Developing a Strong Thesis - Northwestern University
Contributor: C. Yarnoff, The Writing Program, csy771@northwestern.edu
Posted: 2011
Comment: This handout identifies the criteria for a strong thesis in an analytical paper.
Developing a Strong Thesis
Keep these criteria in mind in order to develop a strong thesis for an analytical essay:
1. Make sure the thesis is well-focused. Avoid thesis statements that take on too many ideas, especially when you’re writing a relatively short essay. For instance, avoid a thesis like this:
o “Derek Bok’s views on higher education are wrong.” Instead, focus on a particular view that you believe is significant and that you disagree with.
2. Make sure the thesis is arguable. Express your thesis as a general statement that reasonable readers may disagree with and will expect you to prove in the course of your paper. Here are two thesis statements that are not sufficiently arguable:
o “I disagree with Derek Bok’s view that universities have a responsibility to develop students into responsible citizens.” The problem with this thesis is that it states a fact: the author disagrees with Derek Bok’s view. The reader won’t argue back, “No, you don’t really disagree with Derek Bok’s view.”
o “There are strengths and weaknesses in Derek Bok’s view that universities should develop students into responsible citizens.” The problem with this thesis is that virtually all articles have strengths and weaknesses, so the reader is unlikely to find much to disagree with in the thesis.
3. Make sure the thesis directly addresses the article you’re analyzing. Your instructor will be looking to make sure that you are responding directly to the assigned reading. Therefore, avoid a thesis like this:
o “Universities do not have a responsibility to develop students into responsible citizens.” To remedy the problem, you could include Bok’s name in the thesis:
• “Derek Bok fails to make a convincing argument that universities should develop students into responsible citizens.”
4. Make sure the thesis is informative. It should give readers an idea of the main points you’ll cover in the body of the essay. Sometimes, this means expanding your thesis to more than one sentence, as in the following example:
o “Derek Bok fails to make a convincing argument that universities should develop students into responsible citizens. He bases his argument on two faulty assumptions: 1) Because higher education was in the past concerned with citizenship, it should continue to be so; and 2) Individual grassroots activities are less effective than broad governmental action.”
NOTE: While you may include your opposing view of what the purpose of a college education is in your thesis, you don’t have to. Instead, you may bring that up towards the end of the essay as an implication of your thesis.
5. Avoid vague words in the thesis:
o Verbs, e.g., seems, could, may, might, deal with
o Modifiers, e.g., some, perhaps, probably, effective/ineffective, positive/negative, good/bad
o Nouns, e.g., issue, thing, situation
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