On the Papers The Imporance of T STreSS: IndIcaTIng The moST …
Now you could hardly mistake what
was most important to me. If I were to
speak the sentence to you, I could empha-
On the Papers
size "lazy" with my voice; but on the page,
The Importa nce of
that emphasis cannot be "heard." It must somehow be made apparent to the eye.
Str ess: Indicating
What if I were to rewrite the sentence like this: The quick brown fox can jump
the Most Importa nt
over the dog because the dog is lazy. Now more than 90 percent of readers
Wor ds in a Sentence
might guess that "laziness" is foremost in my mind. This is a phenomenon peculiar
to the English language.
We value any moment in a sentence
G e o rg e D . G o p e n
when the grammatical structure comes to a full halt. I call such a location the
The author is professor of the practice of rhetoric at Duke University.
"stress position."
A period always accomplishes this
closure; but the same effect is realized by
any properly used colon or semicolon. It
can never be created by a comma, be-
cause there are too many different sig-
Have you heard the advice, "Write the way you speak"? It is bad
actually interpret them correctly. We all understand the importance of making
nals a comma can send. We always have to go beyond a comma to find out what kind of pause it is asking us to make.
advice.
the best possible decisions concerning Commas never signal full syntactic
word choice; but, surprising though it closure.
When you speak--and especially may seem, word location is a far more im-
Here is an example I have used with
when you speak in court--you have a portant tool to master. How can you ma- thousands of students and clients to
number of ways you can demonstrate to nipulate the placement of words to signal teach the efficacy of the stress position:
your listeners which of your words you to your readers when they should be
would like them to emphasize the most. reading a particular term with special
As used in the foundry industry,
You can wave your hands or use body lan- emphasis?
"turnkey" means responsibility for the
guage. You can pronounce a word at a
It would be nice, would it not, if we
satisfactory performance of a piece of
higher decibel level than its neighbors. were allowed to print all such to-be-
equipment in addition to the design,
You can vary your sound--higher or low- emphasized words in red? Take, for ex-
manufacture, and installation of that
er, softer or louder, faster or slower. But ample, the sentence used in teaching typ-
equipment. P et al. agree that this def-
on paper, all these indications of empha- ing: "The quick brown fox jumps over the
inition of turnkey is commonly under-
sis disappear. You are left only with word lazy dog." If I told you there was only one
stood in the foundry industry.
choice and word placement.
word in that sentence uppermost in my
You, being the author, know what you mind at the moment, what would be your
Take a moment to underline any words
wanted to say. You look at your sentence: chances of guessing that word correctly? in these two sentences that you think the
It seems obvious to you how it should be Given that there are seven important- writer might be wanting you to stress.
"performed" by any reader. But an author looking words, your chances would be
When I ask as few as a dozen students
is often the worst person in the world to close to one out of seven, or 15 percent. or clients to do this, all of the following
estimate how others will read a sentence. How would your chances improve if I terms get underlined by someone: found-
It is insufficient for you to construct sen- were to print that word in red? Or even ry industry; turnkey; responsibility; sat-
tences that can be interpreted the way just in all caps?
isfactory performance; design, manufac-
you want. You must construct them so a
The quick brown fox jumps over the ture, and installation; P et al.
huge percentage of your readers will LAZY dog.
Note that "a piece of equipment" fails
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You are your client's to make this list; and yet, that is the term
that occupies the first sentence's sole
design, manufacture, and installation; but the industry also uses the
advocate. Your prose stress position. The author had only one
opportunity to indicate his most signifi-
term to indicate responsibility for its satisfactory performance.
must act as your cant words, and he blew it. As a result, he
left all of us guessing; and in a group of a
Important news: Locating the stress-
advocate. dozen people, almost everyone will
choose a different assortment. Everyone
worthy information of a sentence elsewhere than in a stress position is the sin-
thinks he or she has successfully made
gle most widespread and crippling
sense of the sentence; but often not a sin- information you wish the reader to stress problem in professional English writing
gle person has correctly guessed what always appears in a stress position--next today. Of the 245 MDs and PhDs I have
was in the author's mind. Here is the ex- to a period, colon, or semicolon. (I will re- worked with at a prominent federal agen-
ample again, with his sole intended em- turn to the use of the colon and semicolon cy, only one did not suffer from this epi-
phasis printed in all caps:
in a future article.)
demic problem.
Am I suggesting that if our author had
Most judges will read your brief only
As used in the foundry industry, only transported "satisfactory perfor- once. Are you really content to have them
"turnkey" means responsibility for the mance" to the end of a single sentence, guessing--sentence after sentence--what
SATISFACTORY PERFORMANCE of most readers would have understood his word or words they should be emphasiz-
a piece of equipment in addition to the intentions? Yes. Here is one possibility: ing? You are your client's advocate. Your
design, manufacture, and installation
prose must act as your advocate.
of that equipment. P et al. agree that
As P et al. agree, the foundry industry
This is neither a mechanical nor a cos-
this definition of turnkey is commonly
uses the term "turnkey" to signify re- metic concern. Because it involves the
understood in the foundry industry.
sponsibility not only for the design, core of your thinking in any sentence,
manufacture, and installation of a you can "repair the damage" only by re-
In my experience, in a lecture hall
piece of equipment but also for its sat- entering your thought process and in-
filled with 200 people, no more than four
isfactory performance.
quiring, "What is the most important
will have underlined "satisfactory per-
thing I want to say here?" It is not an easy
formance" and only "satisfactory perfor-
Now more than 90 percent of readers fix. If you habitually put the important
mance." The failure of communication is will get his message.
thing some place other than the stress
that severe.
What if P et al.'s agreement had also position, your habit will persist unless
Note that no term in the second sen- been something worthy of stress? Then you fight against it, consciously and with
tence of the example is in caps. Any such we might create a second stress position, substantial mental energy.
sentence should not be a sentence. Its in- just for that:
Begin by using this new advice as a re-
formation should be tucked into some
vision tactic. Write your sentence as you
other sentence--and not in a stress
P et al. agree: The foundry industry normally would. Then go back and ask
position.
uses the term "turnkey" to signify re- yourself which word or words you would
When is a sentence too short? When it
sponsibility not only for the design, print in red or in caps if allowed to do so.
has no viable candidate for the stress posi-
manufacture, and installation of a Get those words right next to a period,
tion. When is a sentence too long? When it
piece of equipment but also for its sat- colon, or semicolon. Try it. You'll like it.
has more viable candidates for stress posi-
isfactory performance.
So will your readers.
tions than there are stress positions. It
One last concern: When should you
matters not how many words a sentence
What if the other three functions use artificial emphasis--italics, under-
contains. It matters a great deal that the ("design, manufacture, and installation") lining, caps, bold, etc.? Use it whenever
number of stress-worthy terms is the were also worthy of stress? Then we the nature of our grammar makes it
same as the number of stress positions.
might create an additional stress position impossible or awkward to get the em-
You have probably heard the advice, for them:
phatic word next to a colon, semicolon, or
"To make a sentence better, make it short-
period. For examples, see all the itali-
er." Forget it. It is wrong. Here is a good
P et al. agree: The foundry industry cized words in this article. q
replacement for it: To make a sentence as
uses the term "turnkey" to signify re-
good as it can be, make sure that the
sponsibility for a piece of equipment's
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