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IE – Spring 2020 – Week 3 and 4 “My Hometown”Read the paragraphs below. Some of the errors have been explained in (brackets), and other errors have not. Can you correct and explain the errors in red?What errors did you make?How can you improve your paragraph?As always, these paragraphs have been proof-read for;Form(proper/single paragraph)Content(detailed/interesting paragraph / Is there anything missing or unnecessary?)Common Errors(capitalization, article use etc.)NOTE:Common Errors *paragraph form - use transition phrases to move from one idea/topic to another. You don’t need to start a new paragraph if you asked to write 200-to 250 words on a single topic (Furthermore, As well, Another point of interest in my hometown is…Interestingly….there are so many to choose) *Sentence fragment (conjunctions) *word choice – “good” find a more precise meaning of good….time to expand your vocabulary!Week 3 - Emailed Homework ParagraphYu Min-ahPark Jung-whanHong Jung-minKim Yoo-jinYeo Seon-guSin Min-seoHong Jung-minKwon Dae-youLee Sae-ranHeo Su-bin Song Ha-jeong Chae So-hyun Lee Seul-gi Park Da-eunLee Jeong-ranSelf -intro from last week…Park Da-eunHan Sung-junLee Jung-ran(X) –spelling errors! / prepositions / repetition About My Hometown???? ? ? ? ? ?My home town is Iksan, which is located in Jeollabuk-do in the northwest of Korea(not true! ? ) beside (north of) Jeonju. I think Iksan is a very small city because it takes only twenty minutes from beginning to the end of Iksan. However, there are many local specialties in Iksan.(repetititive) For example, Oriental melons are famous in Iksan for the(ir) taste which is much more sweeter and fresher than (in) any other areas. Also, Iksan has a "Mireuksa Temple" which is one of the national treauseres . Although it is (it has no) not local specialties, Iksan has another good (synonm?) feature. For instance, Iksan is a transportation center of Jeollabuk-do, so transportation is more convenient than any other Jeollabuk-do regions. As a long- lived person(word choice – as a person who has lived a long time in) in Iksan I think the most well kowned eatry is "Jang Seung-gol" because a reservation must be made one week in advance to eat at this restaurant. This restaurant is a Korean resturant, and its main menu is duck meat. This place is popular because it is not too greasy or irritating unlike other restaurants selling duck meat. I have been living in Iksan since I was born, so when I was in highschool I wanted to go to a university as far away as possible from Iksan because I wanted to try different experiences in other regions. However, after becoming an adult, I felt there is no place that could stabilize me (word choice – “grounds me”) as much as my hometown. In conclusion, although Iksan is a small city, it has many local specialties and cultural heritage. Also, the transportantion is convenient and have lots of delicious restaurants, so why don't you have a fine experience in Iksan!(X) – numeral(formal) – spell quantity / pronouns to avoid repetition / My hometown, Gimhae, is a boring city?located west of Busan and east of Changwon.?I’ve been living in this city for more than 19 years, and?the city(it) grew but?didn’t even really change. It might just be me, but the only meaningfully?different?thing?is Busan-Gimhae Light Rail Transit.?Thus, I will write about the only interesting thing about Gimhae: its history. Though it’s common to see towns with millennia-old history in the Old World, Gimhae is different. The area of Gimhae has been settled since time immemorial,?and it had functioned as a trade hub since the Bronze Age. Gimhae was a powerhouse of the region, well demonstrated by one of the largest dolmen in South Korea – Gusan-dong Dolmen – and the golden age of Geumgwan Gaya, the city-state that has been located around the central Gimhae, which happened?in the?3rd?century AD. Geumgwan Gaya’s downfall started at the turn of the 5th?century?when?Geumgwan?Gaya was invaded by Gwanggaeto the Great of Goguryeo, which resulted in losing the leadership of the Gaya Confederacy.?The downfall?culminated in being conquered by the much more centralized Silla?in 532;?the Gaya Confederacy’s remaining city-states soon followed after.?(follow and after are synonyms) Sadly, it also was the end of?the interesting part of Gimhae’s history.?As you can see,?Gimhae pales in comparison with cities like Gyeongju?in this regard,?but?I still am intrigued by the Gimhae’s rich history.(X) – paragraph form / verb tense / sentence fragment / My Hometown?My hometown is Seoul. Seoul is the capital of South Korea. And population is about 9.74 million. Seoul is famous for its population density (which is) nearly twice that of New York. Most houses are high apartments. I lived in Songpa and Gangnam in Seoul. I think both are great places. Songpa and Gangnam are located at the bottom (in the south of)of Seoul. I lived in Songpa until 2nd grade in elementary school, and until now I live(I have live in Gangnam since then) in Gangnam. Songpa is quiet and peaceful, but it has good transportation and many things to see. When I lived in Songpa, there was an Olympic Park in front of my house. So I used to go and play every weekend. When cherry blossoms bloom in spring, they are really pretty and many people come(visit). The Olympic Park was built for the purpose of the 1988 Seoul Olympic Games. The park has a gymnastics stadium where many concerts of singers are held. There is also the Lotte World Tower, which can be called the (is a major landmark in) Landmark of Seoul. Lotte World Tower is the tallest building in Korea and the fifth tallest building in the world. (write in a single paragraph)?I think Gangnam is the best-known place in Seoul. This is because it is a place where many tourists visit.(why do they visit?) Gangnam also has a very good subway and bus, like Songpa. So you can go anywhere comfortably. Usually called Around 'Gangnam Station,' there are many clothing stores, restaurants, and singing rooms. It is a place where I can walk at home (from), so I often go to eat and go shopping. There is a restaurant called 'Gangnam Bulbaek' that I often go to in Gangnam. There are red marinated meat,?????(duenjjang-jjigae), and side dishes. They are really delicious. I'd like to recommend it to everyone.?I think convenience is the biggest advantage of Seoul. There are many buses and subways, so it is very convenient. And most of the food and drinks are delivered. There are many people and busy(, and it is busy,) , but if you want to enjoy convenience, come to Seoul!(X) – paragraph form / missing verb / verb tense / Hello, I'm Kim Yoo-Jin(-jin). My hometown is Gwangju, Korea. Gwangju is located in Jeollanam-do at the center of Jeolla-do. Gwangju has a history of democracy. The democracy uprising began on May 18, 1980 and ended on May 27. At that time, the Chun Doo-hwan who (was) former president imposed martial law in Gwangju. The operational name is "Fancy Vacation." It's (was) a case of indiscriminate violence and murder against ordinary citizens. The citizens of Gwangju fought against martial law but ended with numerous casualties. The May 18 democratic uprising is a great pride for Gwangju citizens.As well, Jeolla-do is famous for its delicious food. Gwangju City also has many delicious foods. Famous foods include tteok-galbi, meat pancakes, fried lettuce, and skate (fish). There are many other delicious foods. I like food in Gwangju's general food.(word choice – seasonal delicacies / local delicacies) Jeollado(‘s) food is more seasoned(spicier?) than other regions.Gwangju is a city of culture. In the center of downtown Gwangju, there is a big cultural exhibition hall called the National Asian Cultural Center. There are exhibitions where you can learn about the different cultures of Asia. A wide variety of works by artists are on display every month. Starting with large sculptures, the museum displays images, photo exhibitions, paintings, and sounds. I like this place very much. Because I can always have a different experience. If you are interested in culture, you must visit there. Another place I like is ‘Gwangju Theater’. Gwangju Theater was opened in 1935 as the only single theater in Korea. It is significant because it was made by Koreans at Japanese colonial era. Changgeuk and pansori were performed here. Now in the 21st century, independent and artistic films are mostly shown. I often go to Gwangju theater to see art movies. The advantage is that the screen is very large with more than 800 seats.Besides this, there are many wonderful places in Gwangju. Thank you for reading it.(X) –spelling / word choice /I think my hometown Songpa is one of the most popular places for tourists. It is located in the southeast of Seoul. I will introduce(share) some interesting things that you can enjoy (doing) in Songpa. The Lotte World which is one of the most famous amusemrnt park(s) in the world is really pleasurable. You can ride the rides depending on your preference.(such as ?) If you are hungry, you can satisfy your hunger by eating tasty snacks. I recommend going to the Lotte World Tower next to the amusement park which is called the Korean Eiffel Tower. It is the tallest building in Korea. You can see the scenery of Seoul on the top floor. If you are interested in sports, you had better (should)go to the Seoul Olympic Park. The Seoul Olympic(s) was(were) held in these stadiums in 1988. If you apply a space rental(??meaning unclear), you can use some of these facilities. Those who are interested in the history of Korea should visit the Seoul Baekje Museum. There are many relics related to the Korean ancient history. If you want to experience (its culture)the culture of it, you had better attend the cultural festival.(festival? When?) Visit Songpa and have a delightful time doing these amusing activities that I mentioned. ?(X) – topic sentence / paragraph form / capitalization / numerals (spell amount/quantity) / fragment – missing verb / a little long …shorten/ My Hometown2019390209 Shin Min-seo(topic sentence - in general, what do you want to tell us about Cheonan?)My hometown of Cheonan has a big factory where they produce OLED TV which belongs to Samsung.??Moreover, there is the Independence Hall in Cheonan, too. Many soldiers come this place to get extra vacation time during the (A)army (or …during military service). Not only soldiers visit here but also many students visit as a school picnic. Many schools in Cheonan take graduation photos there.I have lived in Cheonan since when I was 5years old. This was my first time moving to another city. Before, I lived in Daejeon but because of my father’s work, we moved to Cheonan. However, due to my high school and university I am living in Sejong by myself. Because of this, I am more familiar with Sejong more than Cheonan.(write in a single paragraph)In Cheonan, there are 75 elementary schools and 31 middle and high schools each. Furthermore, there are 9universities and 2 two-years-colleges. There are 8 public libraries, too. The main public library is called ‘Cheonan Central Library’. It is located near the Cheonan Station and Bus Terminal.I would like to introduce my favorite place to visit in Cheonan; Daemyung Resort. It used to be ‘Tedin Water Park’ and later ‘Daemyung Resort’ has taken over. Actually, the name has recently they changed to ‘Sono Belle’ which is still belongs to ‘Daemyung Resort’. Near this waterpark, there is a ‘Cheonan Arts Centre’ where several arts exhibitions and performance(s are) held.There are five (important / notable) historical people is ( figures from) my hometown. First, General Kim Si-min was born in Cheonan. Secondly, Joseon shorten - combine sentences))Dynasty’s real scholar and scientist Hong Dae-yong was also born in Cheonan. (There is his science hall in my hometown, too. Third, independence activist Cho Byeongok’s place of birth was also Cheonan. Fourth, Lee Dong-nyeong who was a state ordinance and president of provisional government, his hometown was Cheonan. Last of all, Yoo Kwan-soon, independence activist during the Japanese occupation is one of the most popular historical figure in Cheonan.The mayor of our city used to be Koo Bon-young until November 2019. However, because of violation of political self-sufficiency law, he lost his mayor(al) position. Therefore, there is no one in the mayor’s position now. However, Koo Man-seop is in authority now.Before I sum up introducing my hometown, I would like to tell good place to eat out in Cheonan. ‘Seoksanjeong’ is the name of the restaurant and they sell ‘Galbi’. During the dinner time we cannot easily find vacant seat to eat because it’s really famous restaurant. It is little bit different with what we usually think about galbi ‘G(albi’ because they They have special grill for it.This is all about my hometown. Thankyou.(X) – paragraph form – write in a single paragraph / punctuation / capitalization / sentence fragment“My Hometown”?Hello, my name is Kwon Dae-you. Today, I will introduce my hometown. I’m from Goyang city Located in Gyeonggi Province and I have lived in my hometown for 13 years.(, and I… missing comma)??Goyang city is one of the largest cities in the Seoul Capital Area, with a population of just over 1 million.?Several institutions are located in Goyang city. These include Agricultural Cooperative College, Korea Aerospace University, and Transnational Law and Business University.??I think that the best place in Goyang city is Lafesta in Ilsan. It is famous as a shopping center and (for its) bars. People are (It is) always crowded around the place.??Also, it is famous for the Flower Festival. Goyang city became one of the most famous cities for its floricultural industry (,)and its flower show grew into a horticultural event representing Korea and a venue for trading among participants at home and from abroad.?In addition, these two special points are different from other cities in Korea.First, there are some notable areas in my hometown, designated as a UNESCO World Heritage Site (s) called Seooreung and Seochangneung. Second, there is a museum in Ilsan that boasts 600 years of history.?If a foreign friend comes to my hometown, I will introduce Lake Park first Because the scenery around the river is very beautiful.And then, I will take my friend to the museum and tell him about the history of Goyang city.?I like my hometown. My hometown is a fragrant city like a flower!(X) –word choice / verb tense / article / My HometownLee Sae-ran????? ? ? ? ? ?My hometown is Seoul, which is the capital city of South Korea. Seoul has twenty-five districts. Among(Of these) twenty-five districts, I was born in Gangdong-gu. Gangong is literally “east of the Han River”. It is located on the east side of the city, and they have nine divisions. Among(Of these) the nine divisions, I was lived in Cheonho-dong until when I was five, and I moved to Amsa-dong. So I will explain these two districts. First, Chenho means “Thousand of Houses”, and there is a?(the)historical site of Pungnaptoseong, which is a flat earthen wall built at the edge of the Han River in(from ) the Baekje Era. In addition, Cheonho–dong is the only place where a huge department store such as Hyundai Department Store in the area of Gangdong-gu. I went to the store with my parents very often when I was young. Next, Amsa-dong is well known for the Amsa-dong Prehistoric Settlement Site, in which Neolithic remains were excavated after a large amount of diagonal-line patterned earthenware was exposed by a flood in 1925. Contrary to Chenho-dong, I have more memories of Amsa-dong. There was (the) Han River near my house, so I rode a bicycle a lot (along the river). Also, they have a swimming pool in the Han River, so I have enjoyed it too. As I mentioned already, there is a The Prehistoric Settlement Site in Amsa-dong. Actually it is located near to my elementary school, so I often went on picnics. Sometimes thtey held a festival in October, so all people can enjoy a variety of foods and music. Now, I don’t live in Gangong-gu anymore, but I have good (word choice …pleasant, happy, fond) memories. If I?have a chance, I would love to visit again.?(X) – missing article / capitalization (Gangnam Station)My Hometown, SeoulHur Su-bin?????????? Hi, my name is Hur Su-bin, and I am from Gangnam in Seoul, the capital city of South Korea. I think my hometown is one of the most entertaining places. In Seoul, the Han River Park is(a) very well-known place. Most of the tourists visit (t)here, and ride bicycles or rest in tents enjoying the peaceful view. This river bisects the city, splitting it into two halves: Gangbuk, the northern, and Gangnam, the southern. There are many popular places in Seoul like Itaewon and Myeongdong, but Gangnam is the center of modern Seoul. In Gangnam station, there are many places to eat, shop, or rest. However, I think the most popular place is COEX. I actually live very close to COEX. I started to live there when I was 12. It takes almost five or ten minutes to get there from home on foot. Since I have been to COEX a lot, I am certain that it is impossible not to see any foreigners there. As time flows, trends and cultural things change, I guess tourists are concentrated to modernized place like here. It is great that many foreigners know my hometown, but there is a serious problem. Every time I go out, there are so many people everywhere. My house is literally located next to COEX, so I pass there many times. I cannot walk straight through the crowd or even need to stop for people to pass, and have to avoid the tourists’ cameras. Especially when I am (especially) busy, these little things make me so crazy. Since I lived there for almost nine years, I think it is time to move to other (another) places. Although it is convenient that I can get everything I need while living there, I want to move to somewhere quiet for now. This is the story of my hometown. Thank you.(X) – paragraph form – write in a single paragraph / missing comma / sentence fragment/ plural form / I am from Ulsan (,) but I have lived most of my life in Suwon, so I (will) introduce Suwon as hometown.?Suwon is?the largest metropolis of?Gyeonggi-do?and also has?Gyeonggi-do provincial government building. It lies about 30 kilometres south of Seoul and it is convenient to get to there. Also, it is good to go to Jochiwon because it takes an hour by train. (write in a single paragraph)There are many advantages to convenient public transportation. If we lived in Seoul, it has a lot of entertainments but also(is) very crowded. However, Suwon is quite neat in Seoul and we can get to there easily.Suwon is less crowded compared with Seoul but it is not small city. It has more than a million citizen(s) in my hometown which is larger than Ulsan,?although it is not governed as a metropolitan city.There is interesting information about Suwon. It is(was) the first (planned)city in Korea. which is planned on purpose. When King Jeong-jo built??Hwaseong Fortress, he also had a plan to make Suwon the second capital. Unfortunately, he passed away before the plan was even finished.As I mentioned, Suwon is related with King Jeong-jo. (transitions As well..) Suwon is famous for Galbi (galbi) because it had a market which people could buy and sell cows(cattle). The reason why this kind of market developed is because there were many cows a for building Hwaseong Fortress. Even there (There is even )is a town called Woomandong, it came from the meaning that has many cows in that town.As well as Galbi is famous, Wanggalbi chicken is also famous. A film “Extreme j(J)ob” was released last year and that chicken was there.(The popular comedy was set in Suwon on it’s chicken strees, so when..)When you go to street of Chicken, you could eat it.As cherry blossoms bloom these days, there are many places as beautiful spot to see cherry blossoms.I haven’t been ther but the most famous spot is?Gyeonggi-do?provincial government building. I heard there a numerous time from my friends but my favourite spot is Young-bok women high school which I graduated from. It has a hill from the gate to school. My friends and I took a pictures in there during lunch and dinner time. It is easily to get here even they are not a student in my high school. In my opinion, the best spot is in?the tomb of the first chairman?of the board. I know it literally sounds creepy but I’ve heard the body is not in there so it means nobody know about that issue. The tomb is surrounded lots of cherry blossom(s) and so many other flowers.?It is good to see cherry blossoms in there, but the most beautiful scenery is to see there (the trees) through the window while taking a class in the classroom.I had my own(favorite) hole-in-the-wall but it was closed in last year. It was a small and cozy café, and I loved drinking milk tea in there. I have?alternative?for that café even though it is not a proper restaurant or bar. It is a truck which I can eat lots of snack such as?Tteokbokki and fish cake. It is the only food that I even missed when I was in England.Here’s some (verb tense error) I hope you enjoyed this interesting description information of my hometown, Suwon. (X) –rewrite topic sentence (cohesion) / numerals -spell quantity / articles /?My hometown is Ulsan. I was born and raised in Ulsan.( OR I was born and raised in my hometown of Ulsan. ) It is in (the)southern part of Korea. (more specific it is on the southeast coast of Korea near…)It is located near Busan and Gyeongju. My hometown is quite far from Jochiwon. It takes about 3hours by car. Ulsan is a nice place. I like my hometown. About 1.1 )million people live in Ulsan. Ulsan is mostly known as (an) industrial city. There are many factories, mostly secondary industries like shipbuilding, automobile and petrochemical. There are also many places to visit in my hometown. Ganjeolgot Cape is the first place where you can see sunrise. So, in the new year, many people visit Ganjeolgot Cape to see the sunrise. Good(The best) part about my hometown is that it is quiet compared to big cities and is a comfortable place to live. for living. (An)Inconvenient thing about Ulsan is that there is no metro, so I have to drive by myself a lot. When I'm at home, I go to eat delicious things with my friends, go to a café (,)and we often go watch sports games. There is professional soccer club(and)basketball club. We often go watch soccer games since (the)football stadium is close from our place and we are all fans. However, it is sad this season has not yet begun. The most interesting place to recommend in my hometown is the department store in downtown. Unlike other department stores, it is unique. There is a small amusement park on the roof of it. There is a ferris wheel there, and it's really amazing at night with the lights on. It is really beautiful. (rewrite My hometown is really beautiful.)(X) – Paragraph FormContent – much too short…(200-250 words is your goal)I live in Daejeon. It is my hometown. Daejeon became a metropolitan city in 1995, and it consists of five district(s). It is a good city (in which) to live with (as it has numerous) convenient facilities. There are places to visit such as Jangtaesan Natural Recreation Forest or Hanbat Arboretum and convenient transportation facilities, so it is a city that can be enjoyed comfortably.This is the view of Daejeon seen from Sikjangsan.(Late submission from Last Week)(X) –romanization(name order) / comma missing ) /word choice / missing punctuation (compound sentence) / capitalization / My Self-Introduction?Hello everyone, my name is Daeun Park(comma) and I’m?nineteen?years old. I was born in Seoul?and now live in Gyeonggi-do which is right below(directly south of) Seoul.?I am an only child, and always wished to have a sibling. Fortunately, I have many aunts on my mother’s side and my cousins treat me like their younger sister so I do not really feel lonely. Since where I live is quite far away from my university, Korea University Sejong Campus, I always apply for the school’s dormitory. Hence, I can save my time in the morning by not having to get up too early(to commute to campus), and also save time with transports.? I major in English language and literature, which you can study about the roots of English language, English literatures, cultures of English speaking nations, and more. As Korea University provides various types of club activities, I have joined the movie club called ‘Yeongsangnol’ because I love movies. I like watching movies because I enjoy tales but at the same time I do not prefer reading; rather the movies are easier and faster to understand the plot with visual images. Furthermore, I like going to cafes with gorgeous interior designs and I especially enjoy eating shaved ice when (it is available) there is one. I have always liked cold or iced desserts since young, and that trait is still in me. If you have not tried shaved ice yet, you should definitely(should) do so. I am sure you would not regret it. I will sum up my self-introduction here, and hope you would(will tell me about yourself.) also share about yourself with me.(X) – paragraph form / romanization/ missing punctuation / sentence fragment (conjunction)My name is Han Sung-Joon(-j). I'm twenty-four years old and I was born in 1997 in Republic of Korea.(……..write a single paragraph…)Currently I'm living in Seoul with my parents andfamily, consisting of father, mother, me and my twin sister. My father works for a financial company, my mother is a housewife and my sister and I are university students. I'd love to have a pet, but I've never had a pet since my mother has an allergy. So I will raise a cat when I live independent. I have been a Catholic since I was born Because all my family is Christian, and my baptismal name is Samuel.I don't want to get married yet, but if I will do, I want to marry with a woman who understands my thoughts and has a good personality.My hobby is playing basketball and games with my friends who always make me happy so I usually go out to hang out with them on weekends. As I mentioned about my hobby, favorite sport is also basketball. I wanted to be a basketball player when I was in high school actually, but I quit because I injured my shoulder during the game.My major is public sociology and I've been studying how to manage welfare and I'm planning to establish a company which combined welfare and management in the future.My strengths are kindness and thoughtfulness so I sympathize others well. my weaknesses is inflexibility.?(Concluding sentence)?(X) – punctuation / word choiceTitle: My Home Seoul? My hometown Seoul is one of the most interesting, yet little known city located in South Korea. I had(have) lived in Seoul for approximately ten years; seven years in other places of Seoul, and three years in Ganseo district in Seoul. Although I only lived in Gangseo district for three years, I feel at home when I visit there with lots of good memories and feel nostalgic about it. Because it has been over ten years since I last lived in Seoul and Seoul was a developing quickly, a lot of things have changed when I revisited my hometown. When I was younger, I loved visiting Lotte World in Jamsil, Seoul. Many people know that Lotte World has both indoor and outdoor theme park, but probably not the fact that it is the biggest indoor theme park in the world. Now that I stay in Jochiwon, it takes around an hour and a half from here to my hometown by train and subways, and I visit there often as my aunt lives there, in Gangseo district. Near my aunt’s house, there is an airport called Gimpo International Airport. Did you know that the world’s busiest air route is between Gimpo and Jeju International Airports? The number of monthly passengers from Gimpo to Jeju and vice versa is 1.3 million, while the top two to four routes lie between (620,000 to 680,000) 620 to 680 thousands. Many of you would have heard of the song “Gangnam Style”, and yes, Gangnam district is a very popular place to visit within Seoul. It is the most luxurious, rich(est) and (,and has the most expensive) real-estate district(,)along with famous companies of Korea including Samsung. North to Gangnam, there is Seocho where you can find the Guinness Record holding Banpo Bridge with its longest bridge fountain. The fountain(is) lighted (lit) by the LED lights of various colours gives beautiful scenery that you may not want to miss out on. In fact, I do not quite remember visiting to see Banpo Bridge even though it is in my hometown so I might visit there sooner or later. I am very proud of my hometown Seoul and really miss it especially where I used to live, Gangseo district. I would love to live in my hometown again in the future if I could. Please share about your hometown with me, I am interested to know.(X) –sentence fragment (Because…., I ) / prepostions / verb tense Hi, I'm?Lee Jeong-ran. I was born on April 27th, 1998 in Daejeon, so I'm twenty-three years old. Now I live in Sejong with my parents and two younger sister, where I was graduated middle school and high school. I love this city, since I have a lot of friends here. When I feel bored, I contact my friends and meet them, and enjoy eating tasty foods. Because of Corona, I can’t meet them?recently. I really miss my friends.?I am now concentrating on my major study in order to gain a high grade. My major is Business. I learn about how to manage a company. In the department of business administration, I study accounting, marketing, financial affairs, trading, personnel management. I love my major, because B(b)usiness?is?so useful in many parts of our life, and it makes me understand many economic events. My favorite thing is to listen various kinds of music. This helps me calm down, especially in (on) a stressful day. I recently listened to the music titled ‘Strawberries & Cigarettes’, ‘Back In The Day’, ‘Tomorrow Tonight’. I?like traveling, too. I traveled Taiwan when I was (in) high school, where lakes are so beautiful and delicious food everywhere, so this country is the most impressive place. My role model is Jong Wook Lee who was 6th WTO secretary general and Korean doctor. Because he took care of many patients with Polio. I want to be like him, so I try not to be afraid of challenge(s) ,and help other people who are in trouble.?Thank you for reading my self-introduction! HYPERLINK "" (X) – Title -capitalization / content – a little brief (200 – 250 words)/ content – Jochiwon-eup, or Jochiwon is a town in Sejong. / word choice How “good” of a place is it to rest or relax? hometown (My Hometown)I live in Sejong. This city is located close to Daejeon and Jochiwon. (Jochiwon is part of Sejong) Sejong is a new city that is planned to disperse the population and move the Korea’s administration. The (best???) feature of this place is that it has a large park, including a Lake Park. There are various kinds of plants, beautiful sculptures, and fountains. When I was took a walk there, I saw it was full of people walking in a comfortable atmosphere. And, I think that Sejong is the safest city in this country because civil servants are struggling to maintain legal compliance and safty. For example, there are a lot of CCTVs. I want to continue living in my hometown, since this city is so peaceful that it is (a) good to rest. And, especially, I think that this city is perfect for the rest of my life. ................
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