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5172075-285750SoW00SoWFormal Versus Informal WritingRead the following two responses. One of them is formal and academic, and one of them is informal. How are they different? left322636In the article, “An Alternative to Suspension and Expulsion—Circle Up!”, the author describes form of justice in schools that focuses on restoration over punishment. Even though there are consequences for the students’ negative actions, the primary goal of the school is to get students to process their thinking and resolve conflicts with words rather than with physical fights.According to the article, even though it has had some difficulties putting the plan in place, reviews have reported that “data show chronic absences are down dramatically, and graduation rates are up” in the school that uses this type of justice system, so it appears to be successful.00In the article, “An Alternative to Suspension and Expulsion—Circle Up!”, the author describes form of justice in schools that focuses on restoration over punishment. Even though there are consequences for the students’ negative actions, the primary goal of the school is to get students to process their thinking and resolve conflicts with words rather than with physical fights.According to the article, even though it has had some difficulties putting the plan in place, reviews have reported that “data show chronic absences are down dramatically, and graduation rates are up” in the school that uses this type of justice system, so it appears to be successful.41052751949450047625019494500right22570In the article, “An Alternative to Suspension and Expulsion—Circle Up!”, talks about how some schools don’t punish kids and stuff like they used to when they get in a. Instead they make them talk 2 each other. So anyway, the students say that fighting is WAY down! One chick said there was only like one fight a year now instead of every other week! Wow! If you ask me, that sounds pretty good!!! Here’s a quote. The quote from the article says that data show chronic absences are down dramatically (like a lot!!!! ), and graduation rates are up”. I think that quote means, u know, it seems better than the old way of doing things, so I think they should keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!I hope you liked my summary! If you didn’t, you had to read it anyway!!!00In the article, “An Alternative to Suspension and Expulsion—Circle Up!”, talks about how some schools don’t punish kids and stuff like they used to when they get in a. Instead they make them talk 2 each other. So anyway, the students say that fighting is WAY down! One chick said there was only like one fight a year now instead of every other week! Wow! If you ask me, that sounds pretty good!!! Here’s a quote. The quote from the article says that data show chronic absences are down dramatically (like a lot!!!! ), and graduation rates are up”. I think that quote means, u know, it seems better than the old way of doing things, so I think they should keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!I hope you liked my summary! If you didn’t, you had to read it anyway!!!35823484353190Notes:-uses 1st and 2nd person-uses excessive exclamation marks!!!!!!!!!!!!-uses text talk/emoticons-has a chatty tone- has inconsistent, bold, underlined, or changed fonts-uses informal words/awkward phrasing-is often repetitive and wordy.00Notes:-uses 1st and 2nd person-uses excessive exclamation marks!!!!!!!!!!!!-uses text talk/emoticons-has a chatty tone- has inconsistent, bold, underlined, or changed fonts-uses informal words/awkward phrasing-is often repetitive and wordy.788524187375Notes:-uses 3rd person-uses appropriate punctuation (doesn’t scream at the reader )-has sophisticated word choices-has a formal tone-can express opinions in 3rd person.00Notes:-uses 3rd person-uses appropriate punctuation (doesn’t scream at the reader )-has sophisticated word choices-has a formal tone-can express opinions in 3rd person. ................
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