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Class: 11?___Name: ___________________________________. List #: ___Name: ___________________________________. List #: ___Name: ___________________________________. List #: ___Name: ___________________________________. List #: ___The New York Times study show that 9 out of 12 girls are pressured to have a perfect body. Many girls around the world are pressured to have thin thighs, rounder buttocks, and a slim waist. That is what society today thinks every girl's body should look like. Girls are too pressured to have a perfect body because of self-esteem, influence, and bullying.First, girls are constantly looking for people to boost up their self-esteem. They post their pictures on social media for an instant response on how perfect they are. Girls want an instant response on their body or beauty. According to Teen Magazine 27% of young girls alone feel media pressures them to have a perfect body. If you ask mostly any girl, it does make them feel good when they have a lot of likes or comments on their pictures. In the end, girls are constantly looking for others to boost up their self-esteem. Secondly, girls are always looking at celebrities in the magazine in awe of their perfect bodies when really they are all photo-shopped. According to World News 69% of girls feel that magazines influence their bodies and how they should look. Girls should not feel pressured to have to go to school in shame of what their body type is. Some celebrities do not photo-shop. Miley Cyrus is an example, she is a very empowering woman and she hardly ever gets her pictures photo-shopped. On one of her photos she did not want her armpit hair photo-shopped out of the picture because she is human and not perfect. Girls should not compare themselves to celebrities. Others believe girls are not pressured to have perfect bodies because there are so many female empowerment groups in the world. For example, Girl Scouts of America, GirlStart, and Girl Talk are programs focused on empowering girls. However, we would not have a need for these programs if girls were not feeling pressured, especially from bullies. According to World News, 20% of girls ages 10-19 experience major depressions. Many girls do not want to go to school because they get called “fat” or “too skinny”. Girls should not be pressured to have a perfect body because people put that pressure on them. Girls should never feel pressured to have a perfect body because of self-esteem, celebrity influence, or bullying. Many girls end their lives due to their body structure. We need to stop pressuring girls, and start supporting them! ................
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