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Short Story Analysis -- Gordimer

Story Name Plot summary characters Setting structure/ syntax/diction point of view/ meaning/tone symbols/

use/effect dialogue tense/language voice theme/irony imagery/motifs

Jump

Some Are Born to Sweet Delight

|A man is in a hotel room. While there, he recalls his past and how he got to that point. He was arrested while taking photos, as a spy. In prison, he realigned himself.

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-Family rents out room to foreigner (Rad)

-Nice to sick girl (Vera)

-Inert, talk (Rad)

-Sex in Park

-Pregnant

-Worried about abortion

- decide on marriage

- send to Rad’s Fam.

-Rad packs bomb in suitcase

-plane explodes, all die. |The man is never named

His mom (indirect character)

Girl in his room

Commander

-Vera: The girl, optimist, searching for happiness, naïve.

-Vera’s parents : don’t trust Rad, typical

-Rad: terrorist, quiet, reserved, “I’ve chosen you” |Primarily the inside of a hotel room, but settings vary with his memories of the War, the prison, etc.

There is music playing in the room that makes him remember.

Emphasizes author’s use of boundaries.

England (?)

-hate Irish, old empire in 1st paragraph.

- foreign tension

- divide and mistrust |Very little to no dialogue. Memories of conversations not in quotes.

Man’s thinking process is scattered.

Follows the music.

Hard to realize when there is dialogue.

No quotation marks

Dashes

No defined dialogue

- Ambiguity: Dashes as dashes + quotes

Personal |Varies between past and present tense.

Detatched descriptions (surreal)

Blurred transitions

Basic language

- but not simplistic

Past tense |Usually 3rd Person Limited.

Sometimes shifts into 1st person as the man.

Third person

Isolates Rad

Shows more of Vera, but is still the outsider’s view

-persuades reader to believe Vera

|Impersonal & detached tone

Answers third person questions in first person narrative. (Sudden switches back to “He”)

Author blurs transitions and dialogue to make moments dreamlike. Emphasizes disorientation and confusions of the man.

Author making a statement about the nature of war and brutality (bad on both side, confusing)(futility)(choices we face in these situations.)

Terrorism is bad/ pointless

-kill innocent people( don’t know why killed

-satisfies no one

Violence = (

Relationships – Don’t truly know people.

Irony

-lover was a terrorist

-title

- Baby born to death

Indifferent tone

Exasperated |Jumping – Parachutes in war, man considers jumping (suicide) as an answer but stops.

Music – Plot follows structure of the music playing. (brings him to the past)

Room described with imagery.

Baby

- birth/ life

- innocence

Plane crash

- death of society

- potato famine deaths

Allusion

- William Blake’s “Auguries of Innocence” | |

Short Story Analysis -- Gordimer

Story Name Plot summary characters Setting structure/ syntax/diction point of view/ meaning/tone symbols/

use/effect dialogue tense/language voice theme/irony imagery/motifs

The Moment Before the Gun went Off

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Safe Houses

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Farmer accidentally shoots farmhand (who is actually his son)

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A criminal named Harry meets a wealthy woman, Sylvie, on a bus, pays for her bus fare and ends up going to her house. They end up having an affair while her husband is away. He leaves to go to a small town and gets arrested. |

Marais van Der yver

Lucas

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“Harry”

Sylvie

Husband (not present)

Servant (only black in the story |

South Africa

( Changes of scope coordinates with tone

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Johannesburg; bus; Sylvie’s house |

Dialogue signaled by dashes – very little dialogue

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Much dialogue, esp. compared to Gordimer’s other stories; mostly just between Harry and Sylvie.

The story is very much “in the moment” although it is written in past tense. |

Past tense, perspective changes, third person omniscient.

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Limited dialogue; mainly descriptions; blatant, unhindered diction is unassuming; lays ground work for you to draw your own conclusions (ex: whether or not there actually is a husband, if he’s actually coming home.

Ambiguous: who is ignorant? Harry? Sylvie? Servant? Who is lying? |

Third person omniscient

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3rd person limited (pretty much only “Harry” |

Tone changes with perspective irony: everyone perceives the incident as a racist hate crime nut he is truly mourning the accident.

Irony: the hunting brings them together but results in the boy’s death.

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Dramatic irony of woman’s lack of knowledge of man’s criminal nature

Theme: finding safety in secrecy -> naïveté

Tone: detached; the content of the man’s thoughts is secretive, plotting, questioning

Big question throughout: how much does Sylvie know?

Why does he go to a place that is not safe? After his temporary freedom with Sylvie (freedom to have a relationship – not to be an outsider), “Harry” knows that this experience is as free as he will ever be able to live, so he submits to authority and is taken off to jail. |

Imagery of the funeral and the moment before the gun went off.

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The fling between “Harry” and Sylvie represents freedom from his reality (criminal restrictions) | |

Short Story Analysis -- Gordimer

Story Name Plot summary characters Setting structure/ syntax/diction point of view/ meaning/tone symbols/

use/effect dialogue tense/language voice theme/irony imagery/motifs

The Ultimate Safari

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Once Upon a Time

|A family unit: kids, grandmother and grandfather, escape a war zone in Mozambique via a game preserve in S. Africa. Hardships / lions/ grandfather goes MIA/ little food / lots of suffering/ very sad. The group finds the refugee camp. White reporters interview grandmother; realization: we have no home. Uplifting stuff. (

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Anecdote – Frame

Narrator hears a sound at night and fears for safety and lack of security – prompting her to tell a “children’s” story.

Story – Mounting paranoia in suburbs due to increasing conflict nearby, first by riots and then by loafers and tsotsis. Ultimately the addition of barbed wire causes a child to be caught after hearing a story of a prince climbing through a briar patch. |Grandmother

Little girl (narrator)

Older brother

Younger brother

Group they travel with

reporter

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Narrator (author?)

Man and his wife

Little boy

Gardner

Housemaid

Cat

Rioters

Bums

Dog |Mozambique war zone:

Bleak / hardships

Kruger Park:

Lions

Desert

No food

Unforgiving

Refugee camp:

Bleak

No hope of return

Fishbowl

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South Africa in terms of places and people (tsotisis and baas), along with objects.

References to apartheid and separation of races. Back story for conflict. |Short dialogue with no quotations

Mostly first person POV, internal conversation

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No dialogue.

Framed

Reverse fairy tale: a standard story structure of beginning, middle, end BUT the ending is not happily ever after.

|Simple – from child’s eyes

Lack of maturity or appreciation of the gravity of the situation

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Simple grammatical structure, but elevated diction. Past tense for both parts, typical of story telling. All CAPS used for the signs. |

Little girl

First person

Simplistic

Immature

Naïve

Limited

Reader must infer plot changes

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First person POV in the frame. Third person omniscient for the story.

Distant but concerned. |“Ultimate Safari”:

White people go on safari for fun.

Reality of survival for natives.

Ironic detachment of the outside world from those involved in conflict.

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Irony in the title.

Parody of a fairy tale ending in tragedy.

Play on words in title.

Basic theme of fear of the unknown. “Protection” ultimately harms the people erecting protection.

Sheltering of an issue does not create protection. It ruins what you try to protect.

Distant tone.

Ambiguous ending…? Make a case. |Symbols:

Shoes – humanity

Grandmother = perseverance

Reporter = ignorance

Vultures = death and helplessness

Lions = danger

Roof = protection

Images:

Lion attack, descriptive detail, reader feels fear

Motif:

Fine line between humans and animals

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Protection = retardation of life.

Warning signs symbolize protection.

South Africa setting comes from imagery and description of surroundings.

Walls are a motif of_________? | |

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