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AUTHOR’S NOTE:This is a retelling of my first story. I wasn’t satisfied with the first version and thought that I could improve it. I wanted to get rid of material from version 1 that I thought sounded better in my head and replace it with new material for a much more playful and believable setting. I have uploaded the entire story this time instead of uploading the three chapters individually and even added more dialogue in chapters 2 and 3. I hope that many of you will like this version better. But if not, I am completely ok with that. I am not planning on taking down version 1 any time soon and have placed all three chapters in my scraps. So rest assured for those that might prefer version 1 over this version. Now with all of that out of the way, enjoy the story. :) By the way, see what I did there with the title? ;) Undertale? Toby Fox.ASRIEL DREEMURR, THE TICKLISH “KID”Chapter 1: The PlanSix months have passed since the barrier was destroyed. Monsters now live on the surface, Toriel adopted Frisk, and best of all, Asriel, Chara, and Gaster have all returned. All three of them were given a second chance and they have been making the absolute best of everything. Everything was perfect for Asriel and Chara, except for one thing. Their parents, Asgore and Toriel, are not back together and it’s difficult for them to get back together after being apart for so long. However, when Asriel and Chara came back into their lives, they started speaking to each other again. During one particular week, Asgore, feeling enough time had passed, worked up the courage to ask Toriel spend a night with him (not on a date but as friends). After a bit of hesitation, Toriel agreed to see Asgore the following Saturday. Chara has spent the entire week with Toriel and Frisk while Asriel stayed with Asgore. Toriel has asked Sans to watch the kids while she visits Asgore the following Saturday. Toriel knows that her children are independent and well-behaved, but after losing Asriel and Chara long ago, she worries. It is a Friday night at Toriel’s house and Frisk and Chara are eagerly waiting for M.K. (Monster Kid) to video chat with them. Chara: I sure am excited that Mom’s gonna see Dad tomorrow Frisk! And that we’ll get to spend time with Asriel, M.K., and Sans!Frisk: Do you think it will go well Chara?Chara: I really hope so Frisk.Frisk: Yeah me too. What does Asriel have to say about this?Chara: Not much really. As usual, Asriel just seems to be ok with everything. Frisk: I wish I could look at all of this the same way he does. I just think too much about Mom and Asgore. I just wish they could be together again. By what I’ve heard, they used to be crazy about each other!Chara: They absolutely were Frisk! I really hope to see them like that again someday! Oh, and speaking of Asriel, don’t forget about what we have planned for him tomorrow. I just know it will put a smile on his face!Frisk: Oh absolutely! We gotta tell M.K. about our plan! It wasn’t too long until M.K. called. A month ago, Alphys made him a pair of robotic arms. M.K. really loves his new arms and he thanked Alphys with a great big hug. Alphys, Undyne, Papyrus, and even Sans taught him how to use his new arms. M.K. spends a lot of time with Alphys, Undyne, Papyrus, and Sans.M.K.: Yo! How are you guys?Chara: Even better now that you called!Frisk: Still enjoying those arms M.K.?M.K.: I sure am Frisk!Frisk: How’s everything at Alphys and Undyne’s house? M.K.: Fun as always! Sans and Papyrus are here too! Sans will be bringing me with him when we come over tomorrow. In the meantime, I’ve got a story to tell you guys!M.K. went on to tell Frisk and Chara what happened to him two days ago at Alphys and Undyne’s house. Frisk, Chara, and M.K. have all recently discovered that they are quite fond of tickling. M.K. always wanted to tickle others when he didn’t have arms and was always a victim to tickling. Now that he has arms, he can start tickle fights with other monsters and humans. M.K. has become a pretty good tickler after having a few tickle fights with Papyrus and even Sans. M.K. still has much to learn, but Papyrus is great teacher. They don’t call him “the Great Papyrus” for nothing after all. When M.K. is in tickle fights, he is able fight back with the help of his new arms, but they didn’t help much after he tickled Undyne while she was sleeping. After tickling Undyne, she grabbed him and mercilessly tickled him for ten whole minutes. Undyne was too strong and his arms couldn’t save him from her wrath. Frisk and Chara sure had a good laugh while hearing his story.Chara: The big, tough fish is ticklish huh? That’s hilarious!Frisk: You were awfully brave to tickle Undyne M.K.! I wouldn’t have tried that! And after hearing what happened to you, I’m glad I didn’t! M.K.: I couldn’t resist! Good thing Alphys and Papyrus were there to stop her! Otherwise I think she would’ve kept going until I passed out! But it was worth it! I got to hear Undyne laugh like a lunatic for fifteen seconds!Frisk and Chara had a tickle fight the same day M.K. was tickled by Undyne and about nine days ago, Frisk and M.K. had a tickle fight. It was pretty clear that the three children enjoy tickle fights and tickling in general. Chara thought she was getting too old for tickling, but after having a tickle fight with Frisk, she discovered that she could enjoy it at any age. It brought back memories of when she used to have tickle fights with Asriel and when Toriel and Asgore used to tickle both of them when they were younger. Chara: Frisk and I were talking and we think that it would be fun to tickle Asriel while Mom is seeing Dad tomorrow. There’s absolutely no way we’re gonna let him get by without any tickles! Frisk: You wanna tickle Asriel with us M.K.?M.K.: You know it! I didn’t know Asriel was ticklish!Chara: Oh god is he ticklish! He’s more ticklish than all of us!M.K.: Woah, really?!Frisk: I still have a hard time believing that Chara!Chara: It’s true guys! Mom and Dad used to tickle us a lot back then and he and I used to have many tickle fights. We all just loved hearing his adorable laughter! Frisk: Asriel is really strong M.K.… so we think we’re gonna have to tie him up. I know it doesn’t sound very nice but Asriel pretty much outshines us in anything involving physical strength. Chara: He sure does Frisk. Plus it’s also the only way we’ll be able to get him to hold still. He used to thrash around so much whenever Mom, Dad, or I tickled him and I REALLY want both of you to see just how ticklish he is!M.K.: So basically it’s for our own safety so he doesn’t wind up hurting any of us?Frisk: In a way, yes. But Asriel would never intentionally hurt any of us. He’s such a nice boy! He gets all of his kindness from Mom and Asgore!Chara: He sure does Frisk! So anyway, instead of having a tickle fight with Asriel, we’re gonna be tickle torturing him. We’ll make it up to him afterwards, I swear! And we’ll give him lots of breaks too! So, who wants to tie him up?M.K.: I’ll do it. I’d like to get more practice tying ropes. So how do we get him to agree to this?Chara: Just tell Asriel it’s part of a game we’re gonna play. I’ll give you more details about it later. Also, Frisk and I want him to be shirtless. Frisk: We wanna feel his fur! Asriel has the softest fur I’ve ever felt and that’s no exaggeration!Asriel’s fur is much softer than all of the Temmies and dogs (Doggo, Dogamy, Dogaressa, Lesser Dog, Greater Dog, and the Annoying Dog). His fur is also a bit softer than that of his parents. M.K. was excited because his robot arms have nerves, so he’ll actually be able to feel Asriel’s fur. Frisk: I’m not gonna be able to sleep tonight guys. I’m really excited!M.K.: Wait a minute, won’t Sans get suspicious if he hears Asriel laughing more than usual?Chara: I wouldn’t worry too much about that M.K. Sans usually falls asleep whenever he’s watching us. So I don’t think that’ll be a problem. After discussing the remainder of their plan, the three children then turned in for the night, anxiously waiting for tomorrow to arrive.****************************************************************************************************************************************************Chapter 2: The Fun BeginsIt is now Saturday evening and Sans has just showed up at the front door with M.K. He cracked a few jokes with Toriel and even pranked her with a whoopee cushion causing the kids to literally roll on the floor laughing. Twenty minutes later, Asgore arrived to drop Asriel off. Frisk and Chara gave Asgore and Asriel hugs the moment they walked in the house.Asgore: Howdy Frisk! Howdy Chara! It’s so nice to see both of you. Unfortunately, I won’t be able to stay too long. Your mother and I will be heading out shortly and won’t be back until tomorrow. Asriel: Howdy guys! I’ve been looking forward to seeing you all week! I never thought this day would get here!Asgore: Now you kids behave and listen to Sans.Sans: Don’t worry Big Guy, they’re in good hands. Their reward for behaving is that they’ll get to hear some of my hilarious jokes and puns. I’ve got a ton of em. A skele “ton.” (Heh. That never gets old.)Asgore: *shakes head at Sans’s pun*Toriel: *laughs at Sans’s pun* Oh Sans, you’re so funny! After talking to Sans for a few more minutes, Asgore and Toriel said goodbye to their children (and M.K) and left the house. The kids are now alone with Sans and all four of them spent some time with him before going upstairs to spend time with each other. Chara wanted to be sure Sans was asleep before they started, so she decided to stay downstairs a little longer and told M.K. to let her know when Asriel was all tied up. Frisk, M.K. and Asriel all went upstairs and talked briefly before getting started. Frisk: So Asriel, how did spending the week with your dad go?Asriel: It was great Frisk! Dad and I really love spending time with each other. I really wanted some father-son bonding with Dad and he was sure glad I was there! I do hope he has fun with Mom tonight. He’s really been looking forward to it.Frisk: I just hope everything works out. I worry too much.Asriel: It’ll be ok Frisk. Just remember that Mom and Dad will still love all of us no matter what happens tonight. That’s something that will never change.Frisk: You’re absolutely right Azzy. Thank you.Asriel: Don’t mention it Frisk. So what do you guys want to do now that I’m here?Frisk: I’m so glad you asked Azzy. Chara, M.K. and I want to play a game. We’re going to play a medieval themed game Chara and I made up called, “Save the Prince/Princess.” I’m going to capture you, tie you up, and Chara and M.K. are going to try and rescue you. Frisk really didn’t know what to call the game. Like Asgore, Frisk isn’t always great at naming things. But unlike Asgore, it isn’t a constant habit for her.M.K.: We don’t have any costumes but we’ll get to use some cool toy swords!Asriel: (I’ll play along. I like seeing them happy.) Sounds like fun!Frisk: Excellent! We’re all going to take turns being captured and tied up and we decided to go in alphabetical order. Since you’re such a good sport about everything Azzy, we figured you wouldn’t mind going first.Asriel: Not at all Frisk!Frisk: Oh, and I was wondering… if I could… maybe… pet you… while we’re waiting for Chara. I think that soft fur of yours is just begging to be pet! So… could you… take your shirt off please? I know it sounds rather strange… but I think you’ll enjoy it.Asriel was confused but also excited by Frisk’s request. Asriel often wonders why nobody ever lines up to pet him and his parents, even if it is an unusual request. He knows how soft his fur is!Asriel: Frisk, that sounds really nice! Frisk: Make yourself comfortable Azzy. Asriel then sat in Frisk’s comfortable reclining chair and removed his striped shirt. Asriel is now sitting in the chair wearing only his pants. Frisk left the chair in an upright position and put the foot rest up.Frisk: Comfortable Azzy?Asriel: Absolutely! Frisk: That’s great! M.K.: Asriel. Even though Chara and I will be trying to rescue you, I’d like to be the one to tie you up. I’d like to practice my rope tying skills. You know, since I’ve got these news arms and all.Asriel: Absolutely M.K.! That’s what you gotta do when you get new arms. Alphys was so nice to make those for you!M.K.: She’s amazing isn’t she! Asriel: She sure is!M.K., with the help of Frisk, proceeded to tie Asriel’s arms above his head and tied the ropes to the back legs of the chair. This made him unable to put his arms down. M.K. also tied his thighs and ankles together and used more rope to tie his legs to the foot rest. This made him unable to move his legs. After Asriel was tied up, M.K. left the room to get Chara and then Frisk pet Asriel while she was waiting for the two of them. Asriel loved every second of Frisk petting him and all the while, he was completely unaware of what the other kids’ true intentions for tying him up were.Sans had fallen asleep as Chara predicted, indicating that it was the perfect time to start tickling Asriel. Chara and M.K. then entered the room and then Frisk stopped petting Asriel, for now at least. Chara: Look at you all tied up Azzy. Can you move at all?Asriel: Not really. Chara: How did M.K. do with those ropes?Asriel: He did a really good job. I can’t move my legs or put my arms down.Chara: So that means you’re not going anywhere right?Asriel: Nope. I can’t go anywhere. These ropes are really strong!Chara: That is just perfect. *Has an evil grin on her face*Asriel: Um… Chara, what exactly is going on here?Chara and M.K.: … *walking slowly towards Asriel*Asriel: Uh… guys? *Asriel is very nervous*Chara and M.K.: … *Both of them are now standing right next to Asriel* Asriel: Guys? *Asriel is even more nervous*Chara and M.K.: *Both of them start tickling Asriel*Asriel: Hahahahahahahahaahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!!Asriel was caught completely off guard and immediately burst into laughter when M.K. latched on to his sides and when Chara scribbled her fingers all over his sensitive neck. Frisk just sat there and watched the adorable scene in front of her. It was even better than she imagined. Asriel: Frihihihihisk, youhoohoohoohoohoohoo guys trihihihihihihihihicked meheheheeheeheheeeheeheee!!Chara: Sorry about tying up Azzy, but the three of us would’ve struggled to hold you down! And that would’ve just made it harder for us to tickle you!After a minute and a half, Chara and M.K. switched places. Chara was now tickling Asriel’s sides and M.K. was now tickling his neck.Asriel: Hahahahahaahhahahahaha!! Whihihihihihihihihihihihihihihihihhihihihihihy!!? Chara: Because it’s fun Azzy! That’s why!The tickling continued for another minute and a half until they gave Asriel a breather. Asriel couldn’t believe his sisters and M.K. tricked him just so they could tickle him silly. To make matters worse, they had only tickled some of his less sensitive areas and those areas are already quite ticklish. Asriel got only a mere sample of what was in store for him. Asriel: You guys wanted to tie me just so you could tickle me? Chara, you know how ticklish I am!Chara: Yes Asriel, I know exactly how ticklish you are and it’s just SO CUTE!Frisk: Chara says that you’re more ticklish than me! And so far, I believe her! Asriel: Ok, just what exactly made you guys want to tickle me all of a sudden? I’m awfully curious!Chara: Well Azzy, Frisk and I had a tickle fight a few nights ago and M.K. here got tickled by Undyne. M.K.: And a week before that, Frisk and I had a tickle fight. Chara: We didn’t want you to feel left out.Frisk: We just wanna see you smile and hear you laugh Azzy. And we thought this was the best way to do it.Asriel: Well that’s a bit excessive! Chara: If you say so Azzy.M.K.: Let’s see where else you’re ticklish Asriel.M.K. started tickling Asriel’s underarms, causing the kid to laugh even harder. Asriel’s underarms are more sensitive than his sides and neck.Asriel: NOHOHOHOHOOHHOHOHO!! NAHAHAHAAHHAAHAHAHAAHHAT THEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHRE!!No matter how hard Asriel tried, he could just not put his arms down. All he could do was just sit there take it. M.K. was using all of his fingers to tickle Asriel’s underarms and the young boy just laughed like a lunatic the all the while. M.K.: This is so fun!Asriel: YOHOHOHOOHOHOOHOURE SO MEHEHEHEHEHHEHEEEHAN!!Chara: Azzy! That’s no way to talk to your friend! Frisk: Just for that, I think you should tickle him faster M.K.!M.K.: Gladly! *tickles Asriel faster*Asriel: AHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAAHAHHAHAAHA!!! NOHOHOHOHHOOHHHOOOHOHOHHO!!!The faster motions of M.K.’s fingers made Asriel laugh even harder. Asriel was laughing hard before M.K. tickled him faster and the tickling lasted for three minutes until the young boy was given another breather. Looks like Chara wasn’t lying about Asriel being REALLY ticklish. Asriel: That tickles so much! I thought you guys just wanted to play a game and pet me!M.K.: Yeah we’re pretty much just gonna keep tickling you Asriel! This is way more entertaining than playing some child’s game we made up! I’m sorry. Chara: Your laughter is just so adorable Azzy! Besides, we’re just getting started! Frisk… M.K.… get him! Frisk and M.K.: *both of them tickle Asriel*Asriel: AHAHAAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAAHAHAHAA!!!!Chara watched as Frisk tickled Asriel’s underarms while M.K. dug his fingers right into Asriel’s fluffy tummy, causing him to howl with laughter. Chara: There’s that hysterical laughter I was waiting for! Frisk was a much more playful than M.K. when she tickled Asriel’s underarms. Frisk lightly tickled his underarms using only her index fingers. She started out slowly and gradually increased the speed and number of fingers tickling him as time went by. She alternated between moving her fingers up and down and moving them in a circular pattern. M.K. is not as experienced as Frisk and Chara when it comes to tickling and often resorts to moving his fingers rapidly all over someone’s sensitive areas, which was what he was doing to Asriel’s tummy. But that’s effective too, especially on someone ticklish like Asriel! Asriel: HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA!!!!Frisk: Enjoying yourself Azzy? Asriel: AHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAAAHAHAHA!!!!Frisk: That’s right! All you can do is laugh! M.K.: Wow Asriel! Your fur is SO soft!Chara: Ooh, looks like you found another sweet spot! Hehehe!M.K. was intrigued by Asriel’s soft fur. He had already felt how soft his sides and underarms were, but his tummy was even softer. Asriel’s tummy is also a bit more sensitive than his underarms. Asriel: SAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAAHAHAHAHHAHNS!!!! HELHEHEHEHEHEEHEHEEHEHEHEEHEHHEHEHEHEHEEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEEEHEHEHEE!!!!Asriel was laughing so hard that he couldn’t even finish his sentence since he was being tickled in more than one of his many ultra-sensitive areas. The tickling stopped again after another three minutes. M.K.: What were you trying to say Asriel?Asriel: SANS! HELP ME!!Chara: Won’t do any good Azzy. Sans is sleeping right now… and we all know what a heavy sleeper he is. A bomb going off wouldn’t wake him up! Like Frisk said, all you can do… is just sit there and laugh! Frisk: Now it’s my turn to tickle your tummy Azzy! Asriel: Oh no.Frisk: *Starts tickling Asriel’s tummy* Asriel: HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!Frisk: It’s so fluffy! It’s so fluffy I’m gonna die!Frisk didn’t hesitate to dig her fingers into Asriel’s tummy just as M.K. did moments ago. Asriel, not surprising anyone, burst into laughter yet again and instinctively flinched away from Frisk’s hands as much as he possibly could. Frisk loved the feeling of Asriel’s tummy fur on her fingers and after about thirty seconds, she found his bellybutton. It was kind of hard to find because Asriel’s tummy fur is quite fluffy. Frisk: Hehehe! I found your bellybutton Asriel! Let’s find out how much it tickles! Asriel: *Flinches away again* AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!! BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!! BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!Frisk was definitely not disappointed with the results. Asriel’s bellybutton is so ticklish that it caused him to continuously bleat in addition to shrieking with loud, hysterical laughter. Frisk and Chara’s faces turned bright red after hearing the wonderfully adorable sounds. Asriel didn’t notice because he was too busy laughing and he was also quite embarrassed that he bleated in front of the other children. Asriel: BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!! BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!! AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAAHHA!!!! BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!Frisk: (Oh that is so cute! Keep it together Frisk.)M.K.: Woah! Didn’t know you had that in you Asriel! Chara: (Oh my gosh, he makes the cutest noises! It’s so adorable!!)After ninety seconds, Frisk began blowing raspberries on Asriel’s tummy. Frisk did this for an entire minute and it caused adorably precious laughter to spill from Asriel’s mouth. He also let out a few more bleats. These ones however, weren’t as loud as the other ones. Asriel: HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!! BAAAAAAAAH!! HAHAHAHAHAHAAHA!!! BAAAAAAAAAH!! BAAAAAAAAAAAAH!! Watching Frisk blow raspberries on Asriel’s tummy reminded Chara of when Toriel used to do that to Asriel, practically causing the same reaction. It was adorable when Toriel did it and it was adorable when Frisk did it. Asriel: HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! BAAAAAAAAAAAAH!! Chara: (Awwwwww, my heart is melting! The cuteness is too much!)After the minute was up, Asriel was given another break and Frisk spit some fur out of her mouth, which caused M.K. to laugh. Frisk knew some of Asriel’s fur would wind up in her mouth, but it was all worth it when she got to hear his precious laughter and bleating. Chara could barely contain herself after witnessing such an adorable sight and she nearly passed out.Frisk: Are you ok Chara!Asriel: What about me! I’m the one laughing my guts out!Chara: I’m fine Frisk. Just got a little too excited that’s all.Chara privately told Frisk what happened and as soon as she recovered, she began tickling Asriel’s ribs. Chara counted Asriel’s ribs one by one and it caused loud laughter to just POUR from his mouth. Although his movement was very limited, Asriel’s squirming was enough to make Chara lose count many times and listening to his hysterical laughter wasn’t helping either. Chara: One, Two. Asriel: Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahaaha!!!Chara: Azzy! You’re squirming too much! Now I have to start counting again!Asriel: It tichihihihihhihihihihhihhihhihihihihihihihihhiihihihiiihihihihkles!!! Chara: One, Two. Asriel: Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!!!Chara: Azzy! You’re laughter’s too distracting! I lost count again! Chara continued trying to count Asriel’s ribs, but his constant movement and laughter continued making it very difficult for her. After two and a half minutes, Chara stopped trying to count his ribs and instead dug into them with all ten of her fingers. Asriel: Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!!!!The tickling continued for thirty seconds until Chara stopped entirely. The highest number of ribs Chara counted was six. Chara was very surprised that she managed to count six of her brother’s ribs. She didn’t think she would make it past two!Frisk: Jeez Azzy! I didn’t know you were THAT ticklish! Chara tickled my ribs three nights ago and managed to count eleven of them before she lost count! And I wasn’t even tied up!Chara: I told you he was more ticklish than you Frisk! Asriel: You guys are being very unreasonable!Chara: Oh Azzy, you’re just so cute when you’re being tickled. Actually you’re cute when you’re not being tickled as well. Asriel blushed after hearing Chara’s compliment causing her and Frisk to giggle in response.Asriel: Awww thanks Chara. I think you guys are cute too. Even cuter than me!Frisk: WOAH! That is NOT true! How dare you say such a lie!M.K.: Are you just saying that so we’ll untie you Asriel? Because if you are… it’s not gonna work!Chara: We all know you’re the cutest Azzy! Don’t deny it! Asriel: *blushing*Frisk: Awwwww, he’s blushing again. That’s so cute. But we’re not done yet! There’s still one more place we REALLY want to tickle you Azzy! The first half of Asriel’s tickle torture was finally over but there was a spot that had been left untouched throughout the entire first half. There was definitely a reason why his legs were tied up. The worst was yet to come!******************************************************************************************************************************************Chapter 3: So Much Laughter… and Some FeelsWhile Asriel was resting after the first half of his tickle torture, Frisk left the room briefly to see if Sans was still asleep. It turns out he was still out cold. No surprises there.Chara: Do you know where we’re gonna tickle you next Azzy?Asriel: Um… no. (Actually yes.)Chara: Oh I think you do know Azzy. M.K., you’re up!Asriel knew exactly where he was going to be tickled next. They are going to tickle his feet! M.K. walked towards Asriel and started tying a string around his two innermost toes, binding them together to restrict even more movement. Asriel had a really huge grin on his face and was lightly shaking because it REALLY tickled when the string moved in between his toes and he was trying very hard not to laugh. M.K. wasn’t even trying to tickle him! Frisk noticed Asriel was struggling to hold in his laughter and she got even more excited to see how he reacts once they officially start going to town tickling his sensitive feet. When M.K. finally finished tying his toes together, Asriel let out a huge sigh of relief and was really surprised he managed to hold in his laughter on account of how ticklish he is. Asriel probably would’ve laughed if M.K. took any longer tying his toes together. After M.K. was all situated, he finally started tickling Asriel’s feet, causing the boy to just SCREAM with laughter. M.K.: Laugh for me Asriel! Laugh!Asriel: AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHA!!!!!M.K. primarily focused on Asriel’s soles, but he also tickled the tops of his feet. Asriel’s feet, along with his bellybutton, are his most sensitive areas much to his horror. Unknown to Frisk and Chara, M.K. actually has a bit of a foot fetish and was looking forward to tickling Asriel’s feet all night. M.K. loved hearing Asriel’s laughter as he mercilessly tickled every inch of his hyper sensitive soles all the way from his heels to the balls of his feet with his robotic arms. M.K. normally prefers female feet but he just had to make an exception for Asriel. M.K.: Does that tickle Asriel? Asriel: AHAAHAAHAHAHHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!M.K.: Well… does it?!Asriel: AAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!Chara: Don’t expect an answer M.K.! He’s WAY too busy laughing! Frisk: You knew those feet were just begging to get tickled Azzy! Admit it!Asriel: AHAHAHAHAHAHAAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHA!!!!!Asriel’s feet are so ticklish that he couldn’t even say a single word. All he could do was laugh and laugh and laugh as M.K. rapidly tickled his soles. After the three minutes were up, M.K. stopped tickling Asriel’s soles and smiled triumphantly. Asriel was completely surprised that he managed not to bleat after having his soles tickled like that.Asriel: My poor feet! They’re so sensitive! It tickles SO BAD! M.K.: Wow Asriel! Your feet ARE super ticklish! And cute too! (I wonder if his mom’s feet are ticklish.)Asriel: Um… thanks… I guess.Chara and Frisk were a little surprised to hear M.K. say something like that but they couldn’t deny that Asriel does indeed have cute feet. And so do his parents! Frisk: That’s what you get for walking around barefoot all the time, constantly showing off those feet Azzy! It was only a matter of time! (The same can be said about Mom and Asgore.)Chara: Totally! Besides, I think it’s about time those cute toes of yours got some attention!Chara then started tickling all six of his hyper sensitive toes, reducing Asriel to hysterical laughter with incredible ease. Asriel: HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!Asriel’s toes are extremely ticklish and after thirty seconds, Chara tickled all of them one by one in a rather similar fashion to “This Little Piggy.” Chara decided to replace “Piggy” with “Temmie,” as well as other words, and tried to put on the best Temmie impression she possibly could. She also had to get a little more creative since Asriel has six toes as opposed to her ten. Chara: This little Temmie went to the market. *Tickles his left innermost toe* Asriel: Hahahahahahahahahahaha!!Chara: This little Temmie stayed home. *Tickles his right innermost toe* Asriel: Hahahahahahahahahahahahahhaha!!Chara: This little Temmie had Temmie Flakes. *Tickles his left middle toe* Asriel: Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahhahahha!!!Chara: This little Temmie had none. *Tickles his right middle toe* Asriel: Hahahhahahahahahahahahahaahahahahahhahahahahahahahaha!!!Chara: And these little Temmies went, “Hee, hee, hee!” all the way home! *Tickles both of his outermost toes* Chara didn’t know what to say during that last phrase, so she decided to improvise. Asriel: AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAHAHAHHAAHHA!!!Asriel was in pieces with laughter throughout the entire thing, laughing a little at Chara’s Temmie impression but primarily laughing because of how much it tickled. Asriel’s toes are so ticklish that just gripping them with an index finger and thumb and wiggling them around is enough to drive him nuts. His laughter gradually increased in volume when Chara shifted from one toe to the next and Asriel just went bonkers when she tickled his outermost toes. Asriel’s outermost toes just happen to be his most ticklish toes, and Chara was well aware of that because she, Toriel, and Asgore used to tickle his feet a lot back then. Asriel sure felt much less dignified after having his toes tickled like that, but Chara didn’t stop there though. She went on to tickle the spaces in between Asriel’s toes (HIS WORST SPOTS!), causing EXTREMELY MANIACAL laughter to spill from the boy’s mouth. She also caused him to bleat the exact same way he did when he got his bellybutton tickled by Frisk much earlier. Asriel: BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!! BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!! AHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAAH AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!Chara: (Oh man, it’s still adorable!)Chara is able to contain herself from Asriel’s adorable bleating much better when she’s the one tickling him. Asriel spent the entire three minutes laughing and bleating his head off until he was given another break. M.K.: You really got him good Chara! Frisk: Awwwww, he bleated again.Asriel: *breathing heavily* What the heck was that Chara!? “This Little Temmie!?” You’re supposed to tickle little kids like that, not big kids like us!Chara: I just couldn’t help myself Azzy! Those cute toes were literally asking for it! Frisk: Chara doesn’t tickle big kids like that. But she does tickle big “kids” like that! *Frisk starts giggling after what she just said*Chara: Good one Frisk!Asriel: I don’t get it.M.K.: Neither do I.Frisk: I’ll tell you boys later.Asriel: I also can’t believe you caused me to make those sounds again! They’re so embarrassing!Frisk: They’re not embarrassing Azzy, they’re cute! Just ask Chara! She nearly fain… *Chara covers Frisk’s mouth* Chara: He doesn’t need to know that Frisk!Chara felt she would’ve been embarrassed if Asriel and M.K. found out that Asriel’s bleating nearly caused her to faint earlier, which is why she didn’t want Frisk to say anything. Frisk understood and then apologized to Chara. Frisk was immediately forgiven and then the two of them went back to tickling their brother. It was now Frisk’s turn to tickle Asriel’s feet.Frisk: Don’t worry Azzy! I’ll go easier on you. Asriel: I don’t think that’s even possible Frisk!Frisk: We’ll just see about that.Frisk tickled Asriel’s right foot with only one finger, but even that was enough to drive him nuts. Asriel: Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahaha!!!!Frisk: Oh my goodness! Just one finger!?Frisk couldn’t believe how easily Asriel was reduced to laughter. She was barely trying to tickle him! After one minute, Frisk tickled his left foot with only one finger, causing the exact same reaction. Unknown to Frisk, Asgore used to tickle Asriel’s feet the same way. Asriel: Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!!!!Frisk: Azzy! I’m barely touching your feet and you’re already in hysterics! I only giggle when my feet get tickled like this. But you’re laughing! I’m definitely convinced that you’re more ticklish than me!Frisk had actually been convinced that Asriel was more ticklish than her for quite some time, but she wanted to make sure his feet were more ticklish than hers as well. And to no surprise, they are! After another minute, Frisk used her left index finger to tickle Asriel’s right foot and her right index finger to tickle his left foot. She slowly moved her two fingers all over every inch of Asriel’s soles from his sensitive heels to his insanely ticklish toes.Asriel: Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!!!!!Although Frisk barely tried to tickle him, Asriel was in hysterics the entire time. After another minute, he was given another break. This time, it was a bit longer. While Asriel was resting, Chara went to grab something from the dresser. Asriel: Thanks for trying to go easier on me Frisk. My feet are just so ticklish! Frisk: Chara sure wasn’t lying when she told me how ticklish you are Azzy! It’s just so cute! And you’re so cute! Asriel: You guys tell me I’m cute an awful lot you know. Frisk: Well it’s true! You’re just such a precious cinnamon roll! Boop! *boops his snoot* Asriel blushed yet again, which in turn caused Frisk to instinctively giggle afterwards. Asriel blushes practically every time someone tells him he’s cute, especially if it’s an adorable girl like one of his sisters. After a couple minutes, Chara returned with two hairbrushes and handed one of them to Frisk. Asriel: *nervous* Uh… what are you going to do with those? Brush my fur perhaps? That would be nice.Chara: No, no, no Azzy, we’re gonna do… this! *Starts tickling his feet*Asriel: AHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHHAHAHAHAHAHAAHA!!!!!! BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!! *SNORT* AHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!! *SNORT* BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!Frisk used her left hand to hold Asriel’s right foot steady while Chara used her right hand to hold his left foot steady. Once Asriel’s feet were held perfectly still, Frisk and Chara immediately started tickling his soles with the two hairbrushes. Chara scrubbed Asriel’s left foot while Frisk scrubbed his right foot. The feeling every single bristle moving rapidly over every inch of his hyper sensitive soles sent him into a frenzy of continuous bleating and hysterical laughter.Asriel: AHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAAHAHHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHA!!!!!! *SNORT* BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!! BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!*SNORT* AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAAHAAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHHAAHA!!!!!!BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!! *SNORT*Frisk: Coochie coochie coo!Chara: Tickle, tickle, tickle! The hairbrushes tickled more than fingers and it caused Asriel to start snorting in addition to his constant laughter and bleating. After scrubbing his soles for two minutes, Frisk and Chara wanted to tickle his toes with the brushes. Both of them then grabbed his toes and bent them back so they could really get in there with the brushes. They were determined to make him laugh even more and Chara knew all too well that tickling Asriel’s toes with hairbrushes would send him over the edge with lots and lots and lots of hysterical laughter. Once Chara and Frisk moved up to his toes, Asriel completely lost it and wound up getting tears in his eyes. Asriel: AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!! BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!! *SNORT* BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!! *SNORT* AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAA!!!!!!! *SNORT* BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!! *SNORT* BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!! *SNORT* AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHA!!!!!!! BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!! *SNORT* AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!!!After brushing his soles and toes for three minutes, Frisk and Chara stopped and let Asriel rest one last time. Asriel: *breathing heavily* I’M SO TICKLISH!! OH MY GOD I’M SO TICKLISH!! M.K.: I think you can last a little longer Asriel. You’re a tough kid!Chara: He’s right Azzy! Let’s see how you can handle getting your feet AND upper body tickled!Chara and Frisk then leaned slowly towards Asriel’s torso and then M.K. leaned slowly towards his feet, causing the poor boy to get butterflies.Asriel: Oh no! You’re all going to tickle me now?! Frisk, Chara, and M.K.: Yep!At that moment, all three children tickled Asriel. Chara tickled his underarms, Frisk tickled his sides, and M.K. tickled his soles and toes. Asriel bleated and screamed with so much frantic laughter the moment all thirty fingers started moving all over his ultra-sensitive skin. Asriel: HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!! BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!! BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!!His laughter was so loud that it echoed throughout the entire room and his eyes got very watery. M.K. absolutely couldn’t wait to tickle Asriel’s feet again. He packed two electric toothbrushes in his travel bag this morning and was about to use them after the first minute was over. Asriel: AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAA!!!!!!!BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!!After one minute, Chara shifted her hands to Asriel’s fluffy tummy, Frisk tickled his sensitive neck, and M.K. tickled his soles with his electric toothbrushes. The toothbrushes tickled just as much, if not more than the hairbrushes, and the feeling of the bristles moving all over every inch of his sensitive feet in addition to his sisters’ fingers going nuts all over his neck and tummy caused him to laugh and bleat even harder. Asriel: HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!! BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!!! BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!!Asriel’s laughter continued echoing throughout the entire room and some tears ran down his cheeks due to all of the constant laughter pouring from his mouth. After the second minute was over, the children stopped momentarily to say something to Asriel before tickling him for one last minute.Asriel: *breathing heavily*M.K.: Almost done Asriel! Frisk: Just one more minute!Chara: We’re really gonna make you laugh now!Frisk: Time for the grand finale!Frisk dug her fingers straight into Asriel’s ribs, Chara tickled his bellybutton, and M.K. tickled all over and in between his toes with the toothbrushes. He was being tickled in his absolute worst spots and he bleated and screamed at the top of his lungs with the loudest laughter that ever came out of his mouth. Asriel: HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHA!!!!!!!!! BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!!!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!! *SNORT* BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!!!! BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!!!! *SNORT* HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!! BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!!!! *SNORT* HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!Asriel’s laughter was so loud that it echoed throughout the entire upstairs of the house. Even with the door closed! And Sans was apparently still asleep regardless of all the noise coming from the bedroom. Asriel was laughing, screaming, snorting, and bleating like he never did before and more tears ran down his cheeks. The other children were aware of his tears after thirty seconds and gave him some words of encouragement as they started to wrap things up. They really got him good! Asriel: HAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!! BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!!!! BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!!!! Chara: Just thirty more seconds Azzy! You got this!M.K.: You can do it Asriel! We believe in you! Frisk: Stay determined Azzy! As the children continued tickling Asriel for thirty more seconds, he had even more tears running down his cheeks and onto his chest. Not much longer now.Asriel: HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHA!!!!!!!!! BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!!!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHHAHAHA!!!!!!!!! *SNORT* BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!!!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!! Frisk, Chara, and M.K.: 5. 4. 3. 2. 1. And done!Asriel’s tickle torture was finally over. M.K. immediately started untying him while Frisk and Chara wiped away his tears. Frisk and Chara then softly pet Asriel to comfort him after tickling him like crazy for such a long period of time and the young boy was huffing and puffing by the time he finally stopped laughing. Asriel then rested briefly to catch his breath before attempting to speak to the other kids. After resting, he said something that surprised Frisk and M.K. to no end.Asriel: That was so much fun!! I can’t even remember the last time I laughed like that!!Frisk: What’s going on here?! You liked being tickled?! Why were you acting like you didn’t like it?!M.K.: Yeah, what gives Asriel?!Chara: Guys. Don’t you think I would’ve made you stop if I knew Asriel wasn’t enjoying himself? Asriel loves being tickled, even if it didn’t exactly appear that way.Asriel: It’s true! I really enjoyed it! You got a bit carried away near the end though. Those brushes were brutal!Frisk: We’re so sorry Azzy! We didn’t mean to take it that far! Chara knew that Asriel was enjoying himself all the while he was being tickled. Asriel used to love it when Chara, Toriel, and Asgore tickled him when he was younger. He was pretending like he wasn’t really enjoying himself because he thought it would make Frisk and M.K. want to tickle him more, and they did too. He really appreciated all of the breaks he was given but was a bit embarrassed when he bleated. He got over it rather quickly though. However, there were some things that he wasn’t particularly fond of. He wasn’t really a fan of being tied up but he understands why they did it though. He also wasn’t quite fond of Chara performing “This Little Temmie” on his toes, but he knew it made her happy, and he loves it when she’s happy. He also wondered why they wanted to tickle his feet with hairbrushes and toothbrushes as he thought that was quite torturous and unusual. Boy were those brushes effective! Asriel: It’s ok guys. No need to apologize. It was fun. And I think it’s about time I told you something. It’s about Mom and Dad… as well as… other things.Frisk: What is it Asriel?Asriel went on to tell Frisk and Chara about something he’s been keeping to himself for quite some time and he didn’t mind if M.K. heard what he was about to tell them. Ever since the barrier was destroyed, Asriel has been pretending that he’s ok with his parents not being back together when he’s actually been quite depressed about it. He also told them that he sometimes thinks about many of the horrible things that happened after the deaths of him and Chara a long time ago. Now that he and Chara were given second chances, they have been making up for their lost time and their family and friends were more than happy to help both of them think less about what happened in the past and that it wasn’t their fault. He just wishes his parents were together again like they used to be and he told Frisk, Chara, and M.K. that it turned out all he needed was a good laugh to help him take his mind off things. The three children started tearing up after hearing what Asriel had to say and all three of them gave him a hug. Asriel already knows that Frisk and Chara wish Toriel and Asgore were together again. Unlike them, Asriel has kept his feelings about his parents to himself, until now that is. Frisk and Chara talk about Toriel and Asgore practically all the time and it wasn’t until three nights ago when the two of them discovered that tickle fights and tickling in general helped make them feel better about everything going on in their lives. Like Chara, Asriel also felt that he was getting too old for tickling. But after his long tickle torture, Asriel too discovered that tickling made him feel better about everything going on in his life and that he was never too old to enjoy it. Tickling reminded Asriel and his siblings about the good times each of them had when they were younger. It reminded the three children of simpler times. After a long and rather emotional conversation, Frisk, Chara, and M.K. started petting Asriel like they promised to before tickling him for such a long period of time. Asriel’s reactions to being pet were incredibly adorable as the children caressed him all over his upper body and he loved every second it. After about ten minutes, Sans entered the room to check on the kids. Sans had a confused look on his face when he saw what the kids were doing.Sans: Heya kiddos.Asriel, Frisk, Chara, and M.K.: Hi Sans!Sans: Wait a sec. Are you kids… petting Asriel? Frisk: Why yes Sans, we are.Asriel: They asked me and I said it was ok. What’s the point of having incredibly soft fur if nobody’s going to pet it, am I right?Sans: Heh. You make a good point Kid. (I wonder if Tori would let me pet her if I asked.)Asriel: Do you want to pet me Sans? Sans: Sure Kid. *Starts stroking Asriel’s tummy* Asriel: *closes eyes and tilts head back slightly* (This feels so great!)Sans: Wow Kiddo… your fur really IS soft.Chara: Isn’t it amazing?Sans: Sure is… So kids, while I was sleeping, something really “funny” happened. Someone was “laughing uncontrollably” at all of these “rib tickling” jokes their three friends were telling them. Frisk, Chara, and M.K.: … *all of them have frightened looks on their faces*Asriel: … *has a puzzled look on his face* Sans: Man that was a crazy dream. Anyway, hope you kids had fun. Howzabout you come down and grab some dinner with me when you’re ready, k. *leaves the room*Frisk, Chara, and M.K.: *all three of them let out sighs of relief*The kids were completely speechless when Sans told them about his “dream” as if he knew what was going on upstairs the entire time. They decided not to question it though since it appeared they had gotten away with everything. When they were ready, they went downstairs to have dinner with Sans and spent some more time with him before going back upstairs to play for a few more hours before turning in for the night. Before going to bed, Asriel received a text from his mother: “Asriel, your father was wonderful tonight and I’m planning on seeing him again soon. I was glad I got to see today even if it was only for a short while. I hope you had fun tonight and I can’t wait to see you again tomorrow. Good night Asriel. Mama loves you! Xoxo.” Asriel started tearing up after reading the wonderful news and responded back saying: “I love you too Mom! You’re the best! Say hi to Dad for me.” Asriel then turned in for the night and Frisk wanted to snuggle with him, so he let her. Both of them got in Frisk’s bed and Asriel decided to sleep shirtless so Frisk could snuggle into his warm, soft fur. Chara was snuggling with M.K. in the other bed (She didn’t want him to feel left out) and it wasn’t too long until all them fell asleep. This was the happiest Asriel had been in six months, and he couldn’t ask for anything better. THE END.What Asriel’s bleating might sound like: (the brown goat) ................
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