Marking Scheme (Task 5) - TKP

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Marking Scheme (Task 5)

Total: 18 marks

Task completion = 16 marks

Note to markers: Candidates must place the information in the correct section to be awarded a point.

5.1 A state of complete physical, social and mental well-being 17

4/5

5.2 Not merely the absence of disease 17

4/5

5.3 Suitable heading: Top five health issues in Hong Kong 2

4

5.4 Obesity 2

3/4

5.5 Poor dietary choice // Poor food choice 2

3/4

5.6 Mental health (problems) // Mental illnesses 2

3/4

5.7 Overuse of antibiotics 2

3/4

5.8 Suitable heading: Factors affecting health 3

4

5.9 Race 3bo

4/6

5.10 Genes 3bl

4/6

5.11 Sex // Gender 3bm

4/6

5.12 Social class 38 5.13 Education 39 5.14 Lifestyle habits 3bkbn 5.15 Job // Occupation 3bp 5.16 Environment 3bq

4/5 4/5 4/5/6 4/6 4/6

?Correct capitalisation is required for all proper nouns. ?The slash indicates (an) alternative, acceptable word(s)/phrase(s) with an answer. ?The brackets indicate (a) word(s)/phrase(s) which is/are not essential to the answer.

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Task 5: Language (L) = 2 marks

Marks

Language

2

?Able to write simple phrases accurately

?Grammar mainly accurate

?Most common words are spelt accurately

1

?Able to write simple phrases accurately

?Grammatical errors sometimes affect meaning

?Spelling of simple words is accurate

?Spelling of complex words is sometimes inaccurate

0

?Multiple errors in spelling and word usage, which make understanding

impossible

OR

?Not enough evidence in candidate's work to be able to award `1'

?Copying chunks of information from the Data File

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Marking Scheme (Task 6)

Total: 18 marks Task completion = 9 marks

6.1a Much more could be done to improve public health ck

7

6.1b

Hong Kong has made important public health achievements in the last few decades ck

7

6.2a Hong Kong ranks among the best with high life expectancy / lifespan brcl

6.2b Hong Kong has one of the lowest infant mortality rates in the world bscl

6.2c People in Hong Kong have equal access to public health care services cl

Hong Kong's successful childhood immunisation programmes have led to a 6.2d marked decline in infectious and parasitic diseases in the last four decades

clcncocpcqcrcs

3/6/7 6/7 3/7

7/8

Due to the much improved public hygiene / improvement and good maintenance

6.2e in public hygiene, vector-borne diseases, such as malaria, which are still

7/8

endemic in many countries, have become rare in Hong Kong clct

6.2f The number of smokers has fallen significantly in the last 20 years btcl

3/6/7

6.3a Find out more about Hong Kong's public health achievements cm

7

6.3b Visit the website of the Department of Health cm

7

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Mark Allocation Grid Note to markers: The table below indicates the number of marks to be awarded for each section of the task.

Section

Number of correct points

Mark to be awarded

6.1

2

2

1

1

0

0

6.2

6

6

5

5

4

4

3

3

2

2

1

1

0

0

6.3

1?2

1

0

0

Task 6: Language (L) = 5 marks

Marks

Language

5

Data File Manipulation

?Generally successful in adapting and manipulating phrases from the Data

File to create grammatically correct sentences

?Able to adapt sentences through changes in word formation, tense, pronoun,

etc.

Using Own Language

?Able to use a wide range of simple and complex sentence structures

accurately

?Grammar mainly accurate with minor errors but the errors do not affect

overall clarity

?Spelling and punctuation are mostly correct

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4

Data File Manipulation

?Sometimes successful in adapting phrases from the Data File to create

grammatically correct sentences

?Able to adapt sentences most of the time through changes in word formation,

tense, pronoun, etc.

Using Own Language

?Able to use a good range of accurate sentence structures

?Able to use complex sentences accurately

?Grammar mainly accurate with errors occur in complex structures but

overall clarity is not affected

?Spelling and punctuation are sufficiently accurate

3

Data File Manipulation

?Occasionally successful in adapting phrases from the Data File to create

grammatically correct sentences

?Some errors occur because the candidate fails to change the original texts to

suit the requirements of the text that he/she is writing

Using Own Language

?Able to write simple sentence structures accurately

?Occasional attempts are made to use complex sentence structures. However,

his/her sentence structures tend to be repetitive in nature

?Grammatical errors sometimes affect meaning

?Most common words are spelt correctly

?Basic punctuation is accurate

2

Data File Manipulation

?Only a few attempts are made to adapt phrases from the Data File to create

grammatically correct sentences

?The candidate sometimes copies chunks of information from the Data File

Using Own Language

?Short simple sentences are generally accurate

?Only scattered attempts are made to write longer and more complex

sentences

?Grammatical errors often affect meaning

?Spelling of simple words is accurate

?Spelling of complex words is sometimes inaccurate

?Basic punctuation is mostly accurate

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