Elite Writing Skills Picture Composition

[Pages:4]Elite Writing Skills Picture Composition

Instructions for parents:

Primary 4-6

? Print out pages 2-3. ? Invite your child to complete the exercise. ? Please ask your child to use a dark pencil or pen. ? You may wish to set a timer (no more than 30-45 minutes is suggested). ? Submit the writing to me for marking through e-mail. ? You may scan the picture or take a photo with your mobile device (e.g. i-

Pad). ? Formats accepted: PDF or JPEG. ? I will return the marked work with comments and a model answer - usually

within 2-3 days. ? Go through the corrections with your child. ? Read through the model answer. ? A Skype lesson to discuss/improve the work may be requested through the

website. Preference will be given to parents who use this remote writing practice service.

Elite Writing Skills Picture Composition

Primary 4-6

Name____________________ P_____

Look at the pictures below and write a story in 60-80 words. You may use the key words to help you.

Mary/feel/sorry/stray/dog

keep/bring/animal/home

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Mum/shock/garden/animal/shelter

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Elite Writing Skills

Picture Composition

Primary 4-6

Name____________________ P_____

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Marks and Comments

Area

Marks

Content

Grammar/Language/Vocabulary

Organisation

Style

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Full Marks 50 30 10 10 100

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Elite Writing Skills Picture Composition

Model Answer Mary's Animal Shelter

Primary 4-6

Mary adores animals. She feels sorry for stray ones and one day she took a dog home. Her mum agreed to let her keep it.

However, Mary kept on bringing animals home. Each day, she brought another cat or dog.

One day, Mum came home, went into the garden and was shocked to see that it was like an animal shelter.

She said they didn't have enough space for them even though she knew Mary had a kind heart. In the end, they took the animals to the SPCA.

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