Bad Email Example - Mounds View Public Schools
Bad Email Example
To: johndoe@somecompnay.cm CC: Subject: Hey...wazzup? Attachment: Picture of Me
Hey, So waz UR job like??????? I'm kinda interested in mrktg but I'm not sure. How offen are U board at work? I'm board ALL THE TIME at skool !!! Since we both like baseball, we should go to a Twins game together next season, what do U think? Here's my personal email since this one will shut off after this thing: imawesome@ or if you wanna call me, my cell number is (612)555-9876. U should totally drop me a line and we'll hang out.
Oh yeah....I'm sposed to send U a question....what skool did you go to after high skool? C ya
This above email message has many errors in it. If you look closely, the email address is typed wrong; having one character off on an email address will result in the email message not getting through. Other errors include the teacher was not CCed, the subject line is incorrect, an attachment was included, it contains numerous spelling and grammar errors, texting language is used, a funky font was chosen and the student shared personal contact information.
Good Email Example
See below for proper formatting. This email is done correctly with each guideline being met.
Mentor's email address spelled correctly, CC teacher's email, and use the subject "eMentors Topic ___"
Introduction: Hello/Dear ____,
Paragraph one: Answer any questions your mentor asked in a previous email. Ask them follow-up questions.
Paragraph two: Discuss the Guiding Questions in detail. Talk about how the prompt relates to your life and your experiences at school or work.
Paragraph three: Ask the mentor about his/her job and how the Guiding Questions relate to daily tasks.
Closing: Sincerely/Thank you,
To: johndoe@ CC: myteacher@ Subject: eMentors Topic: College Experience Attachment:
Hello John,
In response to your question last week, I am involved in the Student Senate and the Varsity Volleyball team. Do you have any interesting hobbies?
I was curious if you went to college after graduating from high school and, if so, which one did you attend? I'm interested in Business Management and was hoping you could give me any idea about which college to choose or an internship or job that may help me improve my college applications.
Thank you and I look forward to your next message,
Jenna Jones
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