Revising and Adding Commentary Linking Devices to Meaning ...

good example of diction is when he uses the words “exotic corner.” (3) He could have just said cool corner or amazing corner, but he uses good word choice (or diction) to make the story more enticing. (4) Another good example of diction is when he uses the word “embarked.” (5) He could have just used the word “went” or “traveled.” ................
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