How to write your peer edit letter:

For example, on p. 3, I had written, “While the Iversons were cool with their son’s outburst, few of the neighbors acquiesced.” Andre said it sounded odd to use the word “cool” in one place and a “vocab word” like “acquiesced” in another, especially in the same sentence. Reading over it, I decided he was right. ................
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