Peer Edit Sheet - Mrs. Donnelly



Name of Editor: Name of Writer:

Title of Paper:

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Outline Peer Edit Sheet

Mrs. Donnelly and Ms. Walsh/English

1. Read through the entire outline without stopping to make corrections. Does it look like the follows the format during your first read?

2. Now that you’ve read the outline as a whole, look at each individual part.

3. Does it have a purpose and thesis at the top?

Introduction - should contain an attention getter, relevancy, credibility, thesis and a preview in this order.

Does the thesis follow the format of: what, active verb, idea?

What advice would you give for the introduction?

4. Body – This should include a transition sentence at the start of each body.

The main points should be a topic sentence with at least 2 sub points for each and at least 2 pieces of details/analysis for each main point. Each part should be in a complete sentence with citations.

A. First Main Point – Create a Topic Sentence (T) to introduce your first main point

1. Sub Point - 1st Example/Fact (E)

a. Detail/Analysis (A) of the sub point

b. Detail/Analysis (A) of the sub point

2. Sub Point – 2nd Example/Fact (E)

a. Detail/Analysis (A) of the sub point

b. Detail/Analysis (A) of the sub point

Does the body of their outline follow this format?

What advice would you give for the body?

Does all of their evidence support the thesis that has been provided?

5. Ethos, pathos, logos

How do they establish ethos in their speech?

Pathos?

Logos?

6. Conclusion - should contain a restatement of the thesis, summary of the main points, and a final thought.

What advice would you give for the conclusion?

7. Do they have a works cited?

8. Grammar - Subject/verb agreement, pronoun agreement, punctuation, parallelism, words that sound alike.

What grammar errors/spelling errors/punctuation errors should the writer address?

9. What did you like about the speech?

10. What should the writer work on? Explain.

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