.

P27: Every body knew that Dudley’s gang hated that old

Harry Potter in his baggy old clothes and broken glasses.

P23: Dudley had laughed himself silly at Harry, who spent a sleepless night, imagining school the next day, where he was already laughed at for his baggy clothes and sellotaped glasses.

P47: At school, Harry had no one. Everybody knew that Dudley’s gang hated that old Harry Potter in his baggy old clothes and broken glasses, and nobody liked to disagree with Dudley’s Gang.

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P111: 'It would appear so,' said Owen noting the marble floor of black and white tiles that stretched out before him like an endless chessboard.

'P47: Excuse me, Madam. Where is everybody?' asked

Owen.....

P48: 'Underground. When any of us gets depressed we come up here.'

P64: Thirdly, I am not really a Puffin at all, and so I've got few friends even among Puffins. (Li PO the Master Magician)

P204: They were standing on the edge of a huge

chessboard…..

P51: “Gringotts is hundreds of miles under London, see.”

P213: “….and once I have the elixir of life I will be able to create a body of my own….”(Voldemort).

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P22: For, St Benedict's High, however pretty it might

have looked on the outside, was actually a bullies' haven where the weak and the odd suffered abominably.

P88: Virtue! It's worth its invisible weight in gold fidgets. P33/34: Li Po hopped quickly up to his mirror pretending

not to see his master's disgruntled face. Then, the old man laughed: 'It's not that he's vain, as you suppose,' he whispered. 'That is all an act for your benefit. He knows

a great deal about you.

P29: 'And may I present, gentlemen and unseen presences,....

P47Owen moved on. Once or twice he looked back, not altogether sure if he hadn't been talking to a ghost.

P59: At least that was his first thought. His second was - And I won't be getting rich either.

P568 … P29:. tried not to think how he was going to look on his first day at Stonewall High -....

P50: “Give him five Knuts,..”

P219: I don't think it was an accident he let me find out how the mirror worked."

P86: About twenty ghosts had just streamed through the back wall.

P59: ...and he leant forward eagerly, expecting to see fabulous jewels at the very least - but at first he thought it was empty.

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P56: 'Tut, tut, tut, tut,' went on The Major, 'and double

tut. It is better for your

own sake and for that of the human race at this perni- cious time, when the very

pith and marrow of our civilization and culture is under threat, that you starve.'

P58: 'Tut, tut and treble tut, Sir. Have you no grat…eee… tuuude?'

P62: 'Tut tut,' laughed Li Po, as he soared into the air.

P19: Indifference ruled everywhere. He was alone in the midst of it like a tiny spider in a big bath. The sun sank in a blaze of purple and a cold wind came out of nowhere. That too frightened him.

P114: As the oars hit the water he covered his nose and mouth with his hands to ward off the intolerable pong that rose from the black river.

P102: Snape’s lips curled into a sneer.

“Tut, tut – fame clearly isn’t everything.” P118: Peeves cackled. “Wandering around at mid- night….? Tut, tut, tut….

P37: As night fell, the promised storm blew up around them. Spray from the high waves splattered the walls of the hut and fierce wind rattled the filthy windows……The storm raged more and more fero- ciously as the night went on. Harry couldn’t sleep. He shivered and turned over, trying to get comfortable, his stomach rumbling with hunger.

P206:A disgusting smell filled their nostrils, making both of them pull their robes up over their nose.

P47. Jokers killed most of the young'uns. Laughed for months too when they did it.'

P62: For Jokers games are what life is about. P103: ‘Bullies are Jokers.' (Li Po)

P93: 'That's my job, Sir. I am to virtue what a hog is to truffles. I can see it in the mystical aura. Psychic, you see. If in doubt, I send him to Gotcha.

'Gotcha?'

'The governmental testing laboratory. They have a very advanced machine there. It incorporates a lie detector, a good manners detector, a virginity detector, an emotion detector, compassion detector, libido detector, patriotism detector, a humour detector and so on. It measures virtue to one ten thousandth of a micro- penance. It can detect everything. It can even tell us how many times you have picked your nose in public since birth. “

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P43: ‘A muggle’, said Hagrid. ‘It’s what we call non- magic folk like them. An’ it’s your bad luck you grew up in a family o’ the biggest Muggles I ever laid eyes on.

Filch is at least able to use wizarding devices that have their own innate magic such as the Secrecy Sensor used in Harry Potter and the Half-Blood Prince.



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P63: Bartholomew was a Portuguese alchemist who

voyaged to Peking in search of The Philosopher's Stone. He met Li Po there.'

P110: When they reached the ground floor he was hus- tled down another flight of stairs to the cellars. He heard the sounds of lapping water as they stopped.

A subterranean river flowed at his feet in an echoing bab- ble. A small rowing boat drew alongside through the mist and he was pushed into it

P19: With an almighty crash the sea closed over.

P15: But, the horror was always present that the light swell would become an angry sea,....

P23: The sea, as if in obedience, became softer as if to reassure him.

P116: “If mercy were a physical attainment the Compte would be a total cripple.”

P160: Professor Dumbledore is particularly famous for....and his work on alchemy with his partner Nicolas Flamel.

2942 P84: ....the little boats.... were carried along a dark tunnel, which seemed to be taking them right under- neath the castle,until they reached a kind of under- ground harbor, where they clambered out on to the rocks and pebbles.

P38: Was that the sea, slapping hard on the rock like that? (HP)

P37: The storm raged more and more ferociously as the night went on.

P163: “Longbottom, if brains were gold you’d be poorer than Weasley, and that’s saying something.”

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P127:….there was really no way he could permit him to pursue his mission of world conquest unimpeded.

P17: But, nothing seemed ever to please Jonathan. He was spoilt and always miserable. In the canteen, Jonathan was the only one who dared complain about his dinner, often.

P118: THE NATIONAL ANTHEM OF STRANDEDUSIA He's six foot two. Has eyes of green,

And the strength of fifty lions.

His waist is thin. Commits no sin.

His limbs are concrete pylons.

His word is true. All honour due.

He never will confuse ya.

He's the King, the King, the King of

Strandedusia.

All hail the King!

P196: “SO WHAT?” Harry shouted. ….There won’t be any Hog- warts to get expelled from! He’ll flatten it,or turn it into a school for the Dark Arts!..... because I’m never going over to the Dark Side!”

P21: Dudley meanwhile was counting his presents. His face fell. “Thirty-six,” he said. ....”That’s two less than last year.”

P95: “And now before we go to bed, let us sing the school song!” ( Dumbledore).

Hogwarts, Hogwarts, Hoggy Warty Hogwarts, Teach us something please.

Whether we be old and bald Or young with scabby knees, Our heads could do with filling With some interesting stuff,

For now they’re bare and full of air, Dead flies and bits of fluff.

EXPLANATION: CP-1, 2 etc refers to a character chart drawn up for Owen that you can find on the complete version of this document.

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OWEN MULDOON’S DOMINANT TRAITS

P119:You are very brave. (King to OM)

P99: 'He has her hypnotized. I will set her free.' (OM)

(CP=1)

P104: 'But Yuthere is more than ugly. He's grotesque. He's evil.'

P20;… the stewardess who made a special request to the captain so that he could phone his mother to wish her happy birthday.

P61: There was good food on the table and the smiling face of his mother. There was the friendly advice of his father

P18: He clambered on top and lay flat down clutching its sides, unable to restrain the crying fit that suddenly came over him. He called out into the darkness. He called for Theresa, for Fred, for Jonathan. He called for Miss Cecilia. He called again and again. He heard no re- ply. His friends were all gone and his teachers too and

all the others who had been on the ship.

P33: Owen thought about his lost friends. He realized he liked Theresa... more than he thought. And he regretted now not having told her so.

P32: 'Now, they know what it's like to be drowned.' Owen collapsed in a flood of tears.

CP=1 (love of family and friends)

HARRY POTTER’S DOMINANT TRAITS

One of Harry's most defining personality traits is his bravery and his willingness to risk his life for others. (http:/wiki. Character:Harry_Potter#Characteristics)

(CP=1)

P196: “SO WHAT?” Harry shouted. ….There won’t be any Hogwarts to get expelled from! He’ll flatten it,or turn it into a school for the Dark Arts!..... because I’m never going over to the Dark Side!”

Friendships are the most important things in Harry’s life; “More than anything else at Hogwarts, more even than playing Quidditch, Harry missed his best friends, Ron Weasley and Hermione Granger.” 15. Ibid., Chamber of Secrets, 11 (the-leaky-)

P153: Harry was so close to the mirror now that his nose was almost touching his reflection. “Mum?” he wispered. “Dad?”

P156: And there was his mother and father smiling at him again and one of his grandfathers nodding happily. Harry sank down to sit on the floor in front of the mir- ror. There was nothing to stop him staying here all night with his family. Nothing at all.

CP=1 (love of family and friends)

P107: Owen flung himself on the straw face down.

'Why is all this happening to me?'

P108: He even managed to scratch a couple of poems to Servilia onto the hard cement, but thinking Li Po might consider them amateurish, he quickly scratched them out again.

P109: Time and again he screamed through the door or tried to tear it from its hinges. Defeated, he would laugh hysterically at his absurd belief in his own strength and then the laughter would turn to tears.

P105: 'But, life is so empty. So grey.' moaned Owen. 'I can't see the point in any of it, if I can't make her my friend. And I never will. I just want to die, Li Po.'CP=1

P98: . He was sure of it as he remembered her eyes on his, the perfect smile. A feeling of leaden futility was upon him.

P108: The riddle strained his will. Try as he might he just could not figure it out. CP=1

P39: Owen, for his part, lay long time thinking. If only that ship had spotted him he wouldn't have had to go through all this. CP=1

P51: He hauled himself towards the gate and lent back against it letting out an enormous sigh of relief.

P77: Owen sat up and relaxed. He could think a little clearer now. CP=1 ( stress)

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Harry doubts himself and this is not only a stage he goes through at eleven, but at several points in his life. Harry is often unsure of his abilities and often undervalues himself. This is what makes Harry human and helps the reader relate to him. (the-leaky-)

P76: “I bet,” he added, voicing for the first time something that had been worrying him a lot lately, “I bet I’m the worst in the class.” (HP) CP=1

P205: “We’re nearly there, “ he muttered suddenly. “Let me think - let me think...” CP=1

P63: Harry could have laughed out loud with relief. He was safe. CP=1

P154: What Harry feared most was that he might be able to find the mirror room again. CP=1 (stress)

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EXPLANATION: When the Japanese want to do Hamlet on stage or screen, they pick a small guy with black hair. It is still Hamlet he plays. The character is the man. Or, as Mr. Yuthere put it so Owen....”what’s a little dye between friends?” For simplicity in reading what follows, Owen is cited by his initials OM as is Harry Potter - HP. The CP-1, 2 etc refers to OM’s original character chart that you can view in the unabridged account.

OWEN MULDOON HARRY POTTER

P32: 'Were there any more survivors.......Mister Po?'

'None,' announced the bird as if he was calling a tennis score. P16: Owen Muldoon found it very hard to believe that he was the sole survivor. (The Chosen One)

P37: OM... was also skinny and a little knock-kneed. P30: 'Skinny, isn't he?' (Li Po of OM)

P15: "...But how in the name did Harry survive?" P17: "To Harry Potter, the boy who lived."

( The Chosen One)

P20: "....Harry had always been skinny for his age."

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Muldoon -Potter

P40: 'What!? Speak to a tiger.......me!? You speak to him.' P42: 'Tiger, tiger burning bright in the forests of the night,' he began. (brave)

P27: 'Puffins don't talk,' scoffed Owen.

P45: 'Just......just don't say another word,' said Owen. 'Not an- other word. I mean it.'

'P103: ‘Of course, she does, you stupid bird! Everybody wants to be free!'

P40: ‘This is no time for jokes bird!” (OM) (capable of anger)

P17: 'I really don't know how to dance,' was all he said. P67: “I don’t really know.” CP=2 (self-honesty)

P93: 'And where do I come into your scheme?' asked Owen looking down at his rags.

P79: He adjusted what was left of his clothes and tried to ignore the chaffed toes that poked through his trainers.

P102: Owen turned his head away, and then sadly began pick- ing threads from the fringe of a rent on the knee of his jeans. P61: He remembered too how shabby he looked in the mirror of The Major's hall.

P80: Owen sat down on the velvet feeling very awkward in his rags. CP=2 (concern for appearances)

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P25: “I know,” Harry murmured through the glass although he wasn’t sure the snake could hear him. “It must be really annoying.”

P202: “Yeah,” said Ron, “ and lucky Harry doesn’t lose his head in a crisis.” (brave)

P24: ….’MOTORBIKES DON’T FLY’

P111: “Give it here,’ Harry called, ‘or I’ll knock you off that broom!”

P192: “I wish I knew what this means!’ he burst out angrily. (HP)

P116: “Shut up, both of you,!” said Harry sharply....

P134: “He’s just made that story up,” Harry muttered angrily....

(capable of anger)

P102: “I don’t know, sir,” said Harry.

P70: “Yes,” said Harry. “The thing is – the thing is, I don’t know how to-“ CP=2 (self-honesty)

P29: He sat down at the table and tried not to think about how he was going to look on his first day– like he was wearing bits of old elephant skin, probably.

P23: Dudley had laughed himself silly at Harry, who spent a sleepless night, imagining school the next day, where he was already laughed at for his baggy clothes and sellotaped glasses. CP=2 (concern for appearances)

Muldoon -Potter

P26: 'Where am I, Sir?' he asked.

P78: 'If there is any way I can repay you for your kindness

Missus.....,' began Owen:

P53: ‘I....would be glad of any food you could spare me, Sir.’ P57/58: 'I couldn't possibly accept all that,' said Owen remembering his manners.CP=2 (mannered)

P58: He was angry at the way these people had made a fool of him.

P89: There didn't seem to be a lot to smile about and he felt foolish. CP-2 (self-regard)

P26: Try as he did, he could not sleep. Images came and went in his mind:

P26: 'Inquisitive wee lad now, aren't you?' (Bart)

'I have to know....' began Owen.

P62: 'Wait a minute!' cried Owen. 'There are some questions....' P66: 'You see I'm lost...... I'm trying to find......'

P28: 'But, I have to know!' Owen stared wild-eyed.

P53: 'I am a traveler on my way home,' he said clearly. (OM)

CP = 1, 2 (seeking truth)

P18: He clambered on top and lay flat down clutching its sides, unable to restrain the crying fit that suddenly came over him.

(cries when he has to)

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P73: “Poor dear – no wonder he was alone, I wondered. He was ever so polite when he asked how to get on to the platform.

P41: I’m sorry, but I still don’t really know who you are.’ (HP) P217: And sir, there’s one more thing....(HP) CP=2 (mannered)

P107: “Typical,” said Harry darkly. “Just what I always wanted. To make a fool of myself on a broomstick in front of Malfoy.

CP=2 (self-regard)

P135: Harry went to bed with his head buzzing with the same question.Neville was snoring loudly but Harry couldn’t sleep. He tried to empty his mind –

P63:… he swallowed a lot of new questions that had just occurred to him….

P112: “Potter, this is Oliver Wood. Wood – I’ve found you a

Seeker.”

P145: “We must have been through hundreds of books already and we can’t find him anywhere – just give us a hint – I know I’ve read his name somewhere.” (HP) CP = 1, 2 (seeking truth)

P217: ...which gave Harry time to dry his eyes on the sheets. When he had found his voice again...

(cries when he has to)

Muldoon -Potter

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P32: Is there danger in the forest?'

‘For you there will be.’ (OM special)

P187: “The forest is not safe at this time – especially for you.”

P89: 'But that is lying!' protested Owen. CP-2 (integrity)

P66: The dryness was back again in his throat.'The Land of The

Best People in The World,' he lied.

P68: 'Yes!' lied Owen. 'I know a few ologies.'

(lies when he has to)

(HP special)

P213: “LIAR!’ Harry shouted suddenly. CP-2 (integrity)

P212: “I must lie,” he thought desperately. “ I must look and lie about what I see.”

P61: “Nothing,” Harry lied.

(lies when he has to)

P82: 'I suppose not,' said Owen who blushed carmine as his stomach gurgled. (can blush)

P106: Maybe, she wasn't who he thought she was. In that case, beauty was just an illusion; and if it was an illusion then what hope for anyone? (OM ) CP = 2 (intellect)

P58: 'You belong in another century, all of you. Can't you see that?' (relies on his own viewpoint)

P96: 'I'll consider your offer, Sir. But I have to go.' ...Honesty

P30: If I could take Li Po back home with me......I would make millions.

P60: I'd have a swimming pool and a gym. And I'd live until I was a hundred and ninety. CP-2 (Pride of Ownership)

P195: Harry flushed.

P62: Harry felt himself go red. (can blush)

P189: But who’d be that desperate?” he wondered aloud. “If you are going to be cursed forever, death’s better isn’t it?” (HP) CP=2 (intellect)

P81: He held out his hand to shake Harry’s but Harry didn’t take it. “I think I can tell who the wrong sort are for myself, thanks,” he said coolly. (relies on his own viewpoint)

P123: Harry had a lot of trouble keeping his mind on his lessons that day. It kept wandering up to the dormitory where his new broomstick was lying under his bed….

(CP-2) (Pride of Ownership)

P50: But, suddenly, his legs began to tremble as if an electric current had been passed through them.

P40/41: A wave of fear came over Owen. He grabbed his machete.

P110: Owen could see why as he gazed with horror at the numerous skeletons that lined the way

P40/41:'But I am! I'm terrified. Look at me; I'm trembling from head to foot.' (knows fear)

P102: Then he fell to his knees, overcome by a sadness that was impossible to bear. (pain of loss)

P108: He grew to hate this old man even though he was not real.

(can hate)

P68: Are you familiar with that word.......ideology?'

'Yes!' lied Owen. 'I know a few ologies.' (not the academic)

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P203: He took a deep breath…..He expected to see sharp beaks and claws tearing at him any second.

1343 1092 P205: Harry’s knees were trembling.What if they lost? P211 And to Harry’s horror, a voice answered….

P206: Shaking, Harry moved three spaces to the left. P86: Harry’s heart gave a horrible jolt. A test?

(knows fear)

P153: He had a powerful kind of ache inside him, half joy, half terrible sadness. (pain of loss)

P144: “I hate them both,” said Harry, …. (can hate)

P41: “I know some things,’ he said. “I can, you know, do maths and stuff.” (not the academic)

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P75: Owen, feeling suddenly very ashamed of himself, fought his way through the mob. CP-2 (integrity)

P23: He resolved then he would not sleep again, no matter what.

(resolute)

P179: He felt so ashamed of himself that he went to Wood....

CP-2 (integrity)

P179: Harry’s new resolution not to interfere in anything....

(resolute)

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LI PO ALBUS DUMBLEDORE

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NB: I should be borne in mind that Li Po is not a puffin but an

ancient alchemist and magician in the form of a puffin. His actual human description is below.

P45: Li Po could be anywhere, anywhere in this wide universe.

P38: 'A great poet. He Taught Confucius everything he knew. Wisest man in China my master is. (Bart about Li Po).

P36: 'You're not as stupid as you look, earthling. Li Po was a great magician.

(Albus means ‘white’)

P215: “We must have crossed in mid-air.” (Dumbledore)

P48: “Great man, Dumbledore.

P217: Dumbledore now became very interested in a bird out on the window sill,….

P92: ...Best wizard in the world!

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P28: Vain creature by all accounts this Puffin, he thought to himself.

P78: He looked pleased with himself but then he never seemed to look anything else.

P31: 'When God was handing out the looks to Puffins he got a wee bit extravagant when he came to Li Po, that's what I say.'

( Li Po about himself) (vanity)

P217: It was one of my more brilliant ideas, and between you and me, that’s saying something. (Dumbledore about himself)

(vanity)

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P39: Li Po, enthralled at his own quip, flew around the tent letting out that shrieking laugh of his. (Li Po’s zany humour)

P43: 'Maybe that's why you met the tiger in the first place,' counseled his feathered sage. 'Li Po, he say, a little brush with danger can paint a most revealing picture.

P61: 'Go away,' said Owen, turning over so that the bird would not see his tear-filled eyes.

P44: But Li Po pecked at his neck and face so that he had no choice but to keep moving forwards.

P105: Owen rolled over on the straw and with tearful eyes gazed up at the low ceiling: 'I just want to die,' he moaned. (to Li Po) P64: 'I'm not saying you are lying. But, you know a lot more than you are telling, Li Po.' (Li Po and Om- buddies)

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P91: “Before we begin our banquet, I would like to say a few words. And here they are: Nitwit! Blubber! Oddment! Squeak!

(Dumbledore’s s zany humour)

Harry and Dumbledore forged a bond comparable to that between two brothers, in spite of the century in age difference. Harry felt comfortable enough around the impressive, intimidating figure of Dumbledore to shout at him in frustration, cry out of grief, admit to his fears, and entrust him with his life. Albus_Dumbledore#Personality_and_traits

(Li Po and Om- buddies)

P45: Li Po flew higher and higher until he was a tiny dot; and then he disappeared entirely. (Li Po invisible)

P61: 'You've been reading my thoughts!' exclaimed Owen sitting up. Li Po moused along the branch and tried to look indifferent. 'That's not very nice Mister Po!'

'Well......I......was curious, that's all.'

(Li Po mind-reading)

P76: 'Appearances rule here,' replied Li Po. 'Li Po, he say,

….appearances rule when poor man seek riches in mirror.'

P99: Li Po, he say, what you think of as destination maybe only another part of

journey.'

P104: Li Po, he say, man who cannot live with what he cannot get, cannot live with what he got.'

P105: Li Po, he say, poet who try to kiss moon's reflection may fall in water and drown.'

P105: 'You have to learn about the emptiness too. You, yourself, are the emptiness.'

P105: 'But, life is so empty. So grey.' moaned Owen. 'I can't see the point in any of it, if I can't make her my friend. And I never will. I just want to die, Li Po.'

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Invisibility: He claimed the ability to render himself invisible with- out the use of an Invisibility Cloak. To achieve such a state, Dumbledore merely used an extremely powerful Disillusionment Charm. Occlumency/Legilimency Expert: Dumbledore was also skilled in Occlumency and Legilimency. Albus_Dumbledore #Personality_and_traits (Dumbledore invisible)

Many people, particuarly Harry Potter, often noted that Dumble- fore sometimes seemed to see right into their mind and correctly decipher what they were thinking. Albus_Dumbledore#Personality_and_traits

(Dumbledore mind-reading)

P157: However this mirror will give us neither knowledge nor truth.

P215: After all, to the well organized mind, death is but the next great

adventure.

P157: “It does not do to dwell on dreams and forget to live.”

(Dumbledore as sage)

(Li Po as sage)

LE COMPTE DE PILFER

Etymol.ogy: “Pilfer” = to steal

ARGUS FILCH

Etymology: “Filch” = to steal.

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P111: The men disembarked and Owen was handed over to an official. He was a tall man with strikingly green eyes: (ie, Pilfer). P112: . His Majesty has a lot of work to......ex...ecute.' His pur- poseful stressing of the last word did nothing to make Owen feel welcome. (Pilfer)

P116: He designed this palace and furnished it too. I just sign things for him.

P120: Everybody knows I am mad. It's an honour to be mad, Pil- fer tells me. And he ought to know. Pilfer knows everything.

(expert on the palace)

P99: Even worse than Peeves, if that was possible, was the caretaker, Argus Filch.

P99: Filch owned a cat called Mrs. Norris……with bulging, lamplike eyes just like Filch’s.

P99: Filch knew the secret passageways of the school better than anyone….

His knowledge of the secrets and shortcuts of the castle is almost unparalleled..... He has been known to favour almost sadistically harsh punishments...

(expert on the castle)

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BARTHOLOMEW O’MALLEY RUBEUS HAGRID

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( Bartholomew. No birth date given, but old enough to be Owen’s grandad.)

P25: Glad to be out of it. That were forty years ago now.'

P24: He saw that the old man was dressed in animal skins and wore a funny hat with flowers on it. ... , his little blue eyes peer- ing off into nowhere:

P26: An old man, a beachcomber, had found him and carried him to his hut buried deep in the forest. (Bart’s hut)

P24: 'Tis that, son. Irish as stout and shamrocks or babblin' brooks.'

P24: 'Was shipwrecked meself a long while ago.

P25: 'The fightin' Irish they call us. Been fightin' the English for a thousand years or more.' (speaks in vernacular)

P34: 'One other thing. If you do make it, tell nobody about me or where I am.' (Bart - a private man)

P24: The old man smiled to himself and tweaked one of his bushy eyebrows. (Bart)

(Aged 65. Born 1929 -

hagrid.html)

P133: Hagrid could be seen.... bundled up in a long moleskin overcoat, rabbit fur gloves and enormous beaverskin boots.

P104 Hagrid lived in a small wooden house on the edge of the forbidden forest.

P169: When they knocked on the door of the gamekeeper’s hut an hour later… (Hagrid’s hut)

P40: “I’ll not say no to summat stronger if yeh’ve got it, mind.” P40: “Got summit for yer here. (speaks in vernacular)

P48: Be grateful if yer didn’t mention that teh anyone at

Hogwarts. ( Hagbrid - a private man)

P48: He cast a sideways look at Harry under his bushy eyebrows.

(Hagrid)

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P34: Bartholomew had washed his denim, jacket, his T-shirt, his jeans and even his trainers. He heaved a rucksack onto the boy's back:

P35: Old Bartholomew had thought of everything, even a sheet of polythene that he could leave out at night to collect fresh water. (caring Bart)

P26: Owen could hear him talking to himself outside. He seemed angry about something. He heard a bucket or a wheelbarrow be- ing kicked and then, silence. It didn't seem to Owen as if he was coming back in again. Now he was talking to himself again, louder this time. (Bart has a temper)

P25: Understand me drift?' He got up and draped a blanket over

Owen. 'Think ye'd better sleep now, son.'

P40: He bent down over the fireplace; they couldn’t see what he was doing but when he drew back a second later, there was a roaring fire there. It filled the whole damp hut with flickering light and Harry felt the warmth wash over him as though he had sunk into a warm bath. (caring Hagrid)

Dear, dear, you know, that temper of yours will lead you into trouble one of these days, Hagrid." —Lucius Malfoy provoking Hagrid. P181: “Then get back off ter the castle an’ pack. Go on!”

(Hagrid has a temper)

P48: He took off his thick black coat and threw it to Harry: “You can kip under that,” he said.

EXPLANATION: The origins of the style are fully explained in the complete version of this document.

SIMILARITIES OF STYLE

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P67: ‘Yes, you know, BELIEFS!’

P30: Li Po could THINK! (use of caps for specific emphasis)

P78: The entrance to the Virtue Agency lay atop of a steep flight of marble steps. The huge glass door was flanked by lofty statues in the Greek style and there were a brace of bronze lions on their plinths. As soon as he entered the spacious foyer his eyes met a pretty little girl seated at a desk big enough for a game of ping-pong. She was evidently the receptionist and a busy one at that, for she had no less than six phones all around her. So acute was Owen's shyness that he hesitated before approaching her and instead pretended to read the notice board that stretched right across the far wall. He adjusted what was left of his clothes and tried to ignore the chaffed toes that poked through his trainers.

P51: He closed his eyes and took a deep breath and then another until finally he regained his composure. Slowly, he began to descend. When he touched the ground he fell down flat in the dust and lay there listening to his heart pounding aware that his fingers were still fluttering like blades of grass. He hauled himself towards the gate and lent back against it letting out an enormous sigh of relief. Li Po flew down and perched on his shoulder.

'Can't...can't understand how that gate got locked...I was sure....” “I locked it,” said the bird.

P17: Standing there at the rails, a light warm breeze blowing through his thin blond hair he felt good. It was a beautiful night filled with the scent of plants, the moon so hugely near and bright, and the sea so calm. He stood there, looking out at the vast expanse of the ocean hoping to see again, in the dying light, the school of dolphins that had followed the ship for miles.

P45: The village was quiet as he approached and seemed to lack any color but a mousy grey. A dog or something whimpered in the distance. Shutters creaked in a blustery wind. He pushed the big wooden gate. It gave way easily. Still, he could hear nothing. A long street flanked by old tenements stretched before him in the dying light. There were no pavements and no tarmac on the road, just the same old grey dust everywhere. He could see no signs of life at first until at the very end of the street he spied what he thought was a pile of rags.

P202: “HAVE YOU GONE MAD?” Ron bellowed.

P196: “SO WHAT?” Harry shouted. ….There won’t be any Hogwarts to get expelled from! “ (use of caps for specific emphasis)

P63: A tinkling bell rang somewhere in the depths of the shop as they stepped inside. It was a tiny place, empty except for a single spindly chair which Hagrid sat on to wait. Harry felt strangely as though he had entered a very strict library; he swallowed a lot of new questions which had just occurred to him and looked instead at the thousands of narrow boxes piled neatly right up to the ceiling. For some reason, the back of his neck prickled. The very dust and silence in here seemed to tingle with some secret magic.

P115: They pulled on their dressing-gowns, picked up their wands and crept across the tower room, down the spiral staircase and into the Gryffindor common-room. A few embers were still glowing in the fireplace, turning all the armchairs into hunched black shadows. They had almost reached the portrait hole when a voice spoke from the chair nearest them: “I can’t believe you are going to do this, Harry.

P108: At three-thirty that afternoon, Harry, Ron and the other Gryffindors

hurried down the front steps into the grounds for their first flying lesson. It was a clear, breezy day and the grass rippled under their feet as they marched down the sloping lawns towards a smooth lawn on the opposite side of the grounds to the forbidden forest, whose trees were swaying darkly in the distance.

P54: For a famous place, it was very dark and shabby. A few old women were sitting in a corner, drinking tiny glasses of sherry. One of them was smoking a long pipe. A little man in a top hat was talking to the old barman, who was quIte bald and looked like a gummy walnut. The low buzz of chatter stopped when they walked in.

SIMILARITIES OF STYLE continued

P76: Owen observed that the people in the pews ate as they prayed so that the place looked and felt like a huge restaurant. Some of them cried while they ate. Owen knelt down beside a woman. At first he tried to pray but when he saw that the woman was eating sandwiches his mouth began to water and his stomach rumbled. Eventually, unable to endure it any longer, he turned to her abruptly: "Could I have a sandwich, Missus?"

P70: As he wiped the dust from off his badge with his sleeve he saw funeral cortege coming up the hill towards him. As it passed, he noticed with awe that it was no ordinary funeral but something of a mass funeral. He counted. There were no less than one hundred and fifty coffins being transported uphill in a long procession that seemed to go on forever. Each coffin was carried by four men in white coats and white trousers and even white shoes while a representative of the deceased walked behind dressed in the usual garb of black. Behind him walked three more people, also in black, the relatives. These three were all women. Every coffin therefore had one man to follow and three women. And it was odd too how sprightly and healthy the men in white looked compared to the ones who slow- marched after them. These were frail and stooped and their skin a greyish blue color. Nobody cried.

P22: . When the sun itself peaked above the horizon he felt as happy as he ever did in his life. The sea, as if in obedience, became softer as if to reassure him. Fish of radiant hues that he had never seen before leapt up out of the water and plopped back in again. He was alive like them and just as happy.

P50: Owen looked down unable to believe he had climbed so far and yet secretly- proud of the fact that he had survived.

P100: Half an hour later he found himself in what appeared to be the local jail. Local is scarcely the right word, for it stood in the countryside miles outside town. There wasn't a house in sight. And it didn't quite resemble any jail he had ever seen. It looked more like a lighthouse, its tower rising to a gigantic height. Around its turret, crows circled and squawked.

P54: Owen followed him into the sitting room. The first thing he noticed was the vaulted ceiling festooned with gold stars and the many chandeliers whose candle- light gave the place an eerie glow. He looked around hoping Li Po had followed him but the Puffin was nowhere to be seen. Nobody seemed to notice his arrival. There were a number of highly decorated people in the room. Every now and then one of them would break out in loud applause. Oddly enough, the room was sparsely furnished for its immense size. Because of the ceiling's great height all the furniture in the room, especially the two long divans in the center, looked dwarfed. Some of the ladies and gentlemen sat on these while all the others strolled around the room like sleepwalkers.

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P71: Harry pressed on through the crowd until he found an empty compartment near the end of the train. He put Hedwig inside first and then started to shove and heave his trunk towards the train door. He tired to lift it up the steps but could hardly raise one end and twice he dropped it painfully on his foot.

"Want a hand?" It was one of the red-haired twins he'd followed through the ticket box.

P123: As seven O'Clock drew nearer, Harry left the castle and set offf towards the Quidditch pitch in the dusk. He'd never been inside the stadium before. Hundreds of seats were raised in stands around the pitch so that the spectators were high enough to see what was going on. At either end of the pitch were three golden poles with hoops on the end. They reminded Harry of the little plastic sticks Mug- gle children blew bubbles through, except that they were fifty feet high.

P121: As the owls flooded into the Great Hall as usual, everyone's attention was caught at once by a long thin package carried by six large screeching owls. Harry was just as interested as everyone else to see what was in this large parcel and was amazed when the owls soared down and dropped it right in front of him, knocking his bacon to the floor. They had hardly fluttered out of the way when an- other owl dropped a letter on top of the parcel.

P165: He couldn't ever remember feeling happier. He'd really done something to

be proud of now - no one could say he was just a famous name any more. The eve- ning air had never smelled so sweet. He walked over the damp grass, reliving the last hour in his head, which was a happy blur....

P100: And the fleet of little boats moved off all at once, gliding across the lake which was as smooth as glass. Everyone was silent, staring up at the great castle overhead. It towered over them as they sailed nearer and nearer the cliff on which it stood.

P87: Harry had never even imagined such a strange and splendid place. It was lit by thousands and thousands of candles which were floating in mid-air over four long tables, where the rest of the students were sitting. These tables were laid with glittering golden plates and goblets. At the top of the hall was another long table where the teachers were sitting. Poressor McGonagall led the first years up here, so that they came to a halt in a line facing the other students, with the teachers behind them. The hundreds of faces staring at them looked like pale lan- terns in the flickering candlelight.

SUMMARY OF PLOT SIMILARITIES

EXPLANATION: VERY IMPORTANT or essential similarities are in Yellow. Other Important similarities are in WHITE .

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TRAVELS WITH LI PO

CHAPTER 1: OM ESTABLISHED AS LOST, ABANDONED, A MIRACULOUS SURVIVOR LINKED TO ANOTHER WORLD. HE IS THE CHOSEN ONE of whose presence the cosmos and all creatures in it are aware. OM is linked to the forces of nature. Survives hecause he is recognised for who he is and protected by unseen powers. IT IS ESTABLISHED THAT HE IS BADLY BULLIED AT SCHOOL. CAST OF THE SERIES INTRODUCED. THIS IS HIS BAPTISM OF FIRE IN THE WILD FORCES OF NATURE.

CHAPTER 2: OWEN IS RESCUED BY OLD BART. OM FINDS HIMSELF IN A SURREAL WORLD. IS IT DREAM OR REALITY? IS INTRODUCED TO LI PO HIS MENTOR AND GUARDIAN, AN ANCIENT ALCHEMIST who has taken the form of a comical little Puffin in order to instruct his charge.

CHAPTER 3: THE ENCHANTED FOREST. OM’s education begins in earnest. Li Po tells OM about THE PHILOSOPHER’S STONE to whet his appetite. Li Po behaves unexpectedly. But OM is more concerned with survival at this stagE. HP COMMUNES WITH A WILD ANIMAL, A TIGER. Li Po demonstrates his clairvoyance by seeing INVISIBLE PRESENCES.

CHAPTER 4: OM journeys through the Land of The Serious who are constantly at war with The Jokers. They live underground. OM meets the gatekeeper and MUST PROVE HIS COURAGE in order to escape by climbing over the gate that is a hundred feet high.

CHAPTER 5: OM and hunger. The Red House. Madness.

THE ROOM OF MIRRORS. Forced to make a fool out of himself for food. CHAPTER 6: OM PERFORMS UNCONSCIOUS MAGICAL FEAT OF LEAPING WALL. HE PINES FOR HIS MOTHER AND FATHER. Has fun wtih Li Po. Is cross examined by the customs man, the incurable Joker.

CHAPTER 7: OM arrives at Abandonville, the nightmare metropolis where people are divided into only two classes, the Uglies and the Beautifuls.

CHAPTER 8: The Virtue Agency and SATANIC MR. YUTHERE.

CHAPTER 9: OM betrayed and imprisoned. Obsessed with girl. Sees Li Po as he really is in a dream... a wise old man. Is sent to the palace to meet king and runs into the evil sadist Le Compte de Pilfer.

CHAPTER 10: Li Po scuppers Yuthere’s plans. OM is released.

HARRY POTTER AND THE PHILOSOPHER’S STONE

CHAPTER 1: HP ESTABLISHED AS LOST, ABANDONED, A MIRACULOUS SURVIVOR LINKED TO ANOTHER WORLD. THE CHOSEN ONE. Nature itself knows of his existence. He is linked to the forces of the cosmos. Survives because he is recognised for who he is and protected by unseen powers.

CHAPTER 2:IT IS ESTABLISHED THAT HE IS BADLY BULLIED AT HOME AND AT SCHOOL. HP PERFORMS UNCONSCIOUS MAGICAL FEAT OF APPEARING ON ROOF. HP COMMUNES WITH A WILD ANIMAL, A SNAKE, and releases it by magic.

CHAPTER 3: HARRY'S BAPTISM OF FIRE IN THE WILD FORCES OF NATURE. HP IS RESCUED BY OLD HAGRID and told he is special - a wizard.

CHAPTER 4: HP promised fame and recognition at last as the wizard he had no idea, except in retrospect, that he was and he is off to study witchcraft and expand his powers. CAST OF SERIES INTRODUCED. CHAPTER 5: HP has the fortune. Only fame awaits

CHAPTER 6: HP FINDS HIMSELF IN A SURREAL WORLD.

CHAPTER 7: The school regime. MEETS DUMBLEDORE, HIS MENTOR AND GUARDIAN, A 150-YEARS-OLD ALCHEMIST.

CHAPTER 8: Madness. Dumbledore behaving unexpectedly. Harry the thinker.

CHAPTER 9: Harry has feelings.

CHAPTER 10: HP MUST PROVE HIS COURAGE.

CHAPTER 11: HP has established his warrior credentials again. Intro to

The Philosopher's Stone.

CHAPTER 12: HARRY LONGS FOR HIS MOTHER AND FATHER. THE INVISIBLE PRESENCES. THE ROOM OF MIRRORS. CHAPTER 13: THE PHILOSOPHER’S STONE.

CHAPTER 14: Interlude.

CHAPTER 15: THE ENCHANTED FOREST and its strange creatures.

The three headed dog. The baptism of fire proper. Hermione lets it all hang out. Harry has more feelings.

CHAPTER 16: Chess game. Journey to the last chamber. CHAPTER 17: SHOWDOWN WITH SATANIC VOLDEMORT.

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P63: “Bartholomew was a Portuguese alchemist who voyaged to P160: “ Professor Dumbledore is particularly famous for .... and his

Peking in search of The Philosopher's Stone. He met Li Po there.' work on Alchemy with his partner Nicolas Flamel. “

'And did Li Po give him.......' P161: “Nicolas Flamel,” she whispered dramatically, “is the only known

'Yes, now he is an immortal, like me.' maker of The Philospher’s Stone!” (Hermione)

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P53: The first thing he noticed was the vaulted ceiling P87… Harry looked upwards and saw a velvety black festooned with gold stars .... ceiling dotted with stars.

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P15: How difficult it was now to heed the warning he remem- P113: Professor McGonagall peered sternly over her glasses at bered from Miss Cecilia's talk on safety at sea. "Under no cir- Harry; “I want to hear you’re training hard, Potter, or I may cumstances,' she said, "if the worse ever comes to the worse, change my mind about punishing you

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P36: 'And what if I call you Loony Muldoony? Would you like P11: "Harry. Nasty, common name if you ask me." that?' P81: ‘Think my name’s funny do you?’(Malfoy)

'You don't like Gabriel?' (the name)

'My name is Li Po.' (Li Po to OM) (the name)

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P30: He'd be famous overnight. He'd be on every television P15: "He'll be famous - a legend - I wouldn't be surprised if channel in the world. He would be more famous than anyone today was known as Harry Potter day in future - there will be that had ever lived. CP-2 ( the dream of fame) books written about Harry - every child in our world will know

his name." CP-2 (the dream of fame)

P47: “…. you’ll be right famous at Hogwarts”.

P69: Owen needed no more persuasion. Seconds later, he was P20: Harry didn't look it, but he was very fast. running through the traffic, ....

P49:The thing to do was to get to hell out of there as fast as his footwear would allow.

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P80: The square man went on: P20: Harry had a thin face, knobbly knees, black hair and bright

'You are not bad looking. Of course we will have to do something green eyes."

about the chin, too pointy. And dark hair is in these days. But, P153:.... even a little old man who looked as though he had

what's a little dye between friends? And the knees might have to Harry’s knobbly knees. (knees)

be straightened. (knees)

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P41: 'You're a coward.' P90: ‘....Plenty of courage I see....- and nice thirst to prove your-

'I am not!' CP-1 (bravely determined) self.’ CP-1 (bravely determined) (sorting hat).

P213: “Then kill him fool and be done!” screeched Voldemort. P62: “… If you had laughed out loud even once they would have (faces possible death) killed you on the spot. Sports people, don't you know?” (Li Po).

P114: One boiler coming up.' He reached for his pen to add his signature to Owen's death warrant. (faces possible death)

P61: 'You've been reading my thoughts!' exclaimed Owen sitting P203: Not for nothing though was Harry the youngest Seeker in up. (aware) a century. He had a knack for spotting things other people

didn’t. (aware)

P52: He was an absurd and comical little thing but Owen didn't

feel brave enough to laugh P92: Harry didn’t know whether to laugh or not.

P92: It was difficult not to laugh. (has a sense of humour) (has a sense of humour)

P102: Then, a very old man with long white hair and beard came P10: He was tall, thin and very old, judging by the silver of his and she took his arm. (Li Po in the flesh). hair and beard…..He was wearing long robes, a purple cloak P32: Then, there was the beak, yellow as a banana, curved like which swept the ground and high-heeled, buckled boots.... and an Indian dagger, .... his nose was very long and crooked…..

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'P39: “Did he tell you the secret?' P157: “Sir – Professor Dumbledore? Can I ask you something?”

'Yes.' …..Dumbledore smiled. “You may ask me one more thing, how-

'Tell me Li Po. Tell me the secret!' pleaded Owen. ever.”

'Here it is. Always brush your teeth and get to bed early at night.' “What do you see when you look in the mirror?”

(wry humour) “I? I see myself holding a pair of thick, woollen socks.”

(wry humour)

P107: 'Why is all this happening to me?' Li Po ignored the question:

P62: 'Truth is, earthling; I was interested in how you would cope. P219: "No, it isn't," said Harry thoughtfully. "He's a funny man, You did very well.' Dumbledore. I think he sort of wanted to give me a chance. I P.62: 'I apologize,' explained Li Po. 'But, I have great faith in your think he knows more or less everything that goes on here, you instincts. know. I reckon he had a pretty good idea we were going to try, P62: “… If you had laughed out loud even once they would have and instead of stopping us, he taught us enough to help. I don't killed you on the spot. Sports people, don't you know?” think it was an accident he let me find out how the mirror P44: L Po’s insistence took the form of a long lecture on laziness worked."

P106: Something in what the bird said always seemed to reach a (Dumbledore - mentor and controller)

part of him that seemed to be wiser than his thinking self.

P51: 'The Law. That's what law. They have to learn the blessings of old age. When they learn that lesson, they will be young again.' (Li Po - mentor and controller)

P102: Then, a very old man with long white hair and beard came Albus Dumbledore was tall and thin, with long silver hair and a

and she took his arm. long beard (auburn in his earlier years). He had brilliant blue P108: Always, at the end of the dream the ancient one would eyes, which usually twinkled with kindness and mischief. appear to take her out of the garden. He grew to hate this old

man even though he was not real. He was a mystery.

P101: And where was Li Po? Why wasn't he here when he It was Dumbledore who arranged for the infant Harry to be res- needed him most? cued from the cottage at Godric's Hollow . His abilities as a wiz- P62: 'I apologize,' explained Li Po. 'But, I have great faith in ard are combined with a cunningness and subtlety of mind that your instincts. allows him to comprehend human nature in addition to Dumble- P50: 'A mere...I could have gotten killed!' dore's great trust in the power of the human spirit,....

I could have gotten killed, I could have gotten killed, I could

have gotten killed,' mimicked Li Po as he shrieked and whirled above him.

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P110: Countless bodies hung from the vaulted roof and from be- P181: “It’s just a pity they let the old punishments die out…hang neath the arches in all sorts of contortions... you by your wrists from the ceiling for a few days, I’ve got the P116: ... the Compte de Pilfer, says so. He's the chap you just chains still in my office, keep ‘em well oiled in case…

met. Tall isn't he? But, absolutely without mercy. If mercy were a Filch is a rheumatic and hunchbacked man who wheezes and

physical attainment the Compte would be a total cripple. (sadist} shuffles when he walks. (sadist} Harrypotter.

This bitterness expresses itself in the endless restrictions he P120: Pilfer would be really angry, that's for sure. He would put places upon the students and the powerful desire he has to an end to my supply of chocolate. That's the sort of cruel man he torture them.

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P107: They have a king,... 'More often than not he is told to sign P116: “Do you think I am going to stand here and wait for Filch

an order of execution.' (by Pilfer) to catch me?”

P119: Filch must have hurried off to look for them....but they

hardly cared - all they wanted to do was put as much space between themselves and that monster.

P46: . He searched his rags and produced a big rusty key. P41: “Call me Hagrid,” he said, everyone else does. An’ like I told

'There it is,' he said. 'Can't pull the gate no more, that's the yeh, I’m keeper of the keys at Hogwarts....”

problem.’ ( the gatekeeper)

P33: 'He called you Bart!' shrieked the Puffin.

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P24: ...he decided there and then that the old man was right P104: There was only one room inside. Hams and pheasants

about the forest because everything on the table came from were hanging from the ceiling, a copper kettle was boiling on

there. the open fire and in the corner stood a massive bed with a

P25: The shack was very neat and furnished with a wide variety patchwork quilt over it. “Make yerselves at home,” said Hagrid.

of wooden things, tables, shelves and chairs that looked very (Hagrid’s hut)

ornate and homely. (Bart’s hut)

P24: The dish of rice and vegetables and fruit pie tasted so deli- P41: He passed the sausages to Harry who was so hungry he had cious ....He had never tasted anything like it. never tasted anything so wonderful.

P33: 'I do, Bart.' said Owen reaching for another slice of pineap- (Hagrid has the chef’s magic touch)

ple pie. (Bart has the chef’s magic touch)

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P33:'Anyway,' said Bartholomew. 'Time to eat. You get yourself

out of bed and go and freshen yourself up and I'll make us a good P169: Hagrid made them tea….

meal.'

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