Dear Abby,

I’ve also made a copy of the story that has what you need to change highlighted in green. On the calendar, click on “Another way to look at it” on 10.25. DETAILS, DETAILS, DETAILS WILL MAKE THIS STORY COME ALIVE. THINK S.T.E.A.L. and SIGHT, SOUND, SMELL, TASTE, TOUCH to describe how Priscilla experiences the situation ................
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