College Application & Essay Packet



|The Art of Writing Collegially tpp 60 |

By three methods we may learn wisdom: first, by reflection, which is noblest; second, by imitation, which is easiest; and third, by experience, which is the most bitter. (Confucius)

I don't care how much power, brilliance or energy you have, if you don't harness it and focus it on a specific target, and hold it there you're never going to accomplish as much as your ability warrants. 

~Zig Ziglar

Setting Effective Goals:

|Category |My Goals |

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You must have at least 20 goals to submit. Please number them as you list.

*10 points*

Career Research Assignment

(20 points)

| |Research Topic 1 |Research Topic 2 |

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|-What would your major be in school? | | |

|-How many years would you be in school? | | |

|-What type of school would you need to attend? | | |

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|One Technical School/University that offers this | | |

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|-What would you be paid? | | |

|-Is the job field growing or declining? | | |

|-What is the stress level involved in the career? | | |

|-Where would I have to live to be successful in | | |

|this career? | | |

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|Based on research, these careers are alike because… |

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|What would a school/employer want to know about me to see I am right for these careers? |

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Resume Drafting

AMELIA POND

101 Red Head Lane Clemmons, NC 27012 (336)555-5555 AmyPond@

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Objective:

• Secondary English teacher willing to work with yearbook, journalism, creative writing and other school clubs and/or coach swim teams.

Summary of Qualifications:

• Fifteen years of extensive experience in the education and instructional field.

• Well rounded in knowledge of subject matter and its relationship to the world.

• Vitalized in dealings with coworkers, parents, and administrators.

• Devoted to lifelong learning through all means.

• Knowledgeable of all technology mechanisms used in a classroom setting

• Proficient in Microsoft Word, Excel, Access, Publisher, PowerPoint, Internet Explorer, Netscape, Firefox, Adobe Acrobat and InDesign, Quark Express, Photoshop, Windows 95-XP.

• Led four teams to all conference championships.

• Highly cultured through travel and life experiences.

Education:

Bachelor of Arts-English (teacher licensure), University of North Carolina Wilmington, May 1995

Minor: Spanish

GPA: 3.98

RELEVANT EXPERIENCE:

English Teacher, West Forsyth High School, Winston Salem, NC Fall 2007- Present

• Teach 10th grade honors English

• Teach 11th grade honors and regular English

• Teach 12th grade English

• Develop and execute lesson plans for both classrooms with regard to specific curriculums and individual learning abilities

• Manage classroom behavior

• Communicate within a team of teachers for a positive instructional environment

• Attend various programs and meetings to increase professional development

Graduation Project Coordinator, West Forsyth High School, Winston Salem, NC Fall 2008

• Organize the Graduation Project State requirement for both junior and senior students

• Develop school wide professional development to aid in assessing and assisting with Graduation Project

• Communicate to and within the Graduation Project Committee

• Communicate and develop relationships within the community and school

English Teacher, John T. Hoggard High School, Wilmington, NC, May 1995-Spring 2007

• Teach 11th grade honors and regular English

• Teach 12th grade honors English

• Develop and execute lesson plans with regard to specific curriculums and individual learning abilities

• Manage classroom behavior

• Communicate within a team of teachers for a positive instructional environment

• Attend various programs and meetings to increase professional development

OTHER EXPERIENCES:

Key Club, Co-Faculty Sponsor, 2010-2011

Children’s Cancer Support Club, Faculty Sponsor, 2009-2010

Editorial Intern, Waterfront Newspaper, Swansea, Wales, Spring 1993

Associate, Kohl’s Department Store, Wilmington, Summer 1994

Publishing Practicum Participant, UNCW Publishing Lab, Wilmington, Spring 1995

VOLUNTEER WORK:

Volunteer, Hope Pregnancy Care Center, King, NC, Summer 1997-Spring 2007

Small Group Leader, UNCW Intervarsity, Wilmington, NC, Fall 1993-Spring 1995

Volunteer Counselor, Camp Carefree, Summer 2001

HONORS:

Departmental Scholarship, Fall 1994

Dean’s list, 8 semesters

Chancellor’s Achievement Award, 8 semesters

REFERENCES:

Kurt Telford, Principal, West Forsyth High School, Clemmons, NC

Phone: 336-712-4400

Email: ktelford@wsfcs.k12.nc.us

Christine Ebert, Media Coordinator, West Forsyth High School, Clemmons, NC

Phone: 336-712-4400

Email: cpebert@wsfcs.k12.nc.us

Stuart Egan, English Department Chair, West Forsyth High School, Clemmons, NC

Phone: 336-712-4400

Email: saegan@wsfcs.k12.nc.us

Your assignment is simple; create a personal resume based on the template above. If you already have a resume, you may print it out and turn it in. However, if you do not, this is a great time to make your resume stand out and become more career or college specific. Keeping a list of your activities and jobs is always wise. Keeping it up to date is even wiser. Use the advice and strategies provided to you to increase your knowledge and make your resume stand out. That is the key to job procurement.

Resume Point Value: 20

College Essay Assignment

Many of you will be asked to write a personal essay this year for either admission to a college/university or for consideration for a scholarship. Typically, these assignments force you to focus on yourself, your values and beliefs, the experiences and people who have influenced you, and your personal and professional goals. Your assignment is to begin the process of thinking about what you will write for your essays for college admission and/or scholarships. You will be writing one essay for this class, which you should be able to use for your college and/or scholarship applications.

For this assignment, write 250 words for the essay. Self reflection is an important life skill, so regardless of your future intentions, the essays can provide you an opportunity to really explore your own personal ambitions for life. Use your list of goals to help guide your thinking.

Essay Topic (250-500 words):

1. What you can Carry Topic

2. You have just completed your 300-page autobiography. Please submit page 217.

3. Think about something you never did in high school but wish you had. Discuss why you didn’t do this, why you wish you had, and what you think/hope the difference would have been.

4. Discuss some issue of personal, local, national, or international concern and its importance to you.

Other Requirements:

❑ Typed, double spaced*

❑ Times New Roman 12 Font

❑ 1 inch margins

❑ MLA Format

*rough drafts may be hand written but the handwriting must be NICE and LEGIBLE in BLUE or BLACK ink.

|Due Dates |Essay type |Point Value |

| |Rough draft of essay (250-500 words) |20 points |

| |Peer edit of essay |10 points |

| |Final draft of essay (250-500 words) |60 points |

|TPP: 90 points |

Essay Choice 1

(5 points)Indirectly characterize yourself.

I. Think of an object/idea (or several) that represents you. What is it? Describe it in detail.

II. Describe how this object/idea indirectly characterizes you. What does it tell others about you?

III. Name some personality traits associated with your object/idea

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Now, turn your responses into an essay…Some ways to start---but make sure you are creative!

For ________ years I have carried ___________. I have had to carry______________. I proudly carry _______________.

Example: (276 words)

For more than ten years I have carried “Forever” in my wallet. While literally I only carry a worn pink piece of eight by ten paper with faded black ink that whispers the song by the Beach Boys in my mind, what I really carry is a promise.

The room is colder than I remember. I can hear the air working overtime trying to maintain the temperature while the heat intensifies outside. I sit in the simple, black rubber chair staring at my hands and wondering if I made a mistake. The tiny gift box sits beside me and I feel the nervous butterflies tap-dancing in my stomach. When he walks in, I can’t help but smile. He sits down next to me and says three words, but not the three you might expect. He says, “I’ll remember forever.” I hand him the box and thank him, while trying to fight back the tears and he barely has time to grasp it before we are interrupted by a flood of people and I walk away feeling the loss acutely. The card, a thank you for the tiny box, is waiting for me in my cubbyhole the next day, and as the pink slip of eight by ten paper flutters out I know I’ll remember forever too.

Occasionally, I will unfold this promise and slowly trace the worn creases of the paper and remember a time of innocence, love, and excitement. I will remember who I was, who I am and who I want to become and I will whisper a prayer for the human race to hold onto the gift of promise forever like I do.

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Rough draft-grade based on completion

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|Submitted a peer edit that was completed by the essay writer? | |10 |

|Did you follow the length requirement? | |5 |

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|Is it written nicely, following all requirements? | |5 |

|Total | |20 |

Final Draft Grade based on Content

|500 word essay |Points Earned |Points Possible |

|Did you answer the question appropriately? | |25 |

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|Clear answer to the prompt | | |

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|Did you follow the length requirement? | |10 |

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|Voice (prompt is made personal) (unique flair is added to the prompt) | |10 |

|Grammar/ Mechanics | |5 |

|Formatting (1 inch margins; Times New Roman; Double Spaced; MLA) | |10 |

|Total | |60 |

|College Application Essay Grammar & Usage Check (self edit)—USE YOUR WRITING HANDBOOK! |

|College Application Essay Peer Edit |

|You must read someone’s essay and answer these questions |

First Impression:

1. Did you enjoy reading the essay? Explain why or why not.

2. Did the concluding statements leave you with a positive feeling about the applicant? Explain.

3. Write three suggestions to the applicant about how to make the essay more interesting/vibrant.

Content

4. What specific aspect of his/her life does the applicant write about? Is it focused?

5. What can the applicant offer the school?

6. Were there any parts of the essay that didn’t stay focused on the main topic? Explain.

7. Ask three questions of the applicant.

Style

8. Is that paper grammatically correct? Use the self-edit sheet (above) to be sure. Make all grammar notes directly on the essay.

9. Does the applicant use words well? Circle words that you thought were good choices.

10. What is the applicant’s personality in this essay?

Final Decision

11. Would you admit this applicant to your school based solely on this essay? Explain why or why not.

|Letters of Recommendation |

When you ask for letters of recommendation, consider the following:

1. Ask someone who knows you well and who can communicate that knowledge. Recommendations ask, “How long and in what capacity have you known this individual.” Knowing you for only a week or two as a student in this class this year will not lead the admissions people to trust the stated opinions. Choose someone who has taught or coached or employed you for at least several months.

2. Ask well ahead of time and ask whether the teacher feels (s)he can be positive. If (s)he hesitates, ask someone else!

3. Proved a stamped envelope along with the correct forms filled out fully for your part of the information.

4. Provide a resume of your accomplishments along with your interests, goals, and other pertinent information so that the teacher can add background to the letter.

5. Waive your rights. Teachers will write more.

6. Make sure you ask politely if the letter has been completed about a week before the deadline. “Mr. X, I want to thank you for writing my letter to ______. I’m just checking today to see if my file is complete. Have you had a chance to get to the letter? “

7. Give appropriate thanks. Your writers usually spend hours composing these letters on your behalf, and a word of thanks (a real note) or other small, tangible gift is a simple courtesy.

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Respond to the following quote using the questions as a guide. You must have 5-7 sentences of response.

1. Paraphrase this quote. 2. Do you agree with Ziglar’s statement? Explain why or why not. 3. Explain how this quote could apply to you as you start your senior year. 4. What does Ziglar mean by “specific target”? What are some examples? 5. Based on the quote, how would you describe Mr. Ziglar (teacher, student, slacker, bum, athlete, artist etc.)? Defend your response. (5 points)

If you have not done so, you are to go online to the school(s) to which you expect to apply. If an essay is required, print the topics they require for both long and short essays. In your final draft, you are to use the topic as your title and put the name of the college in parenthesis. (If the college of your choice does not have the essay accessible to you via the website choose one of the prompts below or come talk to me.)

You are trying to “sell” yourself as an “asset” to the school!

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