HIGHLAND LITERACY PROJECT



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HIGHLAND LITERACY PROJECT

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.uk/hlp

SUGGESTIONS FOR THE TEACHING OF

WRITING

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P1-S2

[Early to third/fourth levels]

L. Sim June 2009

Highland Literacy Project

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WRITING P1-P7 & extending into Secondary

A Curriculum for Excellence

This booklet outlines strategies and methodologies that can be used to support the following Literacy and English outcomes and experiences from A Curriculum for Excellence.

Literacy is indicated in italics and is the responsibility of all teachers in all subject areas. Almost all the E/Os below are Literacy and are therefore the responsibility of all.

|Organisers |Sub- divisions |LEVELS |

| | |Early |First |Second |Third |Fourth |

|WRITING |Enjoyment and Choice |LIT 0-01a/ LIT |LIT 1-20a/LIT 2-20a |LIT 3-20a/LIT 4-20a |

| | |0-11a/ LIT 0-20a | | |

| |Tools for writing |ENG 0-12a/ LIT |LIT 1-21a |LIT 2-21a |LIT 3-21a |LIT 4-21a |

| | |0-13a/ LIT 0-21a |LIT 1-22a |LIT 2-22a |LIT 3-22a |LIT 4-22a |

| | |LIT 0-21b |LIT 1-23a |LIT 2-23a |LIT 3-23a |LIT 4-23a |

| | | |LIT 1-24a |LIT 2-24a |LIT 3-24a |LIT 4-24a |

| |Organising and using |LIT 0-26a |LIT 1-25a |LIT 2-25a |LIT 3-25a |LIT 4-25a |

| |Information | |LIT 1-26a |LIT 2-26a |LIT 3-26a |LIT 4-26a |

| |Creating texts |LIT 0-09b/ |LIT 1-28a/ LIT 1-29a|ENG 2-27a |ENG 3-27a |ENG 4-27a |

| | |LIT 0-31a |ENG 1-30a |LIT 2-28a |LIT 3-28a |LIT 4-28a |

| | | |ENG 1-31a |LIT 2-29a |LIT 3-29a |LIT 4-29a |

| | | | |ENG 2-30a |ENG 3-30a |ENG 4-30a |

| | | | |ENG 2-31a |ENG 3-31a |ENG 4-31a |

Making the connection between reading and writing is fundamental in the teaching and learning of literacy and in enabling the pupils to become successful writers. Many of the reading outcomes and experiences are therefore also supported.

[pic]Collaborative learning and peer evaluation underpin much of the learning and teaching methodologies; this means that many of the listening and talking outcomes and experiences are also supported.

Writing

Introduction

The Highland Literacy project is suggesting that the teaching of writing takes place primarily through the writer’s craft lessons and that the follow-on writing lesson is the opportunity to practise and consolidate these skills. Some of these lessons will be short and focussed, such as part of core reading, whilst others will require extended writing where pupils are taught to write at length. This second type of writing is the most challenging for both pupils and teachers.

It is not suggesting that the use of the North Lanarkshire writing programme be abandoned in Highland schools but that the principles are used in a more flexible and motivating way to meet the needs of the pupils. The North Lanarkshire writing programme is one of the few that is progressive and teaches the pupils how to write at length. Without it, these two principles are more difficult to achieve.

We are merely adding some further suggestions as how teachers might organise the teaching of writing, taking both A Curriculum for Excellence and the Highland Literacy project into account. The intention of this booklet is also to give further ideas as to how you might motivate and challenge your pupils, offer aspects of personalisation and choice and outline how the skills and contexts for writing can be promoted across the curriculum.

Assessment is for learning [AifL] strategies underpin all aspects of the Highland Literacy Project and are embedded within the following writing suggestions.

Organisation of this booklet

The majority of this booklet has not been written by age or stage but is more a collection of ideas and strategies. It is merely hoped that you will be inspired by the suggestions and will able to see how they can be adapted/extended to suit the age and stage you are teaching.

For more ideas, please also see HLP’s writer’s craft booklet and suggestions for core reading follow ups on our website .uk/hlp. To improve the tools for writing, please also refer to the spelling and handwriting booklets.

Active Learning Approaches

[pic]Writing is often thought of as an individual activity. However, the best writing is often a mixture of individual and collaborative learning. This can be organised in a variety of ways, depending on the age and ability of the pupils. Peer planning, support and/or evaluation can be very powerful and above all, discussion between pupils in small groups is essential if writing is to be improved.

Imaginative Writing

Inspiration/Motivation

You cannot simply give the pupils a title and ask them to write. In order to write well we need to be inspired to do so and thought needs to be given to this key factor. There are many ways of doing this and the methods chosen will depend on the age of the pupils. The following are just some ideas that can be used as motivation and/or as focussed teaching sessions:

• Personal experiences: Talking about relevant experiences can be a great motivator. It helps to focus the language and helps others who have not had a similar experience to understand the concept. To make it as active as possible, organise the pupils in talking groups before pulling them together as whole class.

• Talking ideas: This can be done in a similar way to above except the pupils are talking about imaginary situations. Talking with others helps to motivate and inspire.

• Use texts: Collect examples of aspects you want to teach such as genre, imagery, [see character descriptions below] and teach them during a writer’s craft lesson. These skills are transferred into their own writing. Remember that there are many great texts out there – you do not need to write your own.

• Use photographs: This can inspire settings, characters or whole pieces of writing.

• Use objects: One of the best ways to inspire writing. Younger pupils love anything that could be perceived as ‘magical’ such as a ‘magic’ carpet, a ‘magic’ key, a treasure chest (what is in it and why is it there?), a mystery bottle, a magic stick, a wrapped present.

Middle/older pupils can be inspired by mystery objects (the more mysterious the

better) –what is the story behind it?

• Use music/noises: A noise, or a series of noises, recorded can inspire great stories. Music can set the scene for a character or setting.

• Tell them the beginning: Pupils enjoy continuing a story especially if you are able to ‘capture’ their imagination by the content, the idea and by the way you tell it.

• Tell them the outcome of a story: This works well with older pupils. They write the story leading up to that point. What happened before?

• Use a short piece of film: What happens next/what happened before?

• Create a joint piece of writing: Paired writing is a strategy that can be used with both young and older pupils. They can bounce ideas off each other.

• Give them a truly inspirational title. Younger/middle pupils are usually inspired when the title contains the words ‘magical’ or ‘enchanted’; with middle/upper pupils try words such as ‘mythical’ or ‘mysterious’ or ‘supernatural’.

• Use drama : see page 6

• Use computer games : see page 6

• Use the web – free sites see page 6

Write within a context

This is one of the most effective ways of inspiring writing and the results are often of a higher standard. This is the imaginative writing equivalent of writing for a purpose in functional writing.

1. Pupils write within a class project e.g. WW ll. Here pupils may imagine themselves within the project e.g. as an evacuee writing about their ‘life in the country’. They have a background knowledge of the subject so are able to connect their writing to what they have learned. Often book studies are used to promote literacy/project links.

2. Pupils are ‘transported’ into an imaginary situation, often through a topic based approach, and their writing stems from ‘situations’ that arise. It is called a ‘storyline approach’ and can be used for pupils from P1 to P7 and well into secondary school. It is a very effective and motivating way into writing as it is centred around problem solving and can link many aspects of the curriculum together.

This second approach has gained in popularity with the introduction of CfE- it is pupil centred learning as it develops as a result of the decisions pupils make. It also can be cross-curricular. You can find out more about storyline approaches @ .uk/hlp in the active learning section.

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Shorter focused lessons or as part of extended writing:

Character Descriptions

Good character descriptions can make an ordinary story great but pupils need to be taught how to write them during writer’s craft lessons. Here are a few ideas.

▪ Use texts as inspiration. Pick out character descriptions from books at the level you want them to write. Pupils can compare and contrast or look for key features. Roald Dahl writes excellent descriptions of his characters and covers a wide age range.

▪ Use photographs/pictures as inspiration

▪ Activity – fold an A4 in half and ask pupils to describe a character on one half of the paper. Give a time limit so that everyone stops at the same time. Be sure to explain the criteria before hand and give younger pupils prompts e.g. start at the head and work downwards or describe an old man. Older pupils may be required to add similes/ metaphors/alliteration etc.

The pupils then swap papers and are required to draw a peer’s character using only the information given. Papers are returned, discussed in pairs and edited for improvement. These descriptions can then be used at a later date as part of a complete piece of writing.

▪ Use drama (a): watching and discussing how an actor portrays a character through facial/body movements can help to build up the vocabulary needed to help bring their character ‘to life’.

▪ Use drama (b):in 3’s one pupil ‘acts’ a given character eg old man, strict teacher – the second pupil describes them and the third, with back to other two pupils, writes down key words and phrases used. They then highlight best ones, improve (could include simile, metaphor, alliteration etc depending on teaching points)

Settings

Again, descriptions of these can be improved via writer’s craft lessons and by using the ideas above. Also:

▪ Brainstorm effective adjectives using a picture as stimulus. Stick on post-its, each containing an adjective or a phrase. Write the names of some of the features of the scene onto a big piece of paper e.g. trees, river etc and put the most appropriate post its next to each one. This forms the basis of the description.

▪ Use the senses- sight, smell, hearing, taste and touch - to describe a setting. The younger pupils would write it in first person and may even use a template/set format eg I can see… I can hear…etc

As pupils move through the school, they will be able to imagine themselves as the character and write in the 3rd person. The support given will be less and they can be taught how to use the senses in a description in a more subtle way and as part of moving the story along.

e.g. ‘a putrid odour filled his nostrils making him retch, and he could feel the dampness creep through his bones. It was pitch black. A soul-less void. He licked his lips, tasting something sweet. Was it blood? He had no way of knowing…’

▪ Use a free website panoramas.dk for 360º scenes

▪ Use computer game – Myst – it also can be used to show 360º views.

Key point

Don’t ‘waste’ a good character description or setting. At a later lesson,

teach pupils how to incorporate their description into a full length story.

Imaginative Writing

Teaching imaginative writing

Key points

o As with all HLP lessons, split the writing lesson into Before, During and After

o Use a large A3 or similar jotter

o Use collaborative learning strategies – lots of structured discussions

o Use peer and self evaluation

A3 jotter

BEFORE

1. Pupils revisit previously identified learning points/next steps

and discuss them with a partner- how can they improve? The main

one(s) is carried forward to the top of a new left hand page.

2. The teacher introduces the subject. This can be done as an extension of a writer’s craft lesson or through a variety of motivating ways (see suggestions on P4). Don’t forget pupils need thinking time.

Tip – it may be an idea to tell the pupils the previous day what they are going to write about. Thinking about it and/or taking notes can be a homework exercise.

|Next steps (bf) | |

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|What I am learning | |

|today | |

|1. | |

|2. | |

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|Genre/features | |

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|Key words | |

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3. The teacher introduces the key learning point of the lesson and this is added to the left hand page. This should simply be a reminder of what has been taught previously in a writer’s craft lesson eg how to make a story

exciting or how to write a good description.

4. It is important to discuss the genre and its features.

5. The teacher may also add a Tools for writing [technical] skill that is to be a focus

e.g. writing in paragraphs

6. Younger pupils may also benefit from brainstorming, as a class, some of the words/phrases that may be useful. Older pupils can do this in pairs/trios. A few key words/phrases can be added to their jotter.

Key point

It may be beneficial for the pupils to have a copy of the text, used in the

associated writer’s craft lesson, displayed during the ‘thinking and planning’ stages,

to help them make the reading/writing connection.

Pupil Planning

7. Pupils now plan what they are going to write. This should be timed with a visible clock with all pupils stopping at the same time. This should be a fairly short part of the lesson.

Key point

A variety of planning styles should be introduced so that older pupils are able to choose the most appropriate for themselves, the time available and the task.

Planning ideas

~ discussion in pairs [this should form a part of most planning sessions and especially for younger/less able pupils] A3 jotter

|Next steps (bf) |m story |

|What I am learning today|a |

|1. |r |

|2. |g |

|Genre/features |i |

|Key words |n |

|[pic]plan | |

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| |next steps: |

~ discussion in pairs and taking notes

~ bullet points – main ideas

~ using a simple who, when, where, what, why approach

~ drawing a quick sketch

~ a labelled sketch

~ cartoon strip format (the younger the pupils the fewer frames used)

~ a mind map

* a template/frame could be used for introducing a new form of writing or for less able pupils but should not be used by all pupils at all times as they make the pupils less independent.

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8. Pupils now share their plan with a partner. This is the first point for editing. Pupils can share good parts, ask questions and suggest improvements. These can be added to the plan if desired. Again this is a short section. Perhaps just a few minutes each. Note – only the ‘writer’ can add to, delete or amend their own written work.

[pic]Break – It has been found that it is most beneficial to have a break just before or after step 8. It may be most practical to arrange it to coincide with a set timetabled break but many classes use a flexible break time.

DURING WRITING

[pic]Key point – pupils are given opportunities for checking, editing and improving their writing DURING the writing process.

1. Pupils quickly re-read the left hand page and begin their story/piece of writing on the right hand page. Encourage them to leave spaces between paragraphs to allow for changes at a later time.

2. Set a time for the first part of the writing, depending on the age of the pupils perhaps ranging from 10 – 20 minutes. Make sure the pupils can see the clock and know how long they have got.

3. After this set time, stop the pupils and remind them of the teaching points (their own one(s) carried forward and the new ones for this lesson). Are they following the criteria/their plan?

Ask them to re-read what has been written and make any improvements – self correction.

* if you include a margin on the right hand page, this can be used for corrections and changes.

4. Set the next section of time.

5. Stop the pupils once again and ask them to share what they have written so far with a partner. It is best to set two separate times for this so that both can have equal time. Pupils can share good parts, clarify points and give suggestions for improvements. Peer evaluation. The margin can be used for any changes. Note – only the ‘writer’ can add to, delete or amend their own written work.

6. Set a third/final section of time. Do you want the writing to be concluded? If so, tell the pupils.

7. Stop the pupils. Did they meet the criteria? Did they mange their next steps? Ask them to self evaluate these two points on left hand page using a green/orange/red highlighter (or similar)

8. Now may be the best time to think of a ‘title’ for the piece of writing.

DURING WRITING - What is the teacher doing? [pic]

The teacher is probably best working with one group/table only for the whole session. This may be best as an ability group with the remainder of the pupils in mixed groups. [The teacher can vary the size of the teaching group depending on their ability] This allows him/her to give focussed support, direction and praise whilst encouraging the others to build up their independence skills.

The teacher and pupil can then decide together on next steps.

A different group would be supported during the next writing session. For reference, the teacher should indicate on the writing jotter if they worked independently or with the teacher.

How to encourage independence

[Especially in the younger or less able pupils]

✓ Explain that they are working on their own and that the teacher will work with a different group next time

✓ Encourage them to ‘have a go’ with their spelling.

✓ Ask any available support staff to give help only when really needed.

✓ Sit the remaining pupils in mixed ability groups [although the teacher may be working with an ability group].

✓ Give them a card that they can display on their desk if they are really stuck. E.g. one side says I’m OK’ and the other says ‘I need some help.’ It is easier to spot if the two sides are different colours. Teach them to leave a space and carry on writing until help arrives.

PROGRESSION

To build up the skills needed to be a good writer and to show progression, the HLP suggests that the pupils keep two jotters together (perhaps in a folder): one jotter that is current and also the previous jotter. This will help as pupils move class to class, from CfE level to level and within a level, and from primary to secondary. Jotters should therefore not be sent home at the end of each school year but carried forward to use in the next.

This is also why loose paper should be kept to a minimum? If work is to be displayed, it can be photocopied and if paper is used for some lessons, it can be stuck into the jotter.

AFTER WRITING

KEY POINT - Split the class into two halves. The teacher will only check and mark half the class’s work. The other half will peer check.

Advantages-

Pupil - learns to be more independent, learns to self and peer check, takes greater responsibility for their own learning

Teacher – spends quality time with one group during writing, leading to better quality of marking as more time can be spent on each pupil’s work.

1. General and/or against the learning outcome(s)

Peer half -

In pairs, pupils share their writing. It may simply be the second half as part will have been shared already. Pupils give suggestions for improvements, ask for clarification and highlight good phrases/sections/words. This will not be marked by the teacher.

Teacher half –

Individually, pupils re- read, edit, improve their own writing. This will then be marked by the teacher at later time.

Choice – it may be appropriate to allow for self evaluation/choice. Pupils can re-read their previous work that has been peer checked and choose which of the two pieces of writing is their best and therefore should be marked by the teacher.

2. Specific technical aspects e.g.

Peer half -

Individually or in pairs, pupils put a dot under a few words that they feel may not be spelled correctly. These words are clarified with a dictionary or by their partner. One or two can be added to their own spelling list to learn.

Or Individually or in pairs, the pupil checks punctuation e.g. paragraphs, speech marks etc

Teacher half –

As above except the pupil checks their own spelling/punctuation.

3. All pupils

Pupils decide on their next step(s) and write it at the bottom of the right hand page. This can sometimes be agreed with a partner or individually. If they are working directly with the teacher, they may do this jointly.

After marking.

➢ The teacher should pick out one or more teaching points to be included in the next suitable skills lesson (see below) or writer’s craft lesson.

➢ The teacher- marked half of the class would receive their jotters to read and discuss the teacher comments. The teacher may also have added an additional next step.

➢ One or more ‘star’ writers could be chosen to share their writing with the whole class. The group would then discuss its strengths.

Skills lesson – this may simple be a short group or class lesson, rather than a writer’s craft lesson and can focus on one area for improvement.

It can often be taken from their own writing {personalisation: CfE}

e.g. Highlight your opening sentence. With a partner see if you can make it better and explain criteria – capturing your audience with the first sentence.

e.g. Highlight 6 of your verbs – now add an adverb to make each one more descriptive.

e.g Add a post it note with speech. What did your character say?

ORGANISATION

Depending on whether it is following a writer’s craft lesson

PLAN A (writer’s craft lesson used as teaching section)

Lesson 1. Before – writer’s craft lesson to teach new aspect or to teach points raised in previous writing. Perhaps pupils could add the new learning criteria to their plan ready for next lesson?

Lesson 2. Before - finish the ‘before’ section. Short session (possibly no more than 10 minutes)

During -variable depending on their age

After – this can be a brief part as much of the editing is done during the writing process.

Lesson 3. After marking. A brief session shared by whole class.

PLAN B (not following writer’s craft)

Lesson 1. Before – lesson is introduced. Time is needed to teach learning outcomes, for

discussion and to inspire/motivate them to write

During –begin this section

Lesson 2. Finish During section

After section. Can be a longer session than plan A

Lesson 3. After marking. A brief session shared by whole class.

[pic]On occasion the teacher may decide that the ‘during’ part could be extended over more than one session to allow for extended writing.

DIFFERENTIATION/MULTI COMPOSITE CLASSES

There are a variety of ways to approach this depending on the class situation.

The following are some suggestions that may be considered:

▪ Lesson taught to all but with different expectations

▪ Class split into two parts and two lessons taught [this is essential in P1-7 classes]

▪ Lesson introduced to all but then split into ability groups with different criteria/learning outcomes. Pupils could sit in ability groups with a reminder of criteria/outcomes on the desk.

▪ Split the class into two/three ability groups and teach each one separately

This may be a way to organise multi composite classes or classes with a wide variety of ability. The teacher would rotate the order of the groups.

Eg

| |Step 1 |Step 2 |Step 3 |Step 4 |

| | | |[longer section] | |

|Group 1 |Teacher introduces |With teacher: focus on |1. Planning |1.Writing |

| |subject to whole class |outcomes for this group |2. Begin writing |2. Editing in |

| | | | |ability groups |

|Group 2 | |planning |1. With teacher: focus on outcomes |1. Writing |

| | | |for this group |2. Editing in |

| | | |2. Begin writing |ability groups |

|Group 3 | |planning |1. Begin writing |1. Writing |

| | | |2. With teacher focus on outcomes |2. Editing in |

| | | |for this group |ability groups |

Cross Curricular

Pupils write best if they are writing for a purpose. Think about making most of your writing lessons cross-curricular: this not only puts their writing into context but also helps the teacher to manage the timetable. It is more straight-forward in functional writing lessons but can also be applied to imaginative and personal.

Teaching very young pupils’ imaginative writing[pic]

The teaching suggestion given in the previous section will need to be adapted to suit the very youngest of our pupils. The following are aspects that you may consider:

• Use an unlined A3 jotter and turn it ‘landscape’.

• Planning may simply be discussion/drawing

• Pupils will need their work scribed at the beginning of P1

• Pupils may then move onto overwriting and then underwriting.

• You may decide to split the class into groups and work with each group separately whilst the others are engaged in another independent activity

• Encourage them to ‘have a go’ with their writing as soon as possible

• Peer and self evaluation should be introduced from the very beginning of P1

Key point - use a when, who, where, what and why approach, building up each of the aspects over the course of P1 and the beginning of P2. To make the connection to their reading, introduce reading/big/story books in the same manner, encouraging the pupils to predict each aspect from the cover and/or title.

PERSONAL WRITING

A Curriculum for Excellence –‘ …pupils should have an element of choice in their learning.’

When young children begin to tell stories, they do so in the first person. Their personal tales are therefore a great medium to extend into their writing.

✓ Personal writing should be a regular occurrence in the early years - it should be independent, at least weekly and thought of as in addition to their imaginative/functional writing.

✓ HLP suggests that a different jotter is kept for this with space for a drawing as a plan. Again a set time should be given for this drawing. Pupils can add more, if time allows, later.

✓ During their drawing, the teacher and any other adults present should talk to a group(s) (on rotation) about their story. It should be a two-way dialogue that encourages pupils to explain their thinking. For children to be able to write well, they need to have a wide vocabulary.

✓ After they have completed their drawing, encourage them to tell their story to a partner.

✓ Pupils should be encouraged to ‘have a go’ with their spelling as the main teaching point is to teach them to write freely.

✓ If they ask the teacher, encourage pupils to say ’is this how to spell …?’ rather than ‘how do you spell…?’ Give them a whiteboard for having a go.

✓ Teacher feedback – try and give oral feedback whilst they are writing. Focus on one or two groups each session.

✓ Self evaluate – teach them to read over their story and highlight their favourite word or phrase.

✓ Peer sharing - share their story with a partner and teach them how to peer evaluate. What did you like? They could use a highlighter to highlight their favourite word or phrase.

✓ Marking - Do NOT correct all spelling mistakes. Simply make a note of common words that are being spelt incorrectly and teach them as a class, using a fun interactive games approach [see HLP spelling booklet]

✓ If a pupil is still spelling a word incorrectly after whole class teaching, put a dot under one or two and ask them to have another go. You may then need to show them how to spell it and a strategy to use to remember it.

✓ After marking, try and give some oral feedback to at least one group.

Personal writing in the middle classes [Diary]

This is a very worthwhile exercise in the middle part of the primary school. This is the age/stage where expectations of spelling, punctuation and sentence structure are higher and therefore it makes sense that pupils need more practice. By writing a regular ‘diary’ or similar, pupils are developing those skills in a more relaxed manner as they are not focussing so much on the structure of the complete story.

Key points

➢ Use a separate jotter

➢ No planning is needed, except thinking time. They may also tell their partner what they are going to write about. This helps to order their thoughts and to improve their talking and listening skills.

➢ Set a ‘Tools for Writing’ learning outcome – it may be to have at least 5 sentences (this helps them make sentences) or two paragraphs or to spell as many common words correctly as possible etc

➢ Give them a set time and make sure they can see the clock

➢ Do not expect the same quantity every time

➢ Self checking - pupils re-read their work, check it against the learning outcome and make corrections where necessary. If they are unsure if a spelling is correct, they can put a coloured dot under it.

➢ Pupils then peer-check, again matching the learning outcome. Spellings (with dots) are discussed and if needed, checked in a dictionary.

➢ Teacher feedback– try and give oral feedback whilst they are writing. Focus on one or two groups each session.

➢ Marking- as with imaginative writing, the teacher may decide to mark only half the class’s work each time – ‘quality rather than quantity marking’.

➢ After marking, try and give some oral feedback to at least one group.

Moving on with Personal writing

You can make these sessions more structured by introducing topics such as

‘Write about a time you were really scared’

‘When you saved the day’

‘When you were really disappointed’

Older pupils may be inspired to write about their favourite football team/band

❖ Some of the best personal writing is as a result of asking their opinion. This works well at any age and introduces them to writing a structured argument. There is often a strong connection with subjects such as RME/PSE – ‘What do you think Heaven looks like? (infants)

Health – ‘What do you think happens inside you when you eat healthy food? (Infants) to ‘Do you think smoking should be banned completely?’ (Older pupils)

Environmental -‘What do you think about the proposed pylon line?’

Middle/Upper

Other ideas for personal writing may include writing a newspaper report about a personal story. The recount would then be in the third person, with quotes. It could be done as a newspaper layout.

[pic]Teacher Planning

The key here is to be flexible. In order to meet the needs of your pupils, it is best to think of your plans as a ‘living document’ i.e. plans that are added to, changed and amended. Whilst the teacher can have an outline of aspects that they wish to introduce during the term/session, much of what is taught, especially the Tools for Writing will primarily depend on what issues arise. For example, if the pupils are struggling with direct speech, then that is what will need to be taught. If their story starts are flat, then the next lessons will need to address that.

Key point- Therefore, the texts used for writer’s craft, where much of the teaching takes place, will needed to be matched to the learning outcomes. Texts used should be noted alongside the learning intentions.

Progression – In order for effective progression, planning needs to be passed on to the next teacher. See also ‘pupils work’ on page 10

An example of a planning format can be found at the back of this booklet.

Other ideas for younger pupils

Young children need to be given opportunities to write every day ~ some writing will be structured but much will be during free play and activities.

Think about how you can encourage them to write; it may simply be by adding post-it notes into the construction corner or white boards at the sand. Praise those who do take the opportunity to write (it does not need to be spelt correctly!), ask them to share it with others and have a section on the wall where ‘free’ writing is displayed, re-read and celebrated. For obvious reasons this should be as low down on the wall as possible.

Writing bag ~

This works a treat because the pupils have to wait for their turn as you usually only have one or two per classroom. The bag contains a variety of papers, pens and pencils, stampers, stapler, hole punch, envelopes etc and goes home with the pupil for two nights. The pupils share their work with the class and it can be displayed.

Travelling Ted ~

A wonderful idea that children love. A class bear/other soft toy is sent home for the weekend. He sometimes takes a journal with him to record his weekend activities {with help from the pupil!}. This can include drawings, writing and photos.

Some teachers send home a blank stamped postcard instead to be completed and posted back to the class. The advantage of this is that all the pupils do the same and no family tries to outdo the rest!

Writing table ~

You should always have one of these in your classroom. Give pupils a choice of paper, pens, felt pens etc to be creative in their writing. Add ‘models’ to inspire eg poems, stories, story starts, environmental print etc

Include a couple of picture dictionaries – always popular. Pupils could make their own picture dictionary.

Add a post box to post their letters (see handout Literacy through play for more structured ideas)

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FUNCTIONAL WRITING

Please also refer to the North Lanarkshire writing pack for ideas about progression.

Functional writing is the writing that we will do the most often as adults so appropriate weighting should be given to its teaching. Depending on age/stage, the variety of genres (and subsets) is extensive and pupils need to know ‘how to’ write each one.

Again the most effective way is via the writer’s craft lesson where you can look at the features of particular genre. If you want pupils to write an advert, then they need to read and study adverts first, and be taught the features particular to that genre. Pupils can be taught to give opinions about what constitutes an effective advert and their uses in the real world.

Putting functional writing firmly into context is vital for effective writing – if pupils are to write instructions for ‘how to build a snowman’ or ‘how to make an animated film’ then they need to ‘do’ it first.

Writing for a purpose

Functional writing is much more meaningful if pupils can see their writing as serving a purpose. Thought needs to be given as to the intended audience and the effect of their writing on others.

For example

Writing an invitation - could this be for an open day at the school or to attend parents evening?

Making a poster – perhaps one to advertise a school fete (persuasive) or which bins the various recycling items go in (instructional)

Writing letters – These can be very powerful if a situation arises in the school eg a new mast is planned for the playground. They can be written as a thank you (for a visit/visitor) or as a more formal invitation.

Writing instructions - How to use a particular computer programme (always useful)

Writing a report - can this be made into a school newspaper/newsletter to go home?

Writing a recount - see diaries mentioned previously. Also after a class visit, pupils could make a class book for the library. It would be appropriate to expect the middle school to write about what they learned.

Organisation of functional writing

The organisation [before, during, after], pupil planning and teacher marking can follow the same pathway as imaginative writing with only a few differences.

As mentioned before much of functional writing is for a purpose so it may not be appropriate to use a jotter to write in. However it is still important that pupils are guided in their learning by setting targets, having learning outcomes and planning for improvement. Progression needs to be shown and teachers need to see and to be able to understand the process of learning for each pupil.

The HLP therefore recommends that a jotter is used to show progression in

functional writing and to allow pupils to learn from previous work. The main

imaginative jotter could be used (working upside down from the back) and the planning and the noting of learning outcomes can be written in the same manner.

What would need to be different is that the pupils would not produce the majority of their actual functional writing in the jotter but that a copy is inserted into the appropriate place.

The ‘real’ copy would be used in a ‘real’ context. This means that the editing and improving would primarily be on the plan.

On occasion a draft may be produced in the jotter to allow for self and peer correction and editing but not all functional writing would lend itself to this. Pupils will be de-motivated if they feel that they are simply ‘copying’ out their work.

If pupils are using the computer, they should write directly onto the computer from their plan and not use it to make a ‘good copy’.

Key point- learning how to improve

This MUST be done using ‘like for like’ genre ie one type of genre cannot be used to set targets for another (eg improvements when making a poster are not applicable [usually] for a new lesson on writing a letter).

Tip -Some teachers prefer to ‘block’ genres and teach several lessons on the same one. The HLP recommends that this is not the case and that genres are spread throughout the session. If jotters are used, pupils can re-read their previous writing and re-visit their learning targets at the beginning of the next lesson on that genre. They can set additional targets.

* A template/frame could be used for introducing a new form of writing or for less able pupils but should not be used by all pupils at all times as they make the pupils less independent. It is better to use examples of the genre being studied.

Secondary

Pupils also need to be taught how to transfer their skills of writing different genres from one subject to another. This means standardising expectations in each subject and re- visiting the features of the genre as part of the learning outcomes.

For example, if a pupil is asked to make a poster in Art and Geography and Science, the standard should be constant and the expectations consistent. There is a need, therefore, for teachers to discuss and plan for learning across the curriculum.

Top idea- have a ‘how to’ notebook that is carried from subject to subject. This is created (and taught) in English but can be referred to in other subjects. Genre may include ‘how to…write a discursive essay’ ‘how to write… a critical essay’.

Literacy learning being the responsibility for all teachers is a key message in a Curriculum for Excellence.

There are more ideas for secondary teachers in the reading and writing for information booklet on the HLP website.

Planning There is an example of a planning format for secondary teachers, not of English, at the back of this booklet.

NB – whilst this is more an issue for secondary teachers, primary teachers must also ensure a standard in their expectations across the curriculum.

Note Making

This may be one of the most useful skills to teach pupils as good note making can support learning in all sorts of areas. However, left to their own devices, they will copy chunks directly from the text. An idea to start them off - write up a complete sentence on the board. The pupils decide which parts can be rubbed out as they are not essential. What is left are the essential points. Pupils can move onto editing their own and other’s notes using the same format and by underlining non essential parts. Through practice, note taking can be improved but will progress quicker if the teacher revisits how to take notes as part of the introduction.

Overarching Genre : Non fiction

|GENRE |EXAMPLES |EXAMPLES OF POSSIBLE FEATURES |

| |Recipes |Usually in a set order (procedural) |

|INSTRUCTIONS |Games instructions |Often has numbers to follow |

| |How to set up a DVD player |Can have diagrams (labelled) |

| | |Instructions may be in different languages |

| | |Parts may be in bold and/or italics |

| |Leaflet for fun park |Material designed to persuade you to do or buy something |

|PERSUASIVE |Adverts |Designed to catch your interest – layout, wording etc |

| |Posters |Often includes ‘special offers’ |

| |Propaganda |Often has photographs |

| |Some letters |Doesn’t mention any ‘bad’ points |

| |A debate |A piece of writing that gives two or more points of view |

|DISCURSIVE |Some newspaper articles |Begins with a statement of the issue and main argument. |

| |Political viewpoints on same subject |Gives supporting evidence for both sides of argument |

| |Arguments |May use terms such as ‘on the other hand’, however, conversely, yet, although, believe, think, |

| | |alternatively, |

| | |There will be a summary and conclusion in favour of one side |

| |Sports review |Tells about a particular event in detail |

|REPORT |Many newspaper stories |Usually written in order of events |

| |Minutes from meetings |Detailed |

| | |Written in third person |

| | |Usually includes names/details of people |

| |Diary |Written in first person(s) |

|RECOUNT |Autobiography |Often tells personal thoughts, opinions and feelings |

| |Retelling of a particular event |May have date |

| |Newspaper quotations |Often written informally |

| |Some letters |Events may be jumbled up |

| |Atlas |Material containing lots of information in the same format |

|REFERENCE |Phone books |Writing often very small |

| |Timetable |Often in order (can be alphabetical, numerical or similar) |

| |List |Readers looking for limited information |

| |Dictionary | |

| |Thesaurus | |

| |‘How a volcano is formed’ etc |Gives explanation |

|EXPLANATION |Some letters |May have diagrams [labelled] or photographs |

| | |Often set out methodically |

| | |May have sub titles |

| | |Often has a glossary |

| | |Technical language |

| | |Often has complex sentences |

| |Text eg ‘All about India’ |Gives lots of information on a subject |

|INFORMATION |or ‘Crocodiles’ |Often in book form |

| | |Usually has contents and index pages |

| | |Often has a glossary |

| | |May have headings |

| | |Usually about famous people |

|BIOGRAPHY | |Usually an account of their life so far |

| | |May be authorised or unauthorised – which may impact on accuracy |

| | |Usually written in chronological order |

| | |Often includes childhood photographs |

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You will see that self and peer assessment of writing are promoted throughout this booklet. There are also plenty of opportunities for pupils to assess their own and their classmates talking and listening skills. This is all done under the umbrella of formative assessment; that is, using assessment to evaluate learning and to inform next steps in learning.

Teacher assessment of writing should also be primarily formative. There needs to be plenty of pupil/teacher dialogue resulting in both parties being aware of how to improve the pupil’s learning and experiences.

Again listening and talking can and should be included in this process.

Summative assessment. The teacher will also want to keep a running record of how a pupil is progressing in their literacy skills. This can be done easily and effectively if a few pupils are focussed on during every lesson. This may be part of the group that is being led by the teacher, and where talking and listening skills are also easily measured, or it may be one or two who are working independently, and where writing skills and independence can be looked at.

Pupils’ jotters will show a progression of learning.

Formal writing assessments.

Pupils in Highland are still being assessed against the criteria of 5-14 and shall continue to do so until guidance has been issued as part of CfE. Whilst teachers do not need to use the national assessment bank, they need to ensure that pupils continue to show progression in their class writing and that attainment levels match the pupil’s ability.

Remember that writing should be assessed as part of a class lesson and the same approaches to learning and teaching used.

Folio

Pupils should keep examples of their work and the different genres experienced. If the 2 jotter approach (see page 10) is adopted then pupils make simply indicate what pieces they want to form part of their folio {personalisation & choice}. The teacher may also indicate some to be included. All work should show the level of pupil independence.

Copies of the chosen pieces can be marked against the set criteria and retained in the folio.

PLANNING

Over the next few pages you will see an example of how writing planning may be considered in light of the publication of the outcomes and experiences for a CfE. Each level consists of two plans – imaginative/personal and functional. Each plan consist of two pages; the first is more detailed and a second simpler page. Both pages should be copied back to back.

Points to note

▪ The Es and Os indicated at the top of the page will cover more than one stage eg P2-4. It is important that teachers build on what has been taught and experienced in a previous class so it is recommended that planning sheets are continuous i.e. passed on to and used by the next teacher. It is envisaged that only the P1, P2 and P5 teachers begin a new planning sheet.

▪ A colour code is advised to be used against the Es and Os to show where the teacher plans to target the class/group. A simple dot system may be used. See plan.

▪ If an E or O is in bold, it means that it only appears on that particular plan. Es and Os not in bold appear in both plans.

▪ To match the ideals of CfE, most of the plan should be completed by the teacher and should be flexible to allow for addressing the next steps that arise from each lesson OR for missing out aspects that the pupils are found to be very confident OR to take the opportunity to extend a lesson further than was originally planned. This may mean that only a maximum of a half a term is planned for at any one time. An idea may be to miss out lines when planning to add in additional lessons if needed. It should be thought of as a ‘living plan’.

▪ Teachers should refer to the Es and Os at the top of the sheet during any planning to ensure that pupils are given opportunities to widen their experiences.

▪ As the early level covers pre- school as well as P1, the teacher should share planning with the pre-school staff, especially for term 1.

▪ Handwriting and spelling are included within these writing plans although teachers may prefer to use separate plans (please see planning sheets in handwriting and spelling booklets)

▪ Teachers should link their writing plans to their Writer’s craft lessons wherever possible. It may also be possible to link writing to other subject such as topic work.

▪ Remember not all writing needs a pupil’s written plan and that their planning should be varied eventually leading to choice. Planning frames/writing scaffolding sheets should be kept to a minimum.

▪ Teachers may also wish to indicate where self, peer or teacher editing has taken place. Perhaps add SE, PE or TE to indicate the type of editing used.

▪ Home link- If you identify lessons that could be enhanced or learning consolidated or extended through a home link mark them with an H. This may include reading, research, discussion at home or an activity.

• Highland Literacy Project

Primary 1~ CfE Early level IMAGINATIVE & PERSONAL WRITING Class/Group:

| red = early experiences at this level orange= working towards outcomes at this green= establishing and consolidating outcomes and widening experiences at |

|level in a variety of ways. Decreasing level this level. Increasing pupil independence. Text structure, idea & vocabulary |

|of support. more complex. |

|Enjoyment & choice |I enjoy exploring and playing with the patterns & sounds of language & can use what I learn LIT 0-01a/ LIT 0-11a/ LIT 0-20a |

|Tools for writing |I explore letters and words, discovering how they work together, and I can use what I learn to help me as I read or write |

| |ENG 0-12a /LIT 0-13a/ Lit 0-21a |

|Organising & using information |Within real & imaginary situations, I share experiences & feelings, ideas & information in a way that communicates my message LIT 0-26a |

|Creating texts |I enjoy exploring events and characters in stories and other texts and use what I learn to invent my own, sharing these with others in imaginative ways LIT 0-09b/ LIT 0-31a |

|date |Title or topic |Motivation used & details[1] |Main aspects to be introduced (I), |Assess? |Next steps and action[3]: |

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Primary 2-4 ~ CfE First level IMAGINATIVE & PERSONAL WRITING class/group:

| red = early experiences at this level orange= working towards outcomes at this green= establishing and consolidating outcomes and widening experiences at |

|but shows progression from previous level in a variety of ways. Decreasing level this level. Increasing pupil independence. Text structure, idea & vocabulary |

|level. of support. more complex. |

|Enjoyment & choice |I enjoy creating texts of my choice and I regularly select purpose, format and resources to meet the needs of my audiences. LIT 1-20a/2-20a |

|Tools for writing |I can spell the most common words, using my knowledge of letter patterns & spelling rules & use resources to help me spell tricky or unfamiliar words Lit 1-21a |

| |I can write independently, use appropriate punctuation and order and link my sentences in a way that makes sense. LIT 1-22a |

| |Throughout the writing process, I can check that my writing makes sense. LIT 1-23a |

| |I can present my writing in a way that will make it legible and attractive for my reader, combining words, images and other features LIT 1-24a |

|Organising & U sing |I am learning to use my notes & other types of writing to help me understand information & ideas, explore problems, generate ideas or create new text LIT 1-25 |

|information |By considering the type of text I am creating, I can select ideas &relevant information, organise these in a logical sequence & use words which will be interesting and/or useful for |

| |others. LIT 1-26a |

|Creating texts |I can convey information, describe events or processes, share my opinions or persuade my reader in different ways. LIT 1-28a/ LIT 1-29a |

| |I can describe and share my experiences and how they make me feel. ENG 1-30a |

| |Having explored the elements which writer’s use in different genres, I can use what I learn to create my own stories, poems and plays with interesting structures, characters and/or |

| |settings ENG 1-31a |

|date |Title or topic |Motivation used & details[4] |Main aspects to be introduced (I), |Assess? |Next steps and action[6]: |

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Primary 5-7 ~ CfE Second level IMAGINATIVE & PERSONAL WRITING class/group:

| red = early experiences at this level orange= working towards outcomes at this green= establishing and consolidating outcomes and widening experiences at |

|but shows progression from previous level in a variety of ways. Decreasing level this level. Increasing pupil independence. Text structure, idea & vocabulary |

|level. of support. more complex. |

|E & C |I enjoy creating texts of my choice and I regularly select purpose, format and resources to meet the needs of my audiences. LIT 1-20a/2-20a |

|Tools for writing |I can spell the most of the words I need to communicate, using spelling rules, specialist vocabulary, self correction techniques & a range of resources. Lit 2-21a |

| |In both short & extended texts, I can use appropriate punctuation, vary my sentence structures & divide my work into paragraphs in a way that makes sense to my reader. LIT 2-22a |

| |Throughout the writing process, I can check that my writing makes sense & meets its purpose LIT 2-23a |

| |I consider the impact that layout and presentation will have and can combine lettering graphics & other features to engage my reader. LIT 2-24a |

|O & U info |I can use my notes & other types of writing to help me understand info & ideas, explore problems, make decisions, generate & develop ideas or create new text L2-25a |

| |By considering the type of text I am creating, I can select ideas & relevant info, organise these in a way for my purpose & use suitable vocabulary for my audience L2-26a |

|Creating texts |I am learning to use language & style in a way that engages and/or influences my reader. ENG 2-27a |

| |I can convey information, describe events, explain processes or combine ideas in different ways. LIT 2-28a |

| |I can persuade, argue, explore issues or express an opinion using supporting detail and/or evidence LIT 2-29a |

| |As I write for different purposes & readers, I can describe & share my experiences, expressing what they made me think about and how they made me feel. ENG 2-30 a |

| |Having explored the elements which writer’s use in different genres, I can use what I learn to create stories, poems & plays with interesting & appropriate structures, interesting characters |

| |and settings which come to life ENG 2-31a |

|date |Title or topic |Motivation used & details[7] |Main aspects to be introduced (I), |Assess? |Next steps and action[9]: |

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Primary 1~ CfE Early level FUNCTIONAL WRITING class/group:

| red = early experiences at this level orange= working towards outcomes at this green= establishing and consolidating outcomes and widening experiences at |

|level in a variety of ways. Decreasing level this level. Increasing pupil independence. Text structure, idea & vocabulary |

|of support. more complex. |

|Enjoyment & choice |I enjoy exploring and playing with the patterns & sounds of language & can use what I learn LIT 0-01a/ LIT 0-11a/ LIT 0-20a |

|Tools for writing |I explore letters and words, discovering how they work together, and I can use what I learn to help me as I read or write |

| |ENG 0-12a /LIT 0-13a/ Lit 0-21a |

|Organising & using information |Within real & imaginary situations, I share experiences & feelings, ideas & information in a way that communicates my message LIT 0-26a |

|Creating texts |I enjoy exploring events and characters in stories and other texts and use what I learn to invent my own, sharing these with others in imaginative ways LIT 0-09b/ LIT 0-31a |

|date |Genre/type of text/ topic[10] |Model used [11] |Main aspects to be introduced (I), |Assess? How? |Next steps and action: |

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Primary 2-4 ~ CfE First level FUNCTIONAL WRITING class/group:

| red = early experiences at this level orange= working towards outcomes at this green= establishing and consolidating outcomes and widening experiences at |

|but shows progression from previous level in a variety of ways. Decreasing level this level. Increasing pupil independence. Text structure, idea & vocabulary |

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|Enjoyment & choice |I enjoy creating texts of my choice and I regularly select purpose, format and resources to meet the needs of my audiences. LIT 1-20a/2-20a |

|Tools for writing |I can spell the most common words, using my knowledge of letter patterns & spelling rules & use resources to help me spell tricky or unfamiliar words Lit 1-21a |

| |I can write independently, use appropriate punctuation and order and link my sentences in a way that makes sense. LIT 1-22a |

| |Throughout the writing process, I can check that my writing makes sense. LIT 1-23a |

| |I can present my writing in a way that will make it legible and attractive for my reader, combining words, images and other features LIT 1-24a |

|Organising & U sing |I am learning to use my notes & other types of writing to help me understand information & ideas, explore problems, generate ideas or create new text LIT 1-25 |

|information |By considering the type of text I am creating, I can select ideas &relevant information, organise these in a logical sequence & use words which will be interesting and/or useful for |

| |others. LIT 1-26a |

|Creating texts |I can convey information, describe events or processes, share my opinions or persuade my reader in different ways. LIT 1-28a/ LIT 1-29a |

|date |Genre/type of text/ topic[13] |Model used [14] |Main aspects to be introduced (I), |Assess? How? |Next steps and action: |

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Primary 5-7 ~ CfE Second level FUNCTIONAL WRITING class/group:

| red = early experiences at this level orange= working towards outcomes at this green= establishing and consolidating outcomes and widening experiences at |

|but shows progression from previous level in a variety of ways. Decreasing level this level. Increasing pupil independence. Text structure, idea & vocabulary |

|level. of support. more complex. |

|E & C |I enjoy creating texts of my choice and I regularly select purpose, format and resources to meet the needs of my audiences. LIT 1-20a/2-20a |

|Tools for writing |I can spell the most of the words I need to communicate, using spelling rules, specialist vocabulary, self correction techniques & a range of resources. Lit 2-21a |

| |In both short & extended texts, I can use appropriate punctuation, vary my sentence structures & divide my work into paragraphs in a way that makes sense to my reader. LIT 2-22a |

| |Throughout the writing process, I can check that my writing makes sense & meets its purpose LIT 2-23a |

| |I consider the impact that layout and presentation will have and can combine lettering graphics & other features to engage my reader. LIT 2-24a |

|O & U info |I can use my notes & other types of writing to help me understand info & ideas, explore problems, make decisions, generate & develop ideas or create new text L2-25a |

| |I recognise the need to acknowledge my sources & I can do this appropriately LIT 2-25a |

| |By considering the type of text I am creating, I can select ideas & relevant info, organise these in a way for my purpose & use suitable vocabulary for my audience L2-26a |

|Creating texts |I am learning to use language & style in a way that engages and/or influences my reader. ENG 2-27a |

| |I can convey information, describe events, explain processes or combine ideas in different ways. LIT 2-28a |

| |I can persuade, argue, explore issues or express an opinion using supporting detail and/or evidence LIT 2-29a |

| |As I write for different purposes & readers, I can describe & share my experiences, expressing what they made me think about and how they made me feel. ENG 2-30 a |

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Secondary 1-3 ~ CfE Third level FUNCTIONAL WRITING (*ALL subjects) SUBJECT ……………………………

| red = early experiences at this level orange= working towards outcomes at this green= establishing and consolidating outcomes and widening experiences at |

|but shows progression from previous level in a variety of ways. Decreasing level this level. Increasing pupil independence. Text structure, idea & vocabulary |

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|E & C |I enjoy creating texts of my choice and I am developing my own style. I can regularly select subject, purpose, format and resources to suit the needs of my audience. |

| |LIT 3-20a/4-20a |

|Tools for writing |I can use a range of strategies & resources and spell most of the words I need to use, including specialist vocabulary, and ensure that my spelling is accurate.. Lit 3-21a |

| |AS appropriate to my purpose & type of text, I can punctuate and structure different types of sentences with sufficient accuracy & arrange these to make meaning clear, showing straightforward |

| |relationships between paragraphs. , LIT 3-22a/4-22a |

| |Throughout the writing process, I can review & edit my writing to ensure it meets its purpose & communicates meaning at first reading LIT 3-23a |

| |I consider the impact that layout and presentation will have on my reader, selecting & using a variety of features appropriate to purpose & audience.. LIT 3-24a |

|O & U info |I can use notes & other types of writing to generate & develop ideas, retain &recall info, explore problems, make decisions, generate and develop ideas or create original text. L3-25a |

| |I recognise when it is appropriate to quote from sources & when I should pit points into my own words. I can acknowledge my sources appropriately. LIT 3-25a |

| |By considering the type of text I am creating, I can independently select ideas & relevant info for different purposes, and organise essential information or ideas & any supporting detail in a |

| |logical order. I can use suitable vocabulary to communicate effectively with my audience. LIT3-26a/4-26a |

|Creating texts |I can convey information, describe events, explain processes or concepts and combine ideas in different ways. LIT 3-28a |

| |I can persuade, argue, evaluate, explore issues or express an opinion using a clear line of thought, relevant supporting detail and/or evidence LIT 3-29a |

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Highland Literacy Project

Secondary 1-3 ~ CfE Fourth level FUNCTIONAL WRITING (*ALL subjects) SUBJECT ……………………………

| red = early experiences at this level orange= working towards outcomes at this green= establishing and consolidating outcomes and widening experiences at |

|but shows progression from previous level in a variety of ways. Decreasing level this level. Increasing pupil independence. Text structure, idea & vocabulary |

|level. of support. more complex. |

|E & C |I enjoy creating texts of my choice and I am developing my own style. I can regularly select subject, purpose, format and resources to suit the needs of my audience. |

| |LIT 3-20a/4-20a |

|Tools for writing |I can use a range of strategies & resources to ensure that my spelling, including specialist vocabulary, is accurate. Lit 4-21a |

| |As appropriate to my purpose & type of text, I can punctuate and structure different types of sentences with sufficient accuracy & arrange these to make meaning clear, showing straightforward |

| |relationships between paragraphs. , LIT 3-22a/4-22a |

| |Throughout the writing process, I can review & edit my writing independently to ensure it meets its purpose & communicates meaning at first reading LIT 4-23a |

| |I can justify my choice and use of layout and presentation in terms of the intended impact on my reader. LIT 4-24a |

|O & U info |I can use notes & other types of writing to generate & develop ideas, retain &recall info, explore problems, make decisions or create original text. LIT4-25a |

| |I can make appropriate & responsible use of sources, and acknowledge these appropriately. LIT 4-25a |

| |By considering the type of text I am creating, I can independently select ideas & relevant info for different purposes, and organise essential information or ideas & any supporting detail in a |

| |logical order. I can use suitable vocabulary to communicate effectively with my audience. LIT3-26a/4-26a |

|Creating texts |I can convey information, describe events, explain processes or concepts, provide substantiating evidence and synthesise ideas or opinionsin different ways. LIT 4-28a |

| |I can persuade, argue, evaluate, explore issues or express and justify opinions within a convincing line of thought, relevant supporting detail and/or evidence LIT 4-29a |

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IDEAS AND NOTES

MORE IDEAS AND NOTES

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[1] For example WC lesson: extract from Roald Dahl ‘The Twits’ page 40 OR character photographs OR object- old key OR within project context etc.

[2] Aspects such as writing at length, genre, character descriptions, imagery- similes, paragraphs, editing. Indicate in brackets if introduced, practised or extended.

[3] As a result of the lesson, what needs to be taught or consolidated and how this will be done e.g through a mini lesson or writer’s craft lesson.

[4] For example WC lesson: extract from Roald Dahl ‘The Twits’ page 40 OR character photographs OR object- old key OR within project context etc.

[5] Aspects such as writing at length, genre, character descriptions, imagery- similes, paragraphs, editing. Indicate in brackets if introduced, practised or extended.

[6] As a result of the lesson, what needs to be taught or consolidated and how this will be done e.g through a mini lesson or writer’s craft lesson.

[7] For example WC lesson: extract from Roald Dahl ‘The Twits’ page 40 OR character photographs OR object- old key OR within project context etc.

[8] Aspects such as writing at length, genre, character descriptions, imagery- similes, paragraphs, editing. Indicate in brackets if introduced, practised or extended.

[9] As a result of the lesson, what needs to be taught or consolidated and how this will be done e.g through a mini lesson or writer’s craft lesson.

[10] For example: persuasive/poster/school fete.

[11] For example WC lesson: last year’s fete posters OR within project context or storyline etc.

[12] Aspects such as layout or features of that particular genre. Indicate in brackets if introduced, practised or extended.

[13] For example: persuasive/poster/school fete.

[14] For example WC lesson: last year’s fete posters OR within project context or storyline etc.

[15] Aspects such as layout or features of that particular genre. Indicate in brackets if introduced, practised or extended.

[16] For example: persuasive/poster/school fete.

[17] For example WC lesson: last year’s fete posters OR within project context or storyline etc.

[18] Aspects such as layout or features of that particular genre. Indicate in brackets if introduced, practised or extended.

[19] For example: information/poster/features of a river basin[20]

[21] For example variety of real posters etc

[22] Aspects such as layout or features of that particular genre. Indicate in brackets if introduced, practised or extended

[23] For example: information/poster/features of a river basin[24]

[25] For example variety of real posters etc

[26] Aspects such as layout or features of that particular genre. Indicate in brackets if introduced, practised or extended

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Next steps (bf)

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Pupils could be encouraged to ‘borrow’ words, phrases, similes openings, etc and put them in their ‘Best bits Book’.

~ a collection that can be used later.

‘BEST BITS’ BOOK

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