EXPOSITORY ESSAY - SCIENCE FAIR PROJECT-



EXPOSITORY ESSAY - SCIENCE FAIR PROJECT-

Student details:

Name Sarunya Chotsupa Class M EP 5/1 Number 12

Weebly ID 29788. Mobile number 0853947433……………………………………..

Email mint_367@ Published file name Egg in the Bottle

Table of Contents

1. TABLE OF CONTENTS

2. FORMATIVE REQUIREMENTS COVER

3. BRAINSTORM / RESEARCH (ideas, reference paper, mind-map)

4. EXAMPLE OF PROJECT (cut/paste from reference paper.)

5. GRAPHIC ORGANIZER (flow chart)

6. ESSAY MAP

7. ORIGINAL DRAFT: (Name of peer who revised)

8. REVISED DRAFT: (Name of peer who edited)

9. PUBLISHED WORK- ORIGINAL

10. RUBRIC (self graded)

11. PUBLISHED WORK - TEACHER’S COMMENTS

Publishing Checklist

( PREVIEW PUBLISHED ON HOMEPAGE

( COMMENTS POSTED TO LEARNING GROUP’S BLOGS

( REFERENCES AND CITING COMPLETE

Comments:

Friday 26th November, 2010 Teacher: Neville

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Expository Essay- Science Fair Project.(One page essay)

Students are expected to explain the process of a Science Fair Project,

as published in Teaching ESOL Through Science Fair Experiments, by Judie Haynes.

Structure Expository Essay, published on student’s weblog (including all prewriting).

Procedure Students log on to class weblog/ formative page and download the following files: EXPOSITORY SCIENCE FORMATIVE SCIENCE PROJECT

The EXPOSITORY SCIENCE FORMATIVE file should be immediately published onto the student’s weblog.

The above files contain all the information needed to complete this exercise.

Students’ production

By Wednesday 8th December, 2010, students will have completed their work.

Students are required to publish updates of their file, progressively.

Teacher will then comment on individual student’s 9. PUBLISHED WORK- ORIGINAL and email it to them for pasting to the final page of their file;11.PUBLISHED WORK - TEACHER’S COMMENTS

Objectives

Students will display knowledge of the elements of an Expository Essay by explaining the process, in logical order, for a science fair experiment.



PROJECT EXAMPLE

Egg in a Bottle

Question

What happens when air molecules expand?

Hypothesis

I think that air pressure will make the egg fit through the neck of a bottle.

Materials

Hard-boiled egg

A glass bottle

Piece of paper

Matches

Procedure

1. Hard boil an egg.

2. Take the shell off the egg.

3. Light a small piece of paper and drop it into the bottle.

4. Put the egg on the neck of the bottle.

Results

The egg popped into the bottle.

Conclusion

The fire makes the air molecules move further apart and expand. The pressure pulls the

egg into the bottle.

BRAINSTORMING, RESEARCH, MIND-MAP

GRAPHIC ORGANIZER

ESSAY MAP

ORIGINAL DRAFT

I’m

Have you ever seen the bigger thing into the smaller mouth’s bottle? If you want to do I ‘am proudly to present the interesting experiment for you, Egg in bottle. If you want to know ‘Why is in the bottle’ What is a key of this work’ you can read it into the next paragraphs.

First step, you should think about why the experiment that you‘re interested. To me, I want to know Egg in bottle.

Second step, it it’s important for you to make the Hypothesis. It’s a guess the event will happen. In this case, hypothesis is I think that air pressure will make the egg fit through the neck of a bottle.

Forget

Third step, you must prepare materials of experiment. Don’t forgot to check materials. In this project, I should had Hard-boiled egg, a glass bottle, Piece of paper, Matches

Forth step is variable; it’s something that able or liable to change in my project, the Size of egg and mouth’s bottle.

Now, it’s time to start. Please carefully, because it’s very important process. First, Hard boil an egg. Then to Take the shell off the egg. Next, Light a small pieces piece of paper and drop it into the bottle .Finally Put put the egg on the neck of the bottle.

Fifth step, you must see this experiment carefully because you should get the Result. The meaning of result is something that follows as a consequence. In this project is the egg popped into the bottle.

Sixth step, you will show the result from graph or tables and you should be conclude all of this process that can understand easily.

The key of this story is the molecules. It’s is the smallest physical unit of a substance. And this experiment had shown the step of the process.

REVISED DRAFT

Have you ever seen the bigger thing into the smaller mouth’s bottle? If you want to do I’m ‘proudly to present the interesting experiment for you, Egg in bottle. If you want to know ‘Why is in the bottle’ What is a key of this work’ you can read it into the next paragraphs.

First step, you should think about the experiment that you‘re interested. To me, I want to know Egg in bottle.

Second step, its important for you to make the Hypothesis. It’s a guess the event will happen. In this case, hypothesis is I think that air pressure will make the egg fit through the neck of a bottle.

Third step, you must prepare materials of experiment. Don’t forget to check materials. In this project, I should had Hard-boiled egg, a glass bottle, Piece of paper, Matches

Forth step is variable; it’s something that able or liable to change in my project, Size of egg

and mouth’s bottle.

Now, it’s time to start. Please carefully, because it’s very important process. First, Hard boil an egg. Then Take the shell off the egg. Next, Light a small piece of paper and drop it into the bottle .Finally put the egg on the neck of the bottle.

Fifth step, you must see this experiment carefully because you should get the Result. The meaning of result is something that follows as a consequence. In this project is egg popped into the bottle.

Sixth step, you will show the result from graph or tables and you should conclude all of this process that can understand easily.

The key of this story is the molecules. It’s the smallest physical unit of a substance. And this experiment had show the step of the process.

PUBLISHED WORK

Have you ever seen the bigger thing into the smaller mouth’s bottle? If you want to do I’m ‘proudly to present the interesting experiment for you, Egg in bottle. If you want to know ‘Why is in the bottle’ What is a key of this work’ you can read it into the next paragraphs.

First step, you should think about the experiment that you‘re interested. To me, I want to know Egg in bottle.

Second step, its important for you to make the Hypothesis. It’s a guess the event will happen. In this case, hypothesis is I think that air pressure will make the egg fit through the neck of a bottle.

Third step, you must prepare materials of experiment. Don’t forget to check materials. In this project, I should had Hard-boiled egg, a glass bottle, Piece of paper, Matches

Forth step is variable; it’s something that able or liable to change in my project, Size of egg

and mouth’s bottle.

Now, it’s time to start. Please carefully, because it’s very important process. First, Hard boil an egg. Then Take the shell off the egg. Next, Light a small piece of paper and drop it into the bottle .Finally put the egg on the neck of the bottle.

Fifth step, you must see this experiment carefully because you should get the Result. The meaning of result is something that follows as a consequence. In this project is egg popped into the bottle.

Sixth step, you will show the result from graph or tables and you should conclude all of this process that can understand easily.

The key of this story is the molecules. It’s the smallest physical unit of a substance. And this experiment had show the step of the process.

Expository- Science Fair

|Objective |Emerging 1 |Developing 2 |Accomplished 3 |Exemplary 4 |Score |

|Uniform spacing | | | | |3 |

|Appropriate use of font style, | | | | |3 |

|sizes and colors. | | | | | |

|Appealing use of white space | | | | |2 |

|Effective integration of text and| | | |No penalty |4 |

|illustrations, photos, charts, | | | | | |

|graphs, maps and tables. | | | | | |

|Skillful and tasteful use of | | | | |2 |

|colors in layout. | | | | | |

|The blog reflects the personality| | | | |3 |

|of the writer. | | | | | |

|EXPOSITORY ESSAY ELEMENTS |Writing does not display |Contains all elements but does|All elements are present and |Expository Structure exceeds |3 |

|Gives facts. Explains. Steps in a|elements of an Expository |not meet criteria in one or |complete. |requirement | |

|process. Present ideas in logical|Essay |more | | | |

|order, correct sequence. | | | | | |

|ESSAY STRUCTURE |Basic Structure is |Structure is generally evident |Structure is complete |Structure exceeds standards and |2 |

|INTRO- contains strong Purpose of|incomplete. Display little |and mostly correct | |enhances the writing | |

|Writing. |structure. | | | | |

|PARAGRAPHS-Topic sentence, plus | | | | | |

|supporting ideas and examples. | | | | | |

|Transitional words used. | | | | | |

|CONCLUSION- links back to P.O.W. | | | | | |

PUBLISHED WORK- TEACHER’S COMMENTS

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The key of this story is the molecules. It’s is the smallest physical unit of a substance. And this experiment had shown the step of the process.

Supporting details

Detail supporting Main idea and further describe, explain, define, or give examples

Supporting details 8

The fire makes the air molecules move further apart and expand. The pressure pulls the egg into the bottle.

Supporting details 7

Show the result from

table and graph.

Supporting details 5 1. Hard boil an egg. 2. Take the shell off the egg. 3. Light a small piece of paper and drop it into the bottle. 4. Put the egg on the neck of the bottle.

Supporting details 3

-Hard boiled egg

-A glass bottle

-Piece of paper

-Matches

Supporting details 6

The egg popped into the bottle.

Supporting details 4

Size of egg and

mouth’s bottle

Supporting details 2

I think that air pressure will make the egg fit through the neck of a bottle.

Supporting details 1

What happens when air molecules expand?

Have you ever seen the bigger thing into the smaller mouth’s bottle? If you want to do I ‘am proudly to present the interesting experiment for you, Egg in bottle. If you want to know ‘Why is in the bottle’ What is a key of this work’ you can read it into the next paragraphs.

Main idea 8

Conclusion

Main idea 7

Presentation

Main idea 5

Procedure

Main idea 3

Material

Main idea 6

Result

Main idea 4

Variable

Main idea 2

Hypothesis

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Main Ideas

Support P.O.W. Fact, Explain, Define, Other elements

Introduction

Hook, Background, Purpose of Writing, Main ideas

Main idea 1

Egg in bottle

Conclusion

Summarize Main ideas, Link to P.O.W. Make a point

NEXT: Procedure

1. Hard boil an egg.

2. Take the shell off the egg.

3. Light a small piece of paper and drop it into the bottle.

4. Put the egg on the neck of the bottle.

NEXT: Results

The egg popped into the bottle.

NEXT: Presentation

Show the result from table and

graph.

NEXT: Variable

Size of egg and size of

mouth’s bottle

NEXT: Materials

-Hard-boiled egg

-A glass bottle

-Piece of paper

-Matches

NEXT: Hypothesis

I think that air pressure will make the egg fit through the neck of a bottle.

FIRST: Question

What happens when air molecules expand?

LAST: Conclusion

The fire makes the air molecules move further apart and expand. The pressure pulls the egg into the bottle.

TOPIC:

Egg and bottle

EGG IN BOTTLE

Hypothesis

I think that air pressure will make the egg fit through the neck of a bottle.

Question

What happens when air molecules expand?

Materials

-Hard-boiled egg

-A glass bottle

-Piece of paper

-Matches

Procedure

1. Hard boil an egg.

2. Take the shell off the egg.

3. Light a small piece of paper and drop it into the bottle.

4. Put the egg on the neck of the bottle.

Results

The egg popped into the bottle.

The fire makes the air molecules move further apart and expand. The pressure pulls the

egg into the bottle.

Conclusion

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