South Seattle Fiction Writers – skill building and critique

Kids were always trying to cadge smokes off him on the street, but the bulge in his shirt was just his hearing aid battery. In spite of the glasses and the flesh-coloured button always screwed into his ear, Teddy couldn't see very well and often misunderstood the things people said to him. ... 'And I'll tell my mom I'm eating over at Chris's ... ................
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